I decided that after the heavy influence of being totally immersed in Doom and Doom Slayer, im gonna rewrite pretty much everything. Govert, despite what i want him to be not being finished, is lame. He is not entertaining, he isnt intriguing, he isn't mysterious.
Originally, i wanted him to be some person that gets told what to do and they do it, because theyre the type that just enjoys being told what to do. Kinda like how i like to be. (Wierd, huh)
Then, i was going to write him into a battle maniac, that instantly changes from being friendly to someone attempting the annihilation of a target(in a very cool way, not like some Terminator copy though),but i dont think i could pull it off with such a contrast between the 2 "people" i would have to write him as. I still like Govert, but he isnt really what i think the people want.
Now, im to gonna do something different. The entire story from the beginning. It might be short, i dont know, but the beginning is going to be nearly the same as before.
Im sorry for taking so long just to scrap what i have right now. I'll make it all it's own, different story and combine this story right now into a single chapter. Also i cameo'd my dad as a character, only name-wise tho.