kya! im so glad i wrote this! sasukes a total "BBBBBBBBBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP" in this one so be careful (for a while anyways...you'll find out!). OH, and please enjoy the pain of the poor girl! TT and review! sniff-sniff yeah about the ages thy're older so dont ask me about that! 17-19 stuff like that...yeah.

DISCLAIMER: dont own naruto

CHAP. ONE, HIS EFFECT:

She's been in her room for days. Not letting anyone come near her. She was completly crushed. Her heart was torn into little peices. Heck she didnt even have a heart anymore. 'HE' killed it. Trampled on it like it was nothing. He said he regretted ever loving her. He said she was worthless like the others. That she didnt deserve his time...ever. Everything they did together was a LIE. "Nothing" was the word he used. He, the one that she loved used to crush her insides. Not ever did she feel pain like this. She was decieved and didn't know it. She thought she was smart. The kind of girl that would be able to avoid the nonsense that came from others. But she was the victim the one that got the worst attack out of them all...she was Hinata.

Hinata was sitting in the corner of the room staring at the darkness. She sat there with nothing in her mind but the jerk that made her give up what was hers not only was it her body but her heart aswell. She was fooled by the only one she never thought she would be with. Sasuke said things that she wanted to hear. Things that left her speachless. Poor Hinata thought he was the one that would take her away from the so called life she had and give her a life that would fit her. In reality what had happened was; what she thought he gave so much was actually so little because it didnt mean a single thing. In the end she gave her mind and heart to him and left her with nothing but broken pieces.Everything was a lie.

OUTSIDE:

Naruto was walking down the street when he saw sasuke looking at the hyuga compound gate. He looked so focused on it, it was a bit hard to approach him. Once he got there he stopped and stood next to sasuke who didnt even notice him standing there. Pointing at the gate Naruto started...

"Whats so interesting about the Hyuga gate! why are you standing here?..." Naruto turned to Sasuke to see if he would answer. Surprisingly Sasuke wasnt there. He dissapeared. It was strange.

"oh well..." he turned and left. sooner or later naruto would find out anyways so there was no worrying. But it was still a little weird. Nothing seemed to be right. everything felt strange for a few days now and it was always when it was around sasuke that everyone started feeling bad. it seemed like he gave off a sort of aura that effected everyone. even though no one knew what was going on they did know something wasnt right. konoha's dirt roads seemed quiet. slowly you started to figure somthing was wrong.

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Kiba was worried what had happened to his partner? He was one of the first to sense somthing just wasnt right. He found out something was wrong when he tried visiting hinata only to end up with neji. he told him that she wasnt feeling well and that she needed a brake from everyone. that wasnt the truth. Kiba didnt like Neji nor other males near Hinata he knew she was a fragile person with glass feelings. beautiful but delicate. Kiba couldnt take it. being pushed out and being told he couldnt see one of his best friends. so he broke in. he wish he hadnt because when he saw her through the window in the corner of the dark filled room he wanted to cry. just the sight of the small women in that condition could kill you right then and there. after that kiba didnt want to see her but he still came back and after the second time coming to her window he knocked. she looked up and with the most sad eyes. silentley allowing him to enter. she wiped her face and tryed acting like she was alright.

"Hinata, whats happened to you?" she gave him a smile that looked as if it was about to crumbble.

"hehehe... Nothings wrong im...im...i am fine! yes! thats what i am, fine!" she's been trying to brainwash herself into thinking that everything was alright. that nothing ever happened. it still didnt work.

"who do you think your talking to? is that what your trying to make yourself think? what happened to you...what did he do?" her head was hung low and her body was weak as ever. she was in pain for just standing up. she couldnt take it. she was broken and 'HE' broke her...

what do you think? do you like this so far? i had other stories too but i liked this one the best. i will still continue the other story but just tell me what you think of this one for now? please review! love lots!