Disclaimer: I don't own naruto, If i did itachi would be a therapist and garaa would have a talkshow
EDIT: I got annoyed with people complaning about mistakes and got microsoft word (I never had it before thats why I had alot of mistakes go figure) anyways with that rectified the rest of the chapters will hopefully not have any mistakes *prays*
"I swear it's true" naruto spat.
"Sure, sure and we're all just going to believe you became a genin over night" shikamaru replied dully
Naruto hung his head in defeat hearing and hearing sakura fawning over sasuke the village idol wasn't helping ether,
That is until the door flung open with a sweating iruka sensei panting he finally recovered and finally said, "Hello class I have some interesting news"
Everyone looked in awe, even sasuke who normally non caring actually paid a bit of attention, yes a bit
iruka sensei spoke up and said "we have a new student" he said with a defeated look "his abilities are a bit unknown no one has actually seen what he's able to do as of yet but hopefully he'll show us what he can do"
just then a black cloaked figure walked in sending chills to about everyone who cared to look at him since all they could see is a glowing red eye like that of a wolf which made everyone on edge, sasuke and naruto mentally flinched and stared
Iruka looking dazed at his apparel finally spoke up "your free to remove your cloak it'd help everyone get used to you and trust you" he said in a warm tone
The boy looked at his sensei in a look of disbelief and finally answered in a dark tone "trust? That's a word I'm not used to"
Everyone was rather shocked not because he talked but because he didn't know what trust was or is for that matter
Iruka thought "this kid seems...Alone if so...maybe He'll get along with naruto" silently smirking to himself he asked "why don't you tell us some of your abilities...oh Right your name-
"Kuro Fukushū that was the name I was given by the people of my village namely the leader, he placed this name on me to remind me...". He replied coldly
"My abilities I'd rather not state at the moment, so I'll leave it at that" he said coldly
naruto shouted OH GREAT ANOTHER SASUKE, GO WE DON"T NEED- in that instance he felt cold steel across his neck "I'm sorry to disappoint but I'm honestly the strongest here I will not be compared with amateurs, although I look forward to training with you but its a fact that I can take all of you down in seconds" kuro stated firmly, just then KI was released by sasuke and kiba
Kiba shouted "OH YEAH! I CAN TAKE YOU DOWN EASY YOU JUST PICKED THE LOSER TO ATTACK!"
Kuro walked over still in his robe not wanting to remove it just yet and stared at kiba with his one red wolf-like eye glaring at him
"If he's the loser of the class you must be on hell of a fighter, because I was going to state that this kid was second to me" he stated in a firm yet annoyed tone
Naruto looked at the boy with a perplexed look and asked "nee, what do you mean I'm second?"
that's when sasuke took in all he could stand and slammed his hands on the desk and stood up "this dope is beneath me and so are you, you may be fast but your nothing compared to me" his gaze showing nothing but hate sakura and ino being the way they are shouted at the same time "yeah like that baka is any better then my saskue" they both glared at each other with anger and sasuke walked up to kuro "I challenge you to a fight right here right now!" iruka was going to protest but realized it might be best to see what he can do against the rookie of the year. Outside sasuke took his stance ready to fight kuro stood there and removed his robe that was covering his body which revealed black hair which covered one oh his eyes and on the outer rim of his other covering his ear which in the middle spiked in a slick back style and at the back went down to his neck along with the sides, he was wearing a black ripped bandanna around his neck and a grayish black shirt which went to his elbows the rest was covered with black fingerless gloves underneath that was gray combat tape(the stuff lee has on his arms)with black pants along with blue sandals he was a bit taller than sasuke and with one visible red eye he looked rather intimidating the rest of the kids on the sidelines the girls cheering on sasuke and booing kuro well except one who was staring at naruto, hinata hyuga was staring at the blonde shinobi with want in her eyes of course want of friendship but she couldn't help stammering and blushing at him, naruto of course noticed her staring and she quickly turned a shade of red and turned away, naruto being confused turned around scratching his head and turned to the battle in front
"Get ready to know your place beneath my feet" sasuke said intimidating which all the girls swooned over, kuro just stood there not going into a stance. Annoyed saskue shouted "what are you waiting for! Attack me!"
