Fourth wall breaking
Normal talking
SCREAMING
Alleyway
Close to a popular arcade in town there was a alleyway. Most people would think that a alleyway was nothing special, but if they looked inside they would see a black gunk inside a dumpster while taking the form of a radioactive spider. This may not seem like it, but one of earths greatest heroes will be born in this spot.
Dusk High School
In a classroom at Dusk High there was a boy with a average looking face and a average outfit, this boy is none other than Makoto Naegi. Who was currently struggling to stay awake in science class. He then turned to the audience and and the background froze. "Hi my name is Makoto Naegi. I go to Dusk High School, a pretty average school in japan, and just like the high school I'm also average. I'm the type of person that people tend to forget, heck I'm so average that when I came here people I had known since the seventh grade all of a sudden forgot my existence. I've never really had anything special about me, I've had hobbies and stuff but not anything that great. Yeah that's pretty much my story, well I should let this fanfic continue". Said Makoto as he broke the fourth wall and the background continued to move.
"Makoto can you tell the class what the length of the third side of the triangle" said the teacher, who saw Makoto sleeping.
"Um is it 24" asked Makoto. The teacher just sighed and rubbed her eyes in frustration while the rest of the class laughed.
"No Makoto it's not the correct answer, can you help him Daniel" the teacher asked a kid in the front.
"It's 54" said the side character.
"Correct, now lets move onto the next lesson" said the teacher. Makoto glanced at the clock and saw that he still had about 53 more minutes of class left. He eventually fell asleep and after those 53 minutes of sleeping, the bell woke him up from his nap. Since it was the end of school he decided to walk straight home since he didn't feel like staying at school any longer than he had to. While walking home he noticed that he was bowfin followed by someone. He then looked in a mirror and saw in the reflection that he was being followed by a big blonde haired guy with a football jacket.
"Oh great he followed me. In case you didn't know this is my long time bully since elementary school Flash Thompson. We're basically polar opposites, me being average and not really noticeable, and Flash being the most athletic and noticeable guy at school, at least that's what all the college scouts say about him" said Makoto, breaking the fourth wall once again.
"Sup dweeb where you off to" asked Flash in a cocky tone.
"I don't need to tell you" said Makoto. Flash then grabbed Makoto by the collar of his jacket and pushed up against the wall.
"You think you can just talk to me like that can't you huh nerd. Oh well not like it matters because guess what, I'm going to Hopes Peak as the Super High School Level Football Player" said Flash. Makoto's eyes widened as he recalled the name Hopes Peak in his head. He knew it was a really incredible school for talented people in all areas like writing, cooking, sports, and many other amazing talents. The fact that Flash was going made Makoto feel jealous of him. Flash always made fun of him and bullied him for not being talented and begin incredibly ordinary, while he was the most popular and athletic guy in school.
"How did you get in. That place is for the most talented people in the world" said Makoto.
"I guess they finally noticed my awesome talent and athleticism and invited me to join. About damn time they took notice of me" said Flash with the same cocky tone in his voice, now sporting a cocky grin on his face as well. "Well I'm leaving now, I have a part being thrown in my honor, see you never dweeb" said Flash as he walked off.
"How the hell could a guy like him get into Hopes Peak" said Makoto with disgust as he dusted himself off and and walked to his house, in a really bad mood. He made it home and saw that his parents weren't there yet. He always wondered where his parents were at since they would sometimes go missing in the middle of the day and night.
"Komaru, Madoko are you guys here yet" Makoto yelled out. When he got no answer he knew that he was the first to get home. Not wanting to be at home by himelsef he decided to go to a arcade he knew about in the city. He grabbed some money from his secret hiding place in the drawer and left.
Arcade
Makoto was having a really bad day so far. First the situation with Flash, next a guy steals 20 dollars from him, and then he lost most of his remaining money on playing the games with prizes no one actually won. He was about to go home, until a girl wearing a simple white shirt and strawberry colored hair known as Chikai ran up to him.
"Hi Masato you like coming to this arcade too, and where did your glasses go. Also why did your hair changed too" asked Chiaki.
"Oh Masato is my brother, my name is Makoto Naegi, I'm his little brother Makoto Naegi" said Makoto. Chiaki's eyes widened only a little, but Makoto could still tell she was shocked.
