This is my first fan fiction. Please tell me what you think.
The last thing I remembered was slipping into a warm darkness.
My eyes slowly fluttered open, I saw expensive walls surrounding me. The floor felt smooth under me. I heard feet softly thumping down the hall towards me. I tried to get up and hide, but when I did, a blinding pain shot up my head. I panicked for a moment, what's happening? Where am I? I thought,
The footsteps were getting closer, the person was about to round the corner when I slipped into the darkness again.
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I woke up again, but this time in a hospital bed with an IV attached to my arm. My heart sped up, as I trid to pull the IV out. A handsome doctor came into my view.
"Keep the IV in, please. We don't want you to get dehydrated." he said in a deep voice.
"Where am I?" I asked hurriedly.
"You're in the palace infirmary, in Illea." He answers.
"Huh? Illea? What's that?" I ask.
"Our country." He said looking at me like I'm crazy, which now that I think back on it, I might have been.
"Oh, yeah. I remember now." not.
"The queen will be in here to ask you a couple questions in a couple minutes."
The queen, who's that? It's then that I see a beautiful women walk into my room. She has a dress made of purple and white silk on, and ballet heels on. Her fiery red hair is in a bun, with tendril of hair framing the side of her face.
"Hello, I'm America. The queen of Illea. What's your name?" She asked me in a soft voice.
My names Emma White. This is the story of the time I fell in love with a prince who had 34 other girls vying for his attention.
Good? Bad? Horrible?
Please tell me what you think.
Love Ya
~Alexis