"I'm going to give you the first ten shots free" kuro retorted "its only fair since this'll be over afterwards" aggravated sasuke attacked with all his might ending his rain of terror with fire ball jutsu the girls yelled "go sasuke there's no way he's getting up now!"
iruka shocked stood there with a look of disbelief not because of the jutsu he used but that kuro may be hurt or dead but when the smoke cleared he was still standing without a scratch everyone stood there stunned "my turn " he said and summoned his chakra Oakum no yō na ryū no bakuhatsu! He yelled as a black energy blast shot out of his mouth directly at sasuke it was too fast to doge even if he did it covered a huge area by the time he finished his thought process he was engulfed in the jutsu luckily he used enough chakra just to damage him slightly not enough to draw blood
He stood there over sasuke "you can keep trying but that's one of my weaker skills keep trying and you'll be dead in less than a minute" sasuke laid there in shock everyone else stood there in ether amusement or anger
Sakura finally said "how could you do that to sasuke!" kuro looked over at the pink haired kunochi with a stare that made her flinch "he asked to fight me it was his choice not mine"
with that he walked back to the class room when he left a great pressure was dispersing as he entered the classroom naruto stared at the door then sasuke he was happy sasuke was put in his place but at the same time scared of kuro's abilities. In the class room sasuke was glaring at the black haired boy "ahem!" iruka said since today is the day we announce teams it'll be difficult now since kuro has shown up meaning one team will have four members"
"you don't have to" kuro stated I'm fine on my own no offence to any of you BUT sasuke but I don't want everyone getting lazy while I do the work"
"yeah right!" sasuke yelled "you'd just hold me back"
"correction you'd hold me back" he retorted with a cold stare
just then a chunin leaked in and whispered something in Iuka's ear iruka thought "no wonder he's not here" he looked a bit depressed but went on "it seems choji has been moved to a different class so will be able to get an even team
-flashback-
the hokage sat there puffing on his pipe iruka I've made the team list iruka took the list and looked it over
You're going to have hinata naruto and sasuke on a team? Those two hate each other! "yes that's true but it'll help since the new student is a challenge that they'll have to overcome even if that boy relates with them so easily"
"also choji has been removed from the program seems something has happened to him so put kuro with ino and shikamaru"
iruka hazily replied "wouldn't it be easier to have kuro with kakashi?" "no kakashi wants sasuke and to put kuro with sasuke would make things a bit difficult along with naruto that'd just make more of a headache than a team even if eventually it may work out they'd get along but that'd take months" the last team sakura and kiba are like water and oil that wouldn't work" the hokage puffed on his pipe and looked at iruka " I know but if I put her with sasuke she'll only fawn over him if I put her with shikamaru and kuro she'd only hate kuro for what he did to sasuke ether way it wouldn't help the cause so that's why I'm doing it this way, kuro would most likely open up with ino seeing as she's a very talkative person we don't have much of a choice but to do it this way so that we may melt his cold heart"
-flashback end-
"ok team ten will consist of kuro, ino, and shikamaru" iruka stated "WHAT!" ino yelled" I'm with the guy who beat saskue and lazy boy! NOOO"
kuro physically felt a pang in his chest and thought "so...You hate me too..?" he looked down in defeat she looked up to him and felt a pool of guilt in her chest "she calmed herself and said I don't like people hurting my sasuke-kun you may be hot but you not as cool as my sasuke-kun!"
