This is my first story so let me know what you think o.k. and please be honest.
Charmed
"curious"
Chapter 1
Hey piper. Who's there? It's me. Who's me? Me Darrel. Oh well where are you? Come to the kitchen. How did you get here? Leo. Leo? Yeah he orbed me here. Where is he? I don't know. He just orbed without saying anything. Darrel replied. Why are you here darrel? Piper asked with curiosity. Oh I'm just here to see pheobe. Is she here? Yeah, she's around. Pheobe where are you? Im up in the attic. Thanks piper.
Hey darrel. Pheobe said. Hi he replied. Pheobe I just wanted to say thanks for you know that whole demon thing. Oh its no problem. She replied. I do it everyday. I'm just glad your on our side again. So what kind of concoction are you making? Darrel asked. It's a vanquishing potion for the shadow demon. Whats that? he asked. It's a demon that travels through shadows. Pheobe answered. I don't even want to know more. Darrel retorted. Well I gotta go. Oh pheobe where's paige? She's not here why? I just wanted here to orb me home. I'll call leo. Leo. Leoo. Pheobe yelled. Did someone call me? Yeah I did. Orb darrel home. Ok. Come on darrel. Bye.
Hey paige. Darrel just needed you to orb him home. Well its to late now. So pheobe what are you doing? Making a vanquishing potion for the shadow demon that's after wyatt. What does he do? "SHE" travels through shadows. This demon is a woman. Yeah according to the elders. Pheobe said. What travels through shadows? Piper asked concerned? The shadow demon. The what? The demon that's after wyatt. What does this demon do piper asked? It travels through shadows according to the elders. Pheobe said.
Yeah and it can also read minds. Said paige. What? They both asked? Well the book says that the shadow demon can also control minds. But get this the only way for this demon to control a mind is if the person has the light of truth in within there shadows. Paige recited. Well how are we supposed to know who has this light? Asked piper. Well the book says that the only one that can see this light is an impath. Guys guess what? Pheobe said. What? they both asked. This morning the elders unbinded my impathy powers.
Why didn't you tells us this earlier? Paige asked. I didn't want you guys to know. Well then I guess you're the one that can see this light. piper said. But the book also says that the impath with the ability to see the light of truth has to use their power of premonition to see this light. Paige said. I don't have premonitions anymore. Pheobe said. You do know leo said just orbing in.
hope you liked it. stay tuned. it gets good in the next chapter. oh I need some advice. should I turn this story into a lemon? let me know in your reviews.