WARNING: THIS IS MY STORY, ORIGINAL CHARACTER AND I MADE HER AND ALL THE CHARACTERS IN HERE MYSELF. There is nothing in here that I have taken from anyone else. Original thought. Please respect that and dont compare my work to anyone else. Critisisim is greatly appreciated though
Rayne stared at the world around her. The blue sky was slowly being taken over by the approaching night. Golden rays of sun shined across the sky. Trees billowed in the ever-so-slight breeze that brought with it the smell of crisp leaves. Her long blue hair danced in the air, flowing about her gray skin. She breathed an unnecessary breath. "Oh, how nice it would be to be able to see the beautiful sun again in all its glory, not it's final wave before the night." Her sparkling red eyes narrowed on the ground, and she turned her cold back to the tender warmth of the disappearing sun.
Rayne was not a human. Not anymore, at least. For the past 400 years she has been a creature of the night. A vampire, those that walk the earth nowadays say. A vampire that feeds on the blood of the humans, the very ones she used to be. She hated humanity, solely because hers was taken away from her. She had been 17 when she was changed, and has been ever since, and will remain to be for the years to come. Her full name was Rayneica Crovosia, but as the centuries went by, she eventually left the name that reminded her of her former life, and took on a new one: Rayne Blackrose. It was simple, but different in its own way. Rayne also had dyed her jet black hair to an electric, dazzling shade of blue. Her eyes were once green, but had now become a startling shade of red. Most people that saw her say that they always see her eyes before her hair. Rayne could care less what they saw, unless they truly wanted to be eaten.
"Ugh…another cloudy night. Great for me, I suppose. Nobodies out on nights like these." Rayne chuckled as she gently leaned against the side of a black porche. She would have been considered a grayscale drawing had it not been for her hair and eyes. She wore a black t-shirt that showed off her curves and black pants that were baggy but still allowed her to run to her full extent that she could. She stared up at the clouds that slowly gathered around the sky above, encasing it in a shawdowy gloom that enhanced the night. Rayne grinned. There would be rain tonight. She thought to herself. Rain always meant the streets would be empty. She could finally get to her home in the city. Rayne always hated traveling back to the city with people about. It just made things more difficult for herself. She took one last look at the serene beauty that was about her. She looked at the ground sadly. This place had once been her home. The home that she had loved so much, the one that she had spent 17 years of her life before she had been changed against her will. Not saying that she didn't enjoy it. But she did miss the life that she had been forced to leave behind. Her eyes looked up and studied and memorized every last detail of the home. It had three stories, and one wall was totally covered in vines. The walls were white, and the dimming glow of the sun that was fading behind the clouds made the walls look golden in color. She sighed, and the turned away from the beautiful home that she had to leave behind.
So tell me what you think!!! I hope you liked it and sorry for the rather harsh opening... -hugs everyone that reads it-