"Yeah this girl confusing me for Masato is something I've gotten used too. Masato is my older brother, he's also the Super High School Level Street Fighter of Hoeps Peak so he's also a lot more talented than me. He used to fight Flash off for me since I'm to weak to do it, he helped me out in a lot of situations" Makoto told the audience.
"Wait your his brother Makoto right, he said you hair was really pointy. You guys look very similar. Except for you hair, and he has glasses, and his face is a little more masculine" said the girl. Makoto didn't feel offended by that comment since he knew that he looked like his dad, but he also inherited looks from his mom too, while Masato was a spitting image of his dad.
"Yeah I get that a lot, so your one of his friends at Hopes Peak" said Makoto.
"Yes my name is Chiaki Nanami and I'm the Super High School Level Gamer, it's nice to meet you" said Chiaki.
"Yeah it's nice to meet you too" said Makoto. "He said my hairs spiky, well he's not wrong" said Makoto as he touched his ahoge.
"Yeah he said your hair was like an antenna. He also talks about how optimistic you are" said Chiaki.
"Really he said that, well I mean I guess my optimism is the only thing I have going for me. I'm pretty average as you can tell" said Makoto.
"Well I mean average isn't always a bad thing. I think having a average person as a friend is a good thing" said Chiaki.
"Really, you mean that" asked Makoto.
"Yeah I mean at Hopes Peak it's always filled with people with different personalities. It's fun but all those personalities can be tiring to be with, so someone normal isn't a bad thing" said Chiaki. Makoto was happy that Masato had such great friends, but was jealous for some reason that he was so close to Chiaki. Just then a arm wrapped around Chikaki's waist and pulled her into the body the arm belonged too. The arm belonged to none other than Flash.
"What's a hottie like you doing with a talentless loser like Nerdegi" said Flash.
"Get you arm off me jerk" said Chiaki as she pulled Flash's arm off her waist and threw it at his chest.
"Listen you really don't want to turn me down, I'm going to Hopes Peak next year so I'm basically a celebrity" said Flash.
"Leave her alone Flash if she doesn't want to go with you then she doesn't have too" said Makoto.
"Shut up Nerdegi, you can't fucking tell me what I can and can't do" said Flash as he grabbed Makoto by the collar.
"Go ahead and hit me, I don't think Hopes Peak would like having one of their future students assault a person" said Makoto. Flash looked as if he was about to explode from sheer anger, but he calmed himself down and walked away from the two. Makoto and Chiaki decided to leave the arcade and Makoto gave Chiaki his phone number.
"Thank you Makoto, that guy was a big jerk" said Chiaki.
"No problem, besides it's not my first time around Flash. It's just my first time standing up to him like that" said Makoto.
"Yeah but you handled it pretty well Makoto. You should believe in yourself more. If you can stand up to a guy like him for a person you just met, them you should have no problem standing up for yourself" said Chiaki.
"Yeah I guess your right" said Makoto. He noticed that Chikai was shivering from the cold and took off his jacket.
"Hey Chiaki you look cold, here have my jacket" said Makoto as he handed her his usual green jacket.
"But don't you need it" asked Chiaki.
"It's actually not that cold for me, besides you look like your freezing so it's fine" said Makoto.
"Thank you Makoto" said Chiaki as she put on his jacket, which fit perfectly since they were roughly the same height.
"Well I better get home, see you Chiaki" said Makoto as he turned and walked away. Chiaki pulled out her phone and named Makoto MN with different colored hearts around his name. She was blushing wondering if it was alright, but decided to do it anyways.
Alleyway
Makoto was walking home, smiling after having met Chiaki. He was walking home, until he heard a sound come from the alleyway to his left.
"Um hello is someone in there" asked Makoto being the good person he is. He decidedly to walk into the alleyway to see what the noise was. He looked inside the dumpster and saw only garbage and a tiny black spider in there.
"Oh I guess there's only a spider in here" said Makoto as he reached out to poke the spider, but the spider jumped onto his arm and bit him. Makoto didn't really feel any pain, it felt like someone pinched him rather than bit him.
