This is my first FanFiction. Hope you like it.

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Chapter 1- girlguide cookies

We walked along the highway on the outskirts of forks, large cases of cookies grasped in our hands threatening to fall at any moment.

"I'm tried Bella, can we please go home "Kelley whined.

"You know just as well as me that we can't afford to buy all these Girl Guide cookies. Besides, this is the last house on the street."

"How do you know "asked my sister.

"I ... Just do ok, trust me Kelley." As I walked up the twisted road to the house I couldn't help but take in a sudden breathe.

"Look at the house it's ..." "huge " I finished for her. And indeed it was, 3 stories tall with one wall that was completely glass. It reflected back our shocked expressions. All white, and with a huge garage, nothing describe the house better than the one word- grand.

The closer we got, the more fear I felt. This is silly I thought. Surly the people inside are as amazing as this house. Yet the fear I felt had eaten away all my courage and was nibbling on my sanity. When I looked at Kelley's face her eyes probably mirrored mine. Gripping her arm tightly (to keep her from running away) I knocked on the door.

An angle answered, open the door, and my fear intensify. When I opened my month to speak, no words came out.

"God this is awkward" I mumbled look down at the cookies in my hand. Suddenly, my fear just vanished. I wasn't going to let one dumb little guy scare me. Kelley was now looking at me her eyes bagging me to leave. I gave a firm shake of my head and stood taller. I wasn't even close to looking this 6 foot god in the eye, but it was close enough.

"Would YOU like to buy A BOX OF Girl Guide cookIES?" I said loudly enthusing certain words. Gosh, I sounded like the president giving his" vote for me!" speech. He chuckled and the sound made me blush even more. I was really bad for that.

"Ya sure" he replied. "My family just LOVES cookies."In the back ground I heard laughing. It sounded like an orchestra. Brass, sopranos, and bells could be heard. It made me smile. It was a taste of family, of love. Something that Kelley didn't know of and I barely remembered. By handing him this box of cookies, he would close the door and I would be left without the angle boy and his beautiful family. And I couldn't let that happen. It went from a desire to a need, like breathing or eating. Boy, I really was going crazy. I felt a tug on the box of cookies and jerked my head up.

"You can't get these!" I said panicked.

"I actually think I can, I just paid." I would had laughed at him and heck I would of laughed at myself if I hadn't felt so panicked. I looked up at him and smiled the sweetest smile imaginable while coming up with a quick lie in my head.

"No actually, because these are broken cookies so how bout I just pop on by tomorrow and give you some unbroken ones, hmm? Oh and I need to know your name so I know who to give them to." I took in a big breath and looked up into his eyes... Suddenly wishing I hadn't. I completely melted and was sure that I was a little puddle on the floor.

"It's Jasper!" He yelled

"Whoa, what" I asked dumbly.

"You asked my name and I said Jasper. Jasper Whitlock."

" Ok thanks" I giggled sure that I had the goofiest grin on my face. As Kelley and I started down the path I heard his deep, sexy voice call out the 6 words I hated and feared.

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