ok lets not start jumping all over me for my weird writing style in this one... its the first time i've tried writing in this format and i don't much care for it but it was so much easier than writing he said she said before or after each word box. this is what i call role play style writing. i have here a little detailed description of what the different captions mean in this story. although i may have messed them up somewhere because i was only half paying attention... i'll work on it like i was saying this project is a long ways off from finished.
*activity* = and action something that's being done not said
(Summed setting) = the shorter setting within the main.
[Main setting] = the story setting the main big starting point.
-Time frame- = at which time if any specified an event is happening.
"Speech" = something a character is saying to another.
Name: the person whose name it is doing an activity or saying something.
"Thought bubble" = a character is thinking none of the other characters hear this.
