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Mikan: Kaiko Nya and Kaiko Pyon do not own Gakuen Alice…..
Chapter 1~
Scene: Walking back home but still in school...
"Hotaru! Are you going to the famous Gakuen Alice? Wow! Expected of my Hotaru!" Exclaimed Mikan as she tried to hug Hotaru who slapped her away with a gigantic fly swatter.
Invention intro~ by Hotaru
The giant fly swatter is used to swat any annoying or detestable people away. It is light and can be easily kept and shortened by pressing a button on the handle.
End of intro~
"Personal space secured!" Muttered Hotaru.
"That's mean! Anyway write to me ok?" Said Mikan.
"... I'll try" muttered Hotaru and the mood was suddenly sad...
"Hotaru..."
"Anyway the Gakuen Alice is one of the most prestigious school right? I'm sure that the school will have the resources you need to create your inventions! After all your inventions are so amazing that they found out and sent you an invite right?" Mikan attempts in an upbeat tone. Though judging by the unimpressed look from Hotaru, it doesn't work. She deflates. It looks like her acting skills aren't up to par quite yet.
If only you knew the real face of that school and about that man, Hotaru thought darkly.
"Don't lie to me of all people baka, I won't be able to forget your stupidity and idiotic face even if I wanted to." Hotaru grumbled at Mikan's fake cheer.
"Hotaru! I love you too!" Mikan's eyes watered and she lunged for Hotaru, only for Hotaru to sidestep her and say gently, "Baka don't hug me with your snot."
"Look it's the two princesses! What a nice view!" "Yeah! They have the looks and the brain! Did you know that this year's exam they both scored the highest again!" "Kya~~ I'm so envious...!"
Mikan has a long reddish silky hair till her waist area and she often puts a hair band on her hair with some hair covering her forehead. She has flawless slightly tanned skin that suits her unique eyes. They are light blue on the outer side but deep inside is sea blue. This is also one of her charm. (Kaiko Nya: Yes, she looks totally different from the original Mikan)
Hotaru has short black hair and she is often expressionless but that's what made her so popular. Not only this, she has a pair of light purple eyes which contrasts with her porcelain skin making her even more attractive.
Two days later, Hotaru is leaving. Everyone could not bear to watch her leave. Especially Mikan. They are best friends after all.
"Saying goodbye sounds like we are not going to see each other forever and we are going to still see each other right? Sorry I'm rambling, so, Hotaru…See you later? "Mikan said while giving Hotaru a slight smile through the tears.
"See you later, Mikan" With those parting words, she went into the black limousine that Gakuen Alice provided.
Time Skip
Dear Hotaru,
How are you? Is the school as great as I imagined? Did you make any new friends? I know you will definitely do well! It's been 2 days since you left and everyone misses you. Anyway, did you know that Aki-chan from class 2 was a guy that loved cross-dressing? Hmph, I bet you knew and didn't tell me about it. Let me tell you how I found out…
Mikan folded the letter and placed it in the mailbox. Silently wishing that the letter could fly and get to Hotaru as fast as possible.
The following weeks, Mikan sent Hotaru letters every 2 days, but she has not received any replies from Hotaru.
Dear Hotaru,
It's been 2 weeks, why haven't you replied to any of my letters? Are you alright? If you have any problems you could always tell me. Do you hate me? Please reply soon….
Scene: Mikan's home...
"It's been a month since Hotaru left. Why hasn't she written to me? It can't be that she has forgotten about me!? Hotaru !" Cried Mikan.
Suddenly, water, tornados and lightening was seen in the house. They were swirling around Mikan.
"What-what's going on? Grandpa! Help!" Shouted Mikan.
"Mikan!" Shouted grandpa," try to calm down! It will get worse if your emotions are out of control!"
Mikan did as what he said and calmed down but blank spots danced in her vision and she fell unconscious.
"Eh... What happened?" Muttered Mikan as she rubbed her head.
"You are awake Mikan! Haiz... You are already sixteen, it's time to tell you the truth but please remain calm alright?" Said grandfather.
"You see, what you just saw was your Alice. Not all humans have this power, only some are like you. They have all sorts of Alice; some are very ridiculous as well. There are also four types of Alice holders.
The first one is when the Alice holder uses too much of their Alice, it will shorten their life.
The second is they will only have their Alice when they are young but when they grow till a specific age, their Alice will be disappear.
The third one is their Alice are very powerful but it has a limited usage. One day their Alice will be used up.
As for the last type, they are the rarest of all types and this type can be passed down from the bloodline. These Alice holders holds powerful Alice but it will not cost one's life nor will it ever disappear. And you, my dear belong to this category. Not only that, you also have more than three Alices, wind, water, lightening and nullification, which is the rarest of the rarest. So far not a single Alice holder has more than three Alices."
After hearing this, Mikan is at loss of words. But how can this be? Where did I even get this powers from? Mikan was in a state of confusion as she tried to absorb the information.
"I know this is too much for you but you were born into the Sakura family, you have to face this fate. Your late parents also belong to the fourth category but they do not have more than three Alices. I do not understand your family's pain since I'm just an outsider but know that I will be there for you Mikan."
Turning to his side, he picked up an intricately designed box which contained a pair of blue diamond earrings, a silver head chain embedded with blue studs and an emerald stone strung onto a silver chain.
"Put on everything in this box. These are the restrainers to prevent the outburst of your Alice like just now. Since your Alices are very unstable, I'm afraid these restrainers are not even enough. These are also your parents' last gift to you, they personally handcrafted these and the emerald stone is actually your father's nullification Alice stone. Let me put them on for you."
After that, he left the room to let Mikan process the information and figure out what to do next.
Mikan closed her eyes and thought: This is not real! This must be a dream, it just can't be! Mother, father what am I going to do?
Then, Mikan broke into tears and cried.
~Gakuen Alice Our Version Chapter 1 Owari~
Kaiko Pyon: Sorry if the first few chapters are short!
Kaiko Nya: We will try to lengthen our chapters with more details as we edit our story!
Kaiko Nya and Kaiko Pyon: The following is a statement we are going to continuously post as we have read many stories where the story plot has been severely criticized.
Kaiko Nya: Remember, this is our story, as the title says it is our version of Gakuen Alice so please do not have harsh feelings on our plot! *wink*
Kaiko Pyon: We would like to just receive comments on how to improve our writing and maybe how you would like the story to develop. * Waves *
Kaiko Nya and Kaiko Pyon: Arigatou gozaimasu* bows down*
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