sakura got up and yelled "HE"S NOT YOUR INO PIG" with anger she retorted "HE ISN"T YOURS ETHER BILLBOARD BROW" kuro sat down holding his chest and silently thought
"why do I bother no one here will acknowledge me let alone..." His thoughts we're interrupted with the loud disapproval of sakura and the laughing of ino
"why does SHE get to be on his team" she rhetorically asked iruka rubbed his temples and trying not to let the annoyance get to him said" because after watching you all the only one how wouldn't get wrapped up with sasuke is hinata"
sakura was visibly shaking with anger "how do we know this isn't just a front and when she's alone with him she may try to seduce him! Suddenly a cold spike filled the room
kuro was aggravated "will you shut up! I'm actually glad I'm not on your team, even if they hate me they don't go on and on for 10 minutes about how much contempt they have for someone else
He then looked down at ino and shikamaru "...I Spoke too soon" he then slammed his head on his desk and wished he had been with hinata and naruto "at least I can stand those two" he though
Iruka then looked up and said that they'd be having a group meeting with their jonin so they'd be able to see their friends again as well as tell everyone about themselves "you'll be meeting you instructor here after lunch along with telling them a bit about yourselves before you go out on your own with your instructors" dismissed! As soon as that was said they all dashed for the door. Outside naruto was a bit depressed not being on the same team with sakura but that wouldn't mean he couldn't try and ask her to eat with him right? He ran up to sakura "nee nee sakura-Chan do you want to eat lunch with me?" he asked only to get a glare "no naruto I don't! She yelled "you're even more annoying than kuro" and with that she ran off to try and find saskuke. Just then hinata walked up behind naruto holding a bag of not just one but two bentos clutching them close "n-naruto-kun?" she said softly
The orange clad ninja turned around and smiled "yes hinata?" with that she quickly lost her nerve looking at him just as quickly mustered it up "w..Would y..You want t-to...eat..with M-me?" she stammered blushing all the way through naruto smiled
"of course hinata we are teammates after all" "I can't believe someone actually wants to eat with me she's nice than sakura-Chan but maybe its out of curtsy not out friendship, I need to get back at that teme and get sakura-Chan to see that I'm better then him" he thought using the moment from asking him to eat with her she quickly brought out the other bento and presented it to him. Naruto was wide-eyed, "this...this Is f-for you n-naruto-kun" she whispered shocked he did a double take "really?" he asked in amazement, thinking anything she said would be but jumbled words she nodded, naruto blushed slightly and smiled with kindness in his eyes "thanks a lot hinata" almost passing out when sitting next to him wished that time would freeze so that she could stay like this the both of them forever.
On the roof shikamaru and kuro we're eating while ino was staring at sasuke and boasting about how amazing he is when kuro interjected "he's no different from anyone else and if anything he's like me..In a sense and what do you even know of him anyway?" looking annoyed she answered in an arrogant tone "you're nothing like sasuke-kun! He's amazing smart and, and..." She trailed off sensing something kuro turned over to see naruto next to the window sasuke was in watching as he jumped sasuke ino yelped in anger "he better not hurt my sasuke-kun"
kuro retorted "this is stupid if you care about him so much why don't you just marry him already, you may be pretty to look at but your constant admiration of a guy who doesn't give you the time of day is annoying" he quickly summoned his chakra and jumped off the tower and broke threw the window
ino and shikamaru sat their dumbfounded "did he just call you pretty?" he finally asked ino stood there in a daze blushing realizing this shook her head in disagreement "why would he say that..It seems theirs more to him than I thought, but what was that about?" "got me" shikamaru stated
Inside the building sasuke was tied up and naruto had taken the form of sasuke kuro was standing at the entrance staring at the scene "this isn't what it looks like" he stated hesitantly kuro just stood there looked at both of them and flashed through the hand signs for a henge a all be it different he yelled "Henge!" and became that of a more stylish version of himself with dark blonde hair when he opened his eyes they weren't blood red but a deep blue almost the same as naruto's but his pupils we're still wolf-like they stared in awe, when it was finished he left without a word and upon his return ino was staring like a dog in heat her gaze made kuro feel a warm gentle feeling in his chest
"who might you be?" she asked in the most seductive voice she could muster while shikamaru physically sighed " I'm Kagayaki" he said in a kind tone she swooned at his voice and quickly clung to his arm "what's this...warm Feeling in my chest I've..Never felt it before" he thought not noticing the other problem he had shikamaru quickly turned away and said in a dull tone "kagayaki look down" as he did his blush deepened and yelled "WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!" ino's blush also deepened "it means your physically attracted to me, it must mean I have a chance with sasuke-kun!" he looked at her in utter confusion "why do I bother?" he thought he turned away and quickly calmed himself in doing so incidentally reverted to his normal form in doing so ino yelled in confusion "kuro!"
"...shit" He mentally winced "gomen" he said "I..I just wanted to know what it was like...to Be close to someone" he said in an uncharacteristic yet timid tone "I won't do it again I'm sorry..I didn't mean to upset you" after going from mad to shocked to sad, she finally asked "what do you..Mean? Don't you have a family or friends or even someone you like? At hearing those words he almost broke down remembering the past he tried so hard to forget he looked at her with pain in his eyes as stray tears fell from his eyes "no...I Don't my clan was whipped off the face of the ninja world, I'm all that's left" ino mentally cursed herself for bringing that up "no wonder he never had any family with him...he Is like sasuke..But nicer?"