"I was expecting something a little more painful, but alright". He was about to place the spider back in the dumpster, but looked at it and realised it had died.
"How did it die just by biting me" Makoto asked himself as he placed the spider inside the dumpster and left.
Hopes Peak
Masato was in his classroom, talking to his class who all had their own piece of missing work to do. Masato sat next to Fuyuhiko since he and him had the same missing assignment. He then noticed the door open and saw his best friend Chiaki walk in, wearing a familiar article of clothing.
"Hey Chiaki where'd you get that jacket from" asked Masato as Chiaki placed her phone to charge next to another phone that was charging at the time.
"Woah Chiaki isn't wearing her usual cat jacket, that's weird" said Mahiru.
"Yeah I'm used to seeing you with your cat hoodie so what happened" asked Hiyoko.
"My jacket is drying and the machines broke, and I actually got this jacket from your brother Makoto when I met him at the arcade" said Chiaki. Everyone's heads shot up in shock since they had heard about Makoto's brother before, but had never met him.
"You met Masato's brother. So what was he like" asked Imposter.
"Yeah his hair really was like an antenna and he's really nice and sweet, I would have talked to him more but this jerk with blonde hair and a dumb football jacket walked up to us and started harassing us" said Chiaki. Masato's face then darkened once he heard the description of the guy.
"That's terrible Chiaki, did he hurt you" asked Chisa.
"No he didnt, but he kept on picking on Makoto" said Chiaki.
"Flash is still bothering him, I thought he would have stopped after all those times back in middle school" said Masato.
"Who's Flash, and why does he bother your brother a lot" asked Kazuichi.
"He's this guy who bullies Makoto a lot. I used to fight him regularly so he would leave Makoto alone, he's actually the reason I became the Super High School Level Street Fighter" said Masato.
"Wait seriously, this is the guy who made you get into fighting and stuff" said Hiyoko.
"Yeah back in elementary school he'd always bully Makoto, and whenever he'd tried to stand up for himself he couldn't, Flash was the strongest kid in school, until I started fighting and eventually I became the strongest" Masato explained.
"So you became the Super High School Level Street Fighter to protect him, that's really sweet" said Sonia, causing Masato to let out a tiny blush.
"Yeah and it worked. Flash left him alone afterwards, but there was always a issue when it came to me protecting Makoto" said Masato.
"Is it your age difference" asked Fuyuhiko.
"Yeah it is, I'm a year ahead of Makoto so when I graduated elementary Flash continued to bully Makoto. Then I left for High School and it started all over again. And again when I left for Hopes Peak" said Masato.
"That sucks, it sounds like Makoto has it rough" said Akane.
"Yeah he does, Flash always teases him for being so normal. Well more normal than everyone else" said Masato.
"It's true he looks pretty average" said Chiaki.
"Yeah and like I said before Flash was the most athletic guy in school, and the most popular. He played football better than anyone else in the school" said Masato.
"There's also something else, Flash is coming to Hopes Peak" said Chiaki.
"Wait he's coming here. Why would they do that he's the worst person to allow to come into this school" said Masato.
"It's true, he walked up to me and tied to flirt with me by saying he was going to Hopes Peak as the Super High School Level Football Player" said Chiaki. Masato was seething with anger, wondering why a school like Hopes Peak would take in someone like Flash. The only person who noticed was his good friend, and secret crush Sonia, who put her hand on his and got him to calm down.
"So what happened next Chiaki" asked Masato.
"Makoto stood up for me and stoped Flash from trying to do anything bad to me" said Chiaki.
"Wait he actually stood up to Flash, and it worked. He's never done that before" said Masato with shock.
"Well it sounds like he just did. Your brother sounds awesome as hell" said Fuyuhiko.
"YEAH YOUR BROTHER SOUNDS LIKE HE'S THE SHIT" said Nekomaru. The shock that Masato had on his face was now replaced with a smile.
"Yeah he really is isn't he" said Masato, not realising he technically called his brother shit.
"Wait so why do you have his jacket" asked Kazuichi.
"Oh it was cold so he gave it to me" said Chiaki.
"Wow a gentleman too, why can't he come to Hopes Peak instead" said Mahiru.
"Yeah he sounds a whole lot better than most of the guys here" said Akane, causing Teruteru and Kazuichi to sulk in their seats.
