Hear My Scream, Hear My Fall

by blueXXphoenix

Just an attempt at a good poem in Kai's P.O.V about him killing himself and Tala is the only one who cares. The rating is just for unknown caution.

hi there. this is my first atempt at any type of fanfiction, so i warn u now. IT WILL SUCK CRAP. there. now u know. i consider this yaoi between tala and kai, but for thos non-yaoi people out there, this can be friendship. watever. well, heres goes absolutely nothing. warnings: suicide, character death, and extreme stupidness. also, pleeze forgive me for the suckiness.

Disclaimer (ive always wanted to do this) i do not own any of the Beyblade charecters or the story plot. i only own this stupid poem-type thingie.

Hear My Scream, Hear My Fall Kai's P.O.V

The Darkness slowly crept

Closer and closer it got

It began to take my sanity

Eating and destroying

I wouldn't cry out for help

For no one was there to here

I would fall onto the cold, hard ground

For no one was there to catch me

I could scream my lungs out

And no one would care

So I quietly let it consume me

Anger, Hatred, and Fear it brought

I stood there for a minute

Making my final choice

Until... BANG!

I pull the trigger

I cry out, but no one is there to hear

I fall to the hard, cold ground

For no one is there to catch me

I hear another BANG! as my door os forced open

Someone heard me scream

They lifted me off the cold, hard floor

They say "Shh... it'll be all right."

Even though we both know it won't

They sink to their knees, crying, holding me close

"I heard you scream." They whisper

The trigger is pulled a second time. BANG!

And Tala, my closest friend, falls dead upon me

I heard him cry out

I was there to catch him

And we die, hearing each other scream

Hearing each other fall,

And hearing each other's last breath

Last heart beat

well. what do u think?? i thougt it sucked pretty bad. but anyways...

READ & REVIEW!!

i could use the critism

--blueXXpheonix--