Konnichiwa minna-san! Moon Angel signin' in! Time for me to revise this
story now. The original chapters 1 and 2 have been trashed for several
obvious reasons. I'll start with chapter 3 and move along. Hope you enjoy
this better!
Disclaimer: I do not own Cardcaptor Sakura. The lovely ladies of CLAMP do.
~*Chapter 1*~
~*Going to the Doctor*~
"Hey Sakura... WAKE UP!!" Kero yelled in her face. She was to have a doctor's appointment at 11am, but she had promised Syaoran the other day that she would go with him to his dentist's appointment at 10:30am.
"What?" she slowly opened her eyes and yawned.
"It's 10:25 Sakura!" he told her.
"10:25?! I GOTTA GET READY!!" she jumped up out of the bed and ran around her room. She got into decent clothes, brushed her hair, and went to the bathroom all in a record breaking 2 minutes.
"Sorry Ker!! I got to go!" she ran out of the door and stomped down the stairs. "Hi Dad! Bye Dad! Don't want to be late for my appointment."
"It's okay honey, I'll drive you," Fujitaka offered kindly.
"No thanks. Syaoran and I are walking together," she told him. "He has a dentist appointment and since we go the place we figured we might as well go together."
"Alright then. Good luck," he smiled and bid her farewell.
~*Outside*~
"It's COLD!" Sakura ran over to Syaoran and grabbed his arm.
"Well it *is* the 21st of December," he replied, stroking her hair.
"YAY! And only 4 more days till Christmas!!" she shouted ecstatically.
"That's right," he agreed. "Anything special you want?"
"Yeah. Is there some kind of miracle that can drive Eriol out of this country?" she asked him.
"You read my mind," he replied as he opened the doors to the dentist office. "You can stay in here if you want, but you'd only wait in here for like 5 minutes."
"That's okay. I'm going to go to the torture room," she giggled at her own joke.
"Alrighty then. See you later. I'll be waiting for you in the doctor's, um, waiting room," Syaoran said as he walked into the dentist office.
Sakura sighed as she saw him disappear. She walked down to the doctor's office and opened the icy cold door. When she stepped inside...
"PHEW! This place smells!" Sakura shouted. A few people heard her and looked up but then quickly went back to reading because she gave them all death glares.
She walked over to the desk and told the lady, "I'm here for the appointment at 11."
"Oh yes, Kinomoto Sakura, right?" the lady replied while filing her nails and looking onto the computer. "The doctor will see you momentarily."
"Thank you," she whispered and took a seat nearest the exit door.
~*Meanwhile*~
"Li Syaoran?" a lady popped her head out of the hallway. Syaoran looked up at her as she said, "Follow me."
He got up slowly and managed to make his way to the dentist's room. Or as he calls it, the *real* torture room.
The lady pointed at him to sit down as she walked out of the room. He leaned back in a puke pink chair and listened to the computer, which was playing re-runs of Gilligan's Island.
A man walked over to the computer and clicked on a few things. All of a sudden, Syaoran's whole dental record appeared on the screen. Syaoran cocked his head and looked at the man; he swore it looked like his math teacher.
"Okay Li, let's get started," the man swung his chair around so it was facing his 'patient'. He then got out a bunch of little tools and turned on the light so it was blaring in his face. "Open wide..."
~*Back with Sakura*~
"Kinomoto Sakura," the lady at the desk said. "The doctor will now see you. His room is number 5."
She took a deep breath and walked past the lady at the desk. She opened the door that led into all the rooms.
"Door 1, door 2, door 3, door 4," she counted to herself as she walked down the hallway. "Aha! Here it is! Door 5."
Sakura swung open the door, and there stood in front of her, her most hated doctor. He smiled at her and motioned for her to sit down on the icy cold table. She sat down and immediately began to shiver. 'Holy crap!' She thought to herself. 'I thought outside was cold!'
The doctor noticed she was shivering and decided to speed things up. They ran a few tests including her blood pressure, height, weight, and finally a shot telling the doctor whether she was healthy or not.