"Oh so our innocent little Chiaki is having a secret relationship with the brother of our own resident fighter. Ibuki can't believe such a scandal is happening right before Ibuki's eyes" said Ibuki.
"What no he just gave it to me because it was cold, nothing else" said Chiaki with a blush on her face.
"Hey Chiaki who's MN" asked Nagito. Chiaki immediately ran over to her phone and threw it across the room.
"Chiaki why'd you do that for" asked Chisa. Chiaki's face was beet red and she was stuttering and couldn't form sentences.
"Well I went to check my phone and noticed Chiaki's phone had a text from a person named MN with hearts in his name" said Nagito.
"So it's not Makoto, but a different boy who you have a interest in" said Mahiru.
"The marvelous hope will be born from this relationship is magnificent" said Nagito going on another rant about Hope. Masato knew that MN was Makoto, but decided not to say anything and see where this went.
A Couple Months Later
Makoto was incredibly confused now. Flash had left him alone for months now, he didn't even pay any attention to him at all. He didn't want to jinx himself though so he didn't think about it too much.
"Okay so Flash might be in a really good mood and chose to spare me that's cool. It's summer too so I might not have to worry about him that much". Makoto continued walking towards his house, still looking out for Flash in case he was following him. He then heared a scream and noticed a burning building. He ran over to it and saw a group of people already there.
"Excuse me sir what's going on" Makoto asked a man from the crowd.
"I don't know what the hell's going on. I was walking by and all of a sudden this fire started and people were running out one by one trying to escape" said the man. Makoto heared a scream coming from inside the building, but noticed none of the firefighters were going in. He noticed the scream was of a young girl, and it sounded like she was going to die from inhaling to much smoke.
"Sir there's still a child in there, can't you hear her" Makoto asked the firefighters.
"We don't hear anything, and everyone is here and accounted for. Your just hearing things" said the chief. Makoto turned back around and prepared to leave, until a picture of his little brother Madoko flashed through his head.
"Sorry mom and dad, but you guys would do the same thing". Makoto then turned back around and ran right into the fire. He heared screams coming from the fire fighters telling him to stop, but he didn't. He couldn't. He felt like he had to do this, like something inside him was telling him to save the girl. He ran through the burning fire. He still heared the girl, he could hear her getting closer and closer each step he took forward.
"Some one please help me, I want to go home" yelled the girl. He felt something and immediately moved out of the way, barley avoiding a support beam falling right on top of him.
"Okay I'm pretty sure I'm not supposed to be able to do that". Makoto was shocked he avoided that, and that he knew how to avoid it. He then was snapped back in to reality by the screaming. He heared it coming from under a big piece of wood. He saw a green haired girl lying on the ground, crying and trying to lift the wood off of her. She eventually passed out from inhaling to much smoke.
"It's okay you'll be fine, I'll help you" said Makoto as he reached out and grabbed the wood. He was expecting it to be heavy, but it weighed almost nothing at all. He then picked up the little girl and ran out of the building, jumping over debris and ducking under tilted walls and other debris blocking his path. He saw the exit and jumped out with the girl in his arms. He landed on his feet with no problem at all. He heared cheers and applause coming from all directions. The chief from earlier walked up to him and knelt dome to his level.
"Young man I'm sorry I didn't listen to you. I'm happy you saved that girl, but please don't do anything that reckless again" said the chief of the fire fighters. Makoto nodded and walked towards the ambulance where they drove him and the girl to the hospital.
Hopes Peak
"Hey Masato can you help me out with this side of the room. There's a lot of pieces of wall over here" said Kazuichi.
"Yeah sure no problem" said Masato as he was walking over to the mechanic. Masato and the rest of the class were cleaning up the classroom after one of Akane and Nekomaru's fights. The only reason Masato didn't get involved was because Sonia asked him not to, and he couldn't say no to her so he had no choice but to stop.
"Masato can I talk to you in the hallway for a second, it is really important" said Chisa. Masato nodded and he and Chisa walked to the hallway outside of class.
"So what did you want to talk about Ms.Yukizome" asked Masato.
