Heres chapter 1 please tell me if you think it reminds you of overlord or not
The Overlord
The Tale of Overlord Hanzo
Chapter One
The Awakening
Darkness. All he could feel and see was darkness. At first he thought it was a dream, a dark and nasty one until something poked his
forehead "Mastah?" His eyes opened and he took in what he could see a brown gremlin was poking his forhead "You home mastah?" he
sat up grabbing the brown by his neck "What the hell did i say about bothering me while i slept Giblet!" he throttled the minion back and
forth before finally flinging him across the room where he skidded to a halt by Gnarl "Now what is it Gnarl!" Gnarl smiled and clacked his
teeth together "Sire we are sorry to disturb you but your dark imposingness is requested in the throne room." Hanzo sat on the edge of
the bed only waering his gauntlets "Get my armor Giblet." he stood up and walked over to the ledge overlooking the netherworld. He
waited until he heard the clunk of armor as Giblet and several other browns carried his armor into the room "He held his arms up and
spread his legs as the minions went to work strapping the armor into place "Gnarl what is so urgent you woke me up from my slumber?"
Gnarl walked up behind him "We have a minor problem sire...we lost two of the hives..." Giblet finished up by placing the helmet upon
his lords head. Hanzo turned looking at Gnarl his eyes burning with anger "And how did this happen!" Gnarl turned walking slowly for the
stairs leading to the throne room "It happened last night sire, we don't know who or why they only took two but all we have left are the
browns and greens sire, the rest ran off in search of thier hives." Hanzo walked beside him as they descended the stairs "Then why are
we going to the throne room when i should be out searching for clues Gnarl you waste my time!" Gnarl hit the bottom step of the first set
of stairs "But sire that's just it, you have an audience with someone who saw one of the hives." Hanzo looked at him "How do we know he
speaks the truth." Gnarl laughed "I had Giblet drag him to the forge and threaten to throw him in if he didn't swear he wasn't lying." Hanzo
smiled behind his helmet "Good work Gnarl." the two descended the last set of stairs and Hanzo took his rightful place on the throne
lounging comfortably as he awaited the man to be brought in.
The man trembled as he was pushed towards the throne and forced to kneel "So you saw one of my hives have you?" the man stuttered
before composing himself "Yes m'lord they loaded into onto a boat." Hanzo stood up "A boat whats the name of the port?" the man
looked at him "Heavens Port...even though Heavens peak has long been destroyed by previous dark lords." Hanzo walked up grabbing
him by the throat "Where did the boat go?" the man coughed and sputtered trying to breath "I dont know you would have to ask the
docking master!" Hanzo dropped him as the portal gate opened taking the man away. Hanzo turned to see Giblet staring at him "What is
it Giblet." Giblet bounced up and down "Giblet brought the mastah his weapons Yey!" Hanzo sighed and nodded "Very good Giblet ZAP!
BLAZE! STENCH! JEFFY! CRUNCH! GET YOU ASSES IN HERE!" Gnarl stepped forward "Sire I'm sorry to re-inform you but even
thought Zap and Blaze were part of the Special Minion Forces they ran off after their hives as well." Hanzo sighed "Of course the little
maggots." Gnarl laughed "Flattery wont bring them back lord." Hanzo sat on his throne waiting for the other minions to arrive. Jeffy was
a brown minion and close friend of Giblets though perhaps even less bright, he ran in dragging a large battle axe behind him sending
sparks up into the air "Mastah i brought you axe now you choppy things into bits!" he had barley finished his sentence when he was
sent sprawling forward by Crunch the biggest green in his hoard who was carrying his twin swords "Jeffy move or Crunch move Jeffy
Heeheehee." Jeffy got up and shoved Crunch "You weak as sheepy Crunch!" further argument was stopped as Hanzo kicked Crunch
across the room and backhanded Jeffy "Enough you two now wheres that damn jester i need him to fetch me my mace QUAVER!" he
heard a loud giggling as his mace rolled down the stairs rolling to his feet "For you all might one!" Hanzo picked the mace up and
hefted it 'Quaver get down here so i can beat the shit out of you." Quaver laughed louder "But sire i meant you no harm." Hanzo smiled
behind his helmet as he realized Quaver had changed postion...to directly behind him. Hanzo turned and took two quick steps forward
punting Quaver up into the air, Giblet and the others watched him fly across the room and land out on the balcony "Good kick mastah!"
Giblet jumped up and down as Hanzo colledt his swords and strapped them onto his sides before picking up his axe and strapping the
mace to his back "Ok Gnarl can my portal take me to this Port or am i going to have to walk there?" Gnarl walked to his side "Sorry my
lord But youll have to go to a gate near there.....Grubby has made gate leading to forest just outside Heavens Port...its called Hells forest
it was only recently discovered when a group of elves attempting to find more "Fluffy things to save" were killed by the forests local
creatures which dislike fluffy. The forest is home to many trolls, and orc tribes..nothing you cant smash into bloody peices eh my
lord?" Hanzo allowed himself to laugh "Minions!" Giblet and company jumped into formation "Yes masta!?" Hanzo turned to them "I want
you to rush back to your minion gates and wait for me to summon you be ready to destroy!" the minions cheered happily and ran out
onto the balcony and onto the platform that would take them to the minion burrows. Hanzo turned "I'm off to cause some delightful chaos
Gnarl." he walked to the portal stepping into it "Is it set to take me there already?" Gnarl nodded and watched as he disappeared into the
darkness.
Hanzo opened his eyes as he appeared at the other end of the portal, he quickly took in his surroundings. It was a pine forest some of the trees
were far apart and others tightly close together, just down in front of the waypoint was the minion spawn pits the Brown and Greens were alight
and ready for spawning. Hanzo walked over to the browns pit and held his hand out summoning 20 of them, Giblet sat in front of the group Jeffy
slightly behind him "We ready to smash thingys masta!" Hanzo turned and summoned crunch and 5 more greens when Gnarl rang in his head "Not
summoning a full force sire?" Hanzo sighed "Yes Gnarl i would rather breeze through this forest without alerting every damn Orc tribe in the area."
Gnarl laughed "Of course sire." Overlord walked forward looking around "Crunch take your group and go scout out the way we need to go Browns
follow me i smell orc." Giblet and Jeffy ran ahead of the group as the swept through the forest like a pack of golems Hanzo finally stopped them in
front of a large hedge of bushes "Would you idiots keep it down your being nosier than when Gnarl snores!" a brown in the back piped up "But sire
we only want to smash thingies." Hanzo growled "Which we will when we find something to smash now move so i can lead this herd of
wildebeests!" he took several steps forward his browns on his heels. As he and the browns went to step through the hedge Crunch and his group
appeared in a tree "Mastah dont go that.." Hanzo turned to look ut was sent head over heel as he fell down the hillside. Hanzo hit the bottom
samshing his head into a rock realizing only then had his helmet fell off sinking into the sweet darkness.
Well hope you enjoyed it as much as me