"Mmm..." the doctor stared at her blood. "About how long ago did you have pneumonia?"
"About February," she recollected. "May have been March or April. I'm not sure."
"Interesting," he rubbed his chin and called for his nurse. She walked in and then quietly chattered about her blood sample. The doctor shook his head and walked out of the room with it.
"He is going to examine your sample a little more," the young nurse explained, "he thinks you may have pneumonia again."
"Goodie," Sakura said to herself. "Another couple of weeks doing nothing but coughing my brains out and sniffing. Just the kind of way I like to live *my* life."
The doctor then walked back in the room, " Miss Kinomoto, we regret to inform you but it appears you have been diagnosed with..."
~*Back with Syaoran*~
Syaoran opened the door to the waiting room and paid the desk clerk. He tried to sigh, but it only hurt his mouth. He walked out of the room and into the main hallway where he met Sakura.
"So what did they do to you?" she asked him as they walked out of the building.
"Retainer," he managed to lift it up with his tongue and show her. His voice sounded muffled. "What about you."
"If only there was such a thing as a 'time transplant'," she sighed and leaned on him.
"Everybody wishes that," he tried to laugh. "But not all things from South Park are real. So what happened?"
"I'm diagnosed with leukemia," Sakura tried to hold back the tears. "The doctor says the longest I have to live is till Christmas."
Syaoran stopped in his tracks. 'Did she just say she was going to, to DIE? It's not possible. She HAS to be pulling my leg.'
"Are you joking?" he asked her. He caught up with her and wrapped his arms around her waist.
"N-n-no," she began to sob. This had to be the worst thing in the world that could happen to her. She stopped to rub her eyes, and she noticed tears were still falling. She knew he wasn't crying, so she looked up and noticed he was. He sat her down on a bench and hugged her tightly.
"I'm not going to let you die before me," he said soothingly. "No, if we have to, we'll die together."
~*Moon Angel's Notes*~
Oy vey, this chapter was a MESS. There's pretty much no way to fix it, without re-writing the whole thing. (And I don't want to do that). So, yes, I'll admit it's not my proudest work, but as my first *real* fanfic, it's good enough. Ja ne! Moon Angel signin' off!
Disclaimer: I do not own Cardcaptor Sakura. The lovely ladies of CLAMP do.
~*Chapter 1*~
~*Going to the Doctor*~
"Hey Sakura... WAKE UP!!" Kero yelled in her face. She was to have a doctor's appointment at 11am, but she had promised Syaoran the other day that she would go with him to his dentist's appointment at 10:30am.
"What?" she slowly opened her eyes and yawned.
"It's 10:25 Sakura!" he told her.
"10:25?! I GOTTA GET READY!!" she jumped up out of the bed and ran around her room. She got into decent clothes, brushed her hair, and went to the bathroom all in a record breaking 2 minutes.
"Sorry Ker!! I got to go!" she ran out of the door and stomped down the stairs. "Hi Dad! Bye Dad! Don't want to be late for my appointment."
"It's okay honey, I'll drive you," Fujitaka offered kindly.
"No thanks. Syaoran and I are walking together," she told him. "He has a dentist appointment and since we go the place we figured we might as well go together."
"Alright then. Good luck," he smiled and bid her farewell.
~*Outside*~
"It's COLD!" Sakura ran over to Syaoran and grabbed his arm.
"Well it *is* the 21st of December," he replied, stroking her hair.
"YAY! And only 4 more days till Christmas!!" she shouted ecstatically.
"That's right," he agreed. "Anything special you want?"
"Yeah. Is there some kind of miracle that can drive Eriol out of this country?" she asked him.
"You read my mind," he replied as he opened the doors to the dentist office. "You can stay in here if you want, but you'd only wait in here for like 5 minutes."
"That's okay. I'm going to go to the torture room," she giggled at her own joke.
"Alrighty then. See you later. I'll be waiting for you in the doctor's, um, waiting room," Syaoran said as he walked into the dentist office.
Sakura sighed as she saw him disappear. She walked down to the doctor's office and opened the icy cold door. When she stepped inside...