"It's your brother Makoto. He saved a young girl from a fire, he's perfectly fine but he won't leave until he knows if the girl it okay. Your parents asked if I could take you there" said Chisa.
"Wait really, okay then let's go" said Masato as he and Chisa walked towards her car and drove to the hospital near the school.
HospitalIn the hallway of a hospital located near Hopes Peak was Makoto, waiting to find out what happened to the girl who was in the fire. He also took the time to think about what he did in there, and his sudden increased athleticism and heightened instincts.
"Okay I'm sure it was just adrenaline at the time, it happens to a lot of people in these types of situations". Makoto thought about it a little more, until he noticed his brother walking towards him, with a woman he didn't know walking behind him.
"Hey Makoto are you alright, you shouldn't have run into that fire you know" said Masato.
"Yeah I know Masato, but no one else was helping her so I decided to do it" said Makoto.
"Alright I guess that's acceptable. Hey you should move to the side I think moms going to do another one of her tackle hugs again" said Masato pointing behind him. Makoto turned around and saw his mother and father in the hallway and his mother running at him with tears in her eyes.
"Oh crap".
"MY BABY BOY" said his mother Celia as she tackled him to the ground. She cried and held him tightly, causing him to not be able to breath.
"My mom really needs to learn her own limits". Makoto's father Mikoto then walked up to them and pulled Celia off of Makoto.
"Celia I know you were worried, but he's fine. Also you were hurting him with your tight hug" said Mikoto.
"More like a bear hug". Makoto's little sister Komaru and little brother Madoko then ran up to him and began to tell him how cool he was for saving that girl from the fire. He was both embarrassed and confused. He felt embarrassed that his family was making such a big scene in a hospital, and confused as to why his parents weren't mad at him.
"Hey Masato who's that woman you were walking in with" asked Makoto, Celia immediately turned around and ran towards Masato with speeds that were thought to be impossible.
"A woman, do you have a girlfriend, what's her name, when can I meet her, have you been doing inappropriate stuff, ANSWER ME MASATO" said Celia with her face right in Masato's. Masato was blushing from embarrassment that didn't really fit the SHSL Street Fighter.
"No mom she's my teacher Ms.Yukizome" said Masato. Celia then backed away satisfied with the answer. Just then Mikan walked out of the room the girl was in and was surprised to see Masato there.
"M-M-Masato what are y-y-you doing here" asked Mikan.
"My brothers the one who saved the girl. He wanted to know if she was alright" said Masato.
"S-S-She's in that d-d-door" said Mikan pointing to the door behind her. Makoto walked in and saw the girl laying in the hospital bed. Makoto heard from one of the doctors that the girl was now paralyzed and couldn't walk.
"Oh hello who are you" asked the girl.
"My name is Makoto Naegi. I wanted to see if you were alright" said Makoto.
"Your the person who saved me from the fire. Thank you by the way" said the little girl.
"It was no problem, but I never got your name" said Makoto.
"Oh Monica's name is Monaca. It's nice to meet you" said the girl. Makoto and the girl started talking more and more and Monaca was definitely a lot happier then before.
"So Monaca where are your parents" asked Makoto. Monaca's face saddened once she heared those words.
"They don't like Monaca. Their meanies and they always hurt me. Me and my friend Masaru ran away together to avoid our mean parents, but something happened and his hands lit on fire and he accidentally started a big fire" said Monaca. Makoto was shocked by what she said. He knew not all parents were good to their children, but Monaca was a nice girl who liked simple things. He was also shocked that a boy lit his hands on fire. At first he thought it was impossible, until he remembered what he did in the building and its started to seem less impossible.
"Well then do you know where your friend is" asked Makoto.
"He said he was going to go to the river near the forest located in the center of town. He was also going to get help, but he never came back" said Monaca. Makoto wanted to find the boy, not to turn him into the cops, but to help him and maybe learn more about himself too. He was going to go find the boy, until he remembered what Monaca said about her family.
"So do you have anywhere to go" asked Makoto. Monaca shook her head and Makoto thought about something.
"Monaca I'll be right back, I have to go talk to someone" said Makoto. He then walked over to his family and explained everything. They felt bad for the girl, and decided to take her in. After Mikan got them a wheelchair for Monaca and made sure she was alright for transport they left to get Monaca settled in.
