Well, I add a few things… =P… This is the new first chapter…

Brazilian girl writing in English… Think we all can foresee mistakes coming… =P

Just give it a chance and review if you feel you should… I would be really, really happy with it. =)

And then… Here I go…

-Bella, we're here! – Her always happy tone was already changing my mood.

-Okay, okay! – I said, trying to get her a little less excited.

She locked the car and got my hand in hers soft ones, pulling me through the parking lot. Alice seemed really unaware of our current situation, how could she be so calm and happy when we were about to be attacked by a bunch of vampires?

-So… – She stopped right after the front door, turning to see me. – Where do we go first? – She held one finger up, looking around cheerfully.

-You're the one who's supposed to know. – I mumbled.

-Come on, Bella! – She looked at me, pouting.

She's so amazingly cute!

-Ok, I'm just letting you choose. I'm right here. – I just couldn't avoid a subtle smile.

-Maybe dresses. – She decided, rounding around herself and pulling me with her.

-Are you sure? Alice, dresses can really be destructive while wearing me.

-And destructible, I might say. – She grinned, but turned around to face me. – But you just don't realize how beautiful you could seem in a dress.

I felt all blood in my veins flowing to my face, burning. What was making me upset just a minute ago?

-Actually, you don't realize how beautiful you are, Bella. – By now, Alice had a very, very sweet smile on her face, and her hand was running to reach my hair, gentle getting a wick of it behind my ear to expose my features.

I said nothing, my mind was completely blocked. All I could realize was her compliment. I've heard it from Edward a few times, but it still makes me ashamed when she says it…

-Think we should go now! – She suddenly said, already turning herself and almost running into the store.

I spent a half second to start walking by myself, blood still standing in my face for a while. Her sweet scent escaping to my nose… And then… We were there. I started praying to be safe. What was she thinking? Dresses? Alice's completely out of her mind!

-Alice! – My voice was failing.

-Isn't a great store? – Yes, it was. A huge and elegant store, with lots and lots of dresses filling each inch of space. She let my hand and started walking between the clothes.

-Oh… Sure. – I have never been so sarcastic in my entire life.

-No problem. – I heard her saying from behind a shelf. – I'll pick it for you. Calm down.

I sat on a couch, my head on my hands. Here we go. One, two, three…

-Bella! – She was singing, her bell voice filling the air… So beautiful… And not good, I knew.

-What? – I got my head up, looking at her. She was holding four models of blue dresses. Great, maybe she will make it fast.

-Get to try these ones. Come on.

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Oh God! That was small… I walked out the door, still pulling the dress down.

-Stop doing this, Bella! – Alice demanded and then stopped right in front of me, observing. – You look… Amazing! – She started walking around me.

-I feel half naked.

-You're such a pure person, Bella… Should show your legs a little bit more, they're awesome. – She looked at it, just like showing me she noticed that exactly now and only because I was wearing a shorter dress.

I felt a shiver running through my spine:

-Alice, don't look! – I said nervously.

-Why not? – She had a debauchee grin on her face.

-I am totally stupid. – I wish I could say it only to myself, but I knew she was listening. – Just don't.

She was laughing now:

-Okay, Bella. – She turned her head up, looking up to the ceiling, the grin still playing in her lips.

-You're so bad. – My eyes running from her eyes until her red and thick mouth. She slightly opened it, her eyes widening.

Well, I was good-looking, Alice was hot. Totally hot… I wish my moves could be just as mesmerizing and smooth as hers… She was like a dancer, a ballerina.

-Uh… – I was getting out of a trance. – Well, I should… – She brought her head down and grinned.

-Try the other one.

-Yeah.

I tried the four dresses and, when we finally finished it, she had another three dresses in her hands…

-Alice! – I was screaming now.

-It's fine…– She smiled – My turn now.

-Great! – I just couldn't control a relief tone in my voice.

Sitting again on the couch, I crossed my arms and looked around, bored. But after a brief second, Alice came out, showing a light and short green dress:

-So, what do you think?

It was perfect… The dress slightly fitted to her body, letting all the perfection of it showing in a sexy, but discreet way:

-Bella? – She singed, dancing around herself. – You didn't like it?

It sounded like: "What? You can't see the perfect beauty of this? Really?". I couldn't help but smile:

-No, Alice! It's… – I tried to find the words to sound properly enthusiastic. – It's great! It's beautiful! – I got up, turning around her just like she did to me before. – You look hot! Really.

But she wasn't paying attention anymore. Oh shit… I realized that a little late and stopped in front of her, holding her shoulders in my hands, her eyes were completely out of focus:

-Alice? – I murmured.

She didn't answer, so I gentle brought her to the couch, totally forgetting she didn't need this. Anyway, people were starting to look at us:

-Alice? – I said, tensed.

That wasn't a good time for foreseeing things… But if it was about… Her eyes came back:

-Alice, what was that?

-We were wrong, Bella. – She was half smiling.

-Huh? About what? – My hands went down, catching hers.

-It wasn't the Volturi… And not even Victoria… Nobody's coming to try to hurt you. – She squeezed my hands softly.

-Are you sure? – Was really good to know that the Volturi were still far away from us… Even if Edward would take it as reason to not hurry about my changing… But Alice wasn't completely happy, I could see it.

-Are you kidding, Bella? – She pretended to see it as an offensive talk. – I'm Alice Cullen, not a hand reader. You can be totally sure about it!

Well, now she sounded really excited, so maybe I was just imagining things:

-So, who's coming? Who entered my room? What does this vampire wants? Why is he hiding? Is he afraid of you? How does he know about your gift? They made a choice? Which one?

-Bella! – She squeezed my hands again, censuring me. – I'll just pay this… And I'll explain things to you all. Right?

-Ok. – I wish I could scream and make her tell me everything. Huh.

It was the first chapter… Really small, but I did it in a hurry, it's 02:34 am and I'm so tired… =P… Hope you like it. Let me know what you think!

Kisses =*