"PHEW! This place smells!" Sakura shouted. A few people heard her and looked up but then quickly went back to reading because she gave them all death glares.
She walked over to the desk and told the lady, "I'm here for the appointment at 11."
"Oh yes, Kinomoto Sakura, right?" the lady replied while filing her nails and looking onto the computer. "The doctor will see you momentarily."
"Thank you," she whispered and took a seat nearest the exit door.
~*Meanwhile*~
"Li Syaoran?" a lady popped her head out of the hallway. Syaoran looked up at her as she said, "Follow me."
He got up slowly and managed to make his way to the dentist's room. Or as he calls it, the *real* torture room.
The lady pointed at him to sit down as she walked out of the room. He leaned back in a puke pink chair and listened to the computer, which was playing re-runs of Gilligan's Island.
A man walked over to the computer and clicked on a few things. All of a sudden, Syaoran's whole dental record appeared on the screen. Syaoran cocked his head and looked at the man; he swore it looked like his math teacher.
"Okay Li, let's get started," the man swung his chair around so it was facing his 'patient'. He then got out a bunch of little tools and turned on the light so it was blaring in his face. "Open wide..."
~*Back with Sakura*~
"Kinomoto Sakura," the lady at the desk said. "The doctor will now see you. His room is number 5."
She took a deep breath and walked past the lady at the desk. She opened the door that led into all the rooms.
"Door 1, door 2, door 3, door 4," she counted to herself as she walked down the hallway. "Aha! Here it is! Door 5."
Sakura swung open the door, and there stood in front of her, her most hated doctor. He smiled at her and motioned for her to sit down on the icy cold table. She sat down and immediately began to shiver. 'Holy crap!' She thought to herself. 'I thought outside was cold!'
The doctor noticed she was shivering and decided to speed things up. They ran a few tests including her blood pressure, height, weight, and finally a shot telling the doctor whether she was healthy or not.
"Mmm..." the doctor stared at her blood. "About how long ago did you have pneumonia?"
"About February," she recollected. "May have been March or April. I'm not sure."
"Interesting," he rubbed his chin and called for his nurse. She walked in and then quietly chattered about her blood sample. The doctor shook his head and walked out of the room with it.
"He is going to examine your sample a little more," the young nurse explained, "he thinks you may have pneumonia again."
"Goodie," Sakura said to herself. "Another couple of weeks doing nothing but coughing my brains out and sniffing. Just the kind of way I like to live *my* life."
The doctor then walked back in the room, " Miss Kinomoto, we regret to inform you but it appears you have been diagnosed with..."
~*Back with Syaoran*~
Syaoran opened the door to the waiting room and paid the desk clerk. He tried to sigh, but it only hurt his mouth. He walked out of the room and into the main hallway where he met Sakura.
"So what did they do to you?" she asked him as they walked out of the building.
"Retainer," he managed to lift it up with his tongue and show her. His voice sounded muffled. "What about you."
"If only there was such a thing as a 'time transplant'," she sighed and leaned on him.
"Everybody wishes that," he tried to laugh. "But not all things from South Park are real. So what happened?"
"I'm diagnosed with leukemia," Sakura tried to hold back the tears. "The doctor says the longest I have to live is till Christmas."
Syaoran stopped in his tracks. 'Did she just say she was going to, to DIE? It's not possible. She HAS to be pulling my leg.'
"Are you joking?" he asked her. He caught up with her and wrapped his arms around her waist.
"N-n-no," she began to sob. This had to be the worst thing in the world that could happen to her. She stopped to rub her eyes, and she noticed tears were still falling. She knew he wasn't crying, so she looked up and noticed he was. He sat her down on a bench and hugged her tightly.
"I'm not going to let you die before me," he said soothingly. "No, if we have to, we'll die together."
~*Moon Angel's Notes*~
Oy vey, this chapter was a MESS. There's pretty much no way to fix it, without re-writing the whole thing. (And I don't want to do that). So, yes, I'll admit it's not my proudest work, but as my first *real* fanfic, it's good enough. Ja ne! Moon Angel signin' off!