Naegi House
The Naegi house wasn't a mansion, but definitely was a big house. It needed to be since they had four kids living with them. Taking in Monaca wouldn't be a problem since they had a few rooms available for use and Masato was living in the dorms at Hopes Peak. Makoto, Masato, Madoko, and Komaru made it home and they walked in, with Makoto pushing Monaca's wheelchair. Celia and Mikoto had to leave to deal with something that happened.
"Thank you for taking me in big bro Makoto" said Monaca. Makoto wasn't bothered by that name since Madoko also called him that.
"It's no problem Monaca. Now we should go and pick out which of the rooms you want" said Makoto. Makoto picked up Monaca with no issue and carried her up the stairs while Masato carried her wheelchair. Madoko and Komaru were both making a cake to welcome Monaca into the house.
"So Madoko what do you think of Monaca. She's super cute" said Komaru. She was glad that there was another girl in the house besides her and and her mom.
"She's really fun to be with. On the car ride here I was playing with her and she said something really funny" said Madoko. He was glad there was someone else in the house his age to play with. He was a detective, but was still a kid. Makoto and Masato helped Monaca set up her room. They used a guest room that their parents had for people that came over out of nowhere, but are strangely gone the next day. Sometimes they'll leave things behind like arrows, pieces of metal, and weird looking medieval drawings. They thought it was weird, but nothing bad happened so they just ignored it.
"Hey Makoto I have to get back to Hopes Peak so I'll leave the room to you" said Masato.
"Alright don't worry, you probably have to get there since you have a curfew soon" said Makoto. Masato looked at the clock and realized that the was almost up. He ran out of the building, saying goodbye to everyone on the way.
"Is big bro Makoto going to find Masaru" asked Monaca.
"Yeah don't worry Monaca I'll find Masaru" said Makoto. Komaru and Madoko told them the cake was ready and they went back down. After eating the cake everyone went to sleep, except Makoto who was still up researching fire powers. He found information on pyrokinesis, which was basically the ability to control fire with your mind.
"Okay so I'm going up against a kid who can control and ignite fire out of now where, no big deal or anything". Makoto then tired looking up people getting stronger from spider bites. The only result was a forum on a website called saiddit about a superhero named Scarlet Spider. He's a superhero who has powers similar to that of a spider. Scarlet Spider can stick to walls, sense when dangers coming, shoot webs, has heightened speed, strength, and senses, and has blades called stingers that can come out of his hands.
"Okay I'm being paranoid. There's no possible way I can have powers, I mean I can't even climb the rope in gym class without falling halfway through it". Makoto then decided to go to bed and try to realize this over the weekend. He fell asleep, not realising the black substance surrounding his body while he slept.
Morning
Makoto woke up and was still very dazed from falling asleep so late. When he finally managed to completely wake up he saw that the room was upside down. He then realized he was hanging on the roof of his room.
"What's going on, why is this happening" asked Makoto. He was trying to push himself off, but his hands and legs also got stuck to the wall. "Okay maybe I need to calm down" Makoto told himself. Makoto took a deep breath and finally got off the roof. He landed on his feet as if he was a gymnast.
"I guess there's no use denying it now. I'm a literal freak". Makoto sat down on his bed with his head hung low. His life was never going to go back to the way it was. He was confused and didn't know what to do. He then looked at his computer and noticed the forum about Scarlet Spider. Makoto then felt something inside him spark to life. He then opened the window of his room and jumped out of it.
"Okay so all I have to do is shoot webs like he does. He does something with his hands right, like this". Makoto then made a strange hand gesture and his wrist fired a black webbing, latching on to the next house over. He pulled and he swung over to the roof of the next house. He tried to land on his feet, but failed and rolled on the roof. He was going to fall, but stuck to the ledge of the roof and pulled himself up.
"Okay that was harder than I thought". Makoto got back up and dusted himself off. He the realized he was wearing all black clothing, something he wasn't wearing before. He didn't think much of it and decided to ignore it.
"This is both cool and weird". He then shot web to the next house and swung over to it. He did this again and again, failing less and less with each attempt.