"I'm sorry" she quickly hugged kuro and he blushed "I-its ok I-ino" he stammered
"hey!"
"hm?"
"you may have tricked me but next time I'll get you back ok?"
he stared in shock more tears formed in his eyes seeing ino in a new light he smiled and finally said "ok ino" and gave her the warmest smile he could
She blushed and quickly stammered "b-but this doesn't mean I like you or anything my heart belongs to sasuke-kun!"
she quickly turned away and went back to her lunch eating in a quickened state
"what...did I do?"? He asked directing his question at shikamaru
Said lazy ninja sat up and looked at him with a confused look "you don't know anything do you?"
kuro quickly shot his gaze down at his feet and said "I don't know anything about...being Around girls or warm feelings all I really remember was pain " he said with a hint of hurt in his voice
shikamaru brushed off the question he had asked and said "if that's really all you know...then Why come here?"
kuro looked dumbfounded and gave his lazy teammate a confused look "I thought...I'd Be safe here was that a bad choice?" he asked after that statement he sighed shikamaru stated dully "no but there are other nations and you just happened to choose the largest...I Find that suspicious"
"...think Of me what you will but..I'm here for similar reason refuge and I'm a leaf nin so that obviously proves my loyalty" with that disappeared after naruto and sasuke
Seeing sakura almost kissing sasuke made kuro realize that had to have been naruto in a burst of speed he grabbed him and ran off, when he stopped they we're close to the area hinata had been.
"what the hell do you think you're doing naruto?" he asked in a blaze of anger and resentment
"I..I just wanted to know what it felt like to be liked" he said huskily
"baka"
"huh?"
"do you honestly think she notices you? All she sees is sasuke the sooner you understand that, you'll see the people right in front of you that care about you!" he said with a feeling of pity
At this point naruto was out of the henge and staring shocked, as well as hinata blushing as deep red to the point of nearly violet
"w-what do you mean?" kuro looked up and noticed hinata turned away twilling her thumbs trying to keep herself for passing out naruto noticing this turns around
"y-you mean hinata?"
feeling stupid for looking up quickly ran back to sakura and sasuke naruto looking rather nervous.
"h-hinata...you...do You want to be my friend?" he asked with a bit of hope in his voice
Not trusting her voice she let out a meep and shook her head with so much vigor it made her dizzy turning around with a deep blush on her face looking at the boy she had felt something for, for ages tears formed in his eyes and gave her the biggest smile he could.
he appeared in time to hear sasuke call sakura annoying, at this kuro was visibly pissed
"uchiha!" he yelled sasuke turned in time to see a fist send him 2 feet back into a tree with a loud crashing sound
sakura just stood there staring at kuro as he walked towards sasuke's twitching body "if I EVER hear you say such things whether its a teammate or not I will forcefully shut you up!" he yelled and turned to sakura with a warm smile sakura's face turned as pink as her hair at this
"it's nice to see you care about someone, but I don't think he's the right guy" he chuckled
"why did you do that?" she asked in a worried tone
"hm...to Put him in his place..And to be honest I can't see a girl in pain it just makes me sick to see someone hurt a girl it makes my blood boil"
she looked down "the-thank you" she said quickly as she ran off to class followed by naruto and hinata both in their own little world talking like nothing else mattered
At that he smiled as the rest of the nin's followed soon after kiba's body language gave off that he was pissed beyond reason that he was talking so casually to hinata, he'd be sure to set him straight later. When his team came forth ino noticed the whole in the tree and asked what happened he flinched and stated
"sasuke was being a jerk..Again I won't put up with him, again if you hate me so be it but I won't let it get to me." he said in a cold tone
ino was confused and angry that he'd hurt sasuke but didn't say anything and walked back to class
"what a pain" both shikamaru and kuro said and walked off to meet their new instructors.
A/N: If you've made it this far and DON"T hate me then..well woooo but eh if you hate the OC well in chapter 15 AND 16 you'll come to hate what I do to him, won't...won't be pretty at all BUT i'm going to do it so that I can work with it a bit easier hell i'm tired of him being so overpowered and I created him -sad face-