"Okay this is getting a whole lot easier to do. I just have to watch my footing and know when to actually shoot the webs out" Makoto said to himself. Makoto then stoped in an alleyway to catch his breath. He tried to get back up to the roof of the building, but couldn't stick to the wall.
"Great so even though I already did it I still can't control it". Makoto kept on trying, but couldn't do anything.
"Guess I'll just take the bus back home" Makot told himself as he walked out fo the alleyway. He put on the hood from the new black jacket to make sure he couldn't be seen. He saw a bus stop and got on the bus he usually took home. He was walking to the back of the bus, until he accidentally tripped and tired to grab onto something to slow his fall. He grabbed onto cut a bag and managed to do a flip and land on his feet. He felt something on the floor and looked down to see dozens of expensive looking jewels lying on the floor. He felt the strange feeling coming from his head again and moved out fo the way, seeing a man who looked like a normal salary man, try to cut him with a knife. The man then grabbed the bag of a woman who was sitting nearby.
"You really fucked up there kid. You shouldn't have done that, now everyone freeze and put your stuff in the bag or I'll kill the kid" said the man who was named Jutaru Akafuku.
"Wait I've heard of him before. He's apparently a supervillain named Karma. He's been blessed with really good luck. Scarlet Spider tried to stop him, but he also had the power to control someone else's luck and make it good or bad so Scarlet Spider was unable to do anything". Makoto then stood with his hands in the air. Jutaru tried to grab him, but Makoto moved out of the way and avoided his hand.
"Okay kid I'll give you two choices, either you give yourself up and I take all the shit on this bus, or I kill you and everyone on this bus and then take their shit, so what'll it be kid" asked Jutaru. Makoto looked around and noticed no one was going to his rescue, he knew he was alone and no one would help him. Jutaru then reached out to him, but Makoto grabbed his hand and squeezed it, causing Jutaru to let go of his knife in pain from Makoto's super strength.
"You know kid, I was going to let you go if you would have just done what I said, but now I'm going to FUCKING MURDER YOU" said Jutaru as his eyes began to glow green, but then fizzed out like a lightbulb. Makoto was confused, until he realized what had happed. His luck was already so bad Jutaru couldn't control it. He couldn't make it any worse so all he could do was raise it, which he did not want to do.
"What's wrong, is today a bad day for you" asked Makoto as he punched Jutaru through the window of the bus, leaving everyone inside shocked with their eyes open as wide as plates. Makoto then leaped out and perfectly landed the same way Scarlet Spider did. He walked over to Jutaru with the hood still blocking a part of his face, and the other giving him a menacing glare.
"What the fuck are you, your a fucking monster aren't you" asked Jutaru as he ran towards a motorcycle being driven by a mail man. He pushed the man off and began to drive the motorcycle away from Makoto, however Makoto wasn't going to let him get away and shot out black webbing just like before. It hit the tires and sent Jutaru and the bike flying, causing it to explode. Eventually after a few people called the police the officers arrived and arrested Jutaru. Everyone at the scene said they saw someone with the powers of Scarlet Spider. Makoto was watching from a distance, a smile on his face as he watched Jutaru being dragged away. He was about to walk away, until he felt the same feeling flare up in his head telling him to look behind him. He saw two people, one of them was a person who very little people knew about, who was this person you might ask. Well this man was none other than Nick Fury. The director of the secret organization Shield. The other was none other than his little sister Komaru, who was now on the ground, passed out from shock.
This was the first chapter of my take on what would happen if Makoto got both Spider-Man's powers and Venom's powers. The name for Scarlet Spider is what I have chosen for this series. Scarlet Spider is one of my favorite designs of Spider-Man besides Miles Morales Spider-Man. For the warriors of hope, and Madoko I will give each of them a telekinetic power of their own, but that's in a later chapter. I said before that I was going to make this a Makoto x Natsumi fanfiction, but I figured if Makoto was going to be a superhero than Chiaki would be one of the first people to accept him as a superhero. I said before that Masato will become the Lizard and I am going to do that and it will happen once Makoto has made some more enemies. Other hero's will make appearances in this fanfiction, but I don't know if I will make them students at Hopes Peak, or have them be hero's from the comic books. Well that's all for this chapter and if you have a name you think would suit Makoto in this series than tell me in the comments, but that's all till next time.