Hey everyone! So this is not a Vampire Academy related story. However, this is something that I have been working on for a while now and would like people's thoughts to my story. The main character's name is Rose but NOT Rose Hathaway and the name is not based on Rose Hathaway. But please review and let me know what you think of my story Rose Noir. Thank you!
Chapter 1
The only sound I could hear was the slurping of the creature that was a few yards away from me. Its head was bowed over the poor animal, its life quickly draining. This killer must have been desperate to drink from a lone deer in the forest instead of praying on humans. Dropping from my perch in a giant oak, I pulled out my crossbow and aimed the end of the arrow at the vampire's back where a dead unbeating heart rested. With my finger on the trigger, I squeezed.
The silent night was suddenly interrupted with a piercing scream that made my bones shake. Its head whirled around and looked at me. With its first meal forgotten, the demon jumped at me but was stopped in mid-air as a form hit it from the side sending it to the damp leaf covered floor. My crossbow was still aimed at where the vampire had been hunched over. I now lowered it and stared at where the two forms were fighting. Two vampires fighting; over me. But just as I was pulling out my steak, the unknown vampire pulled one out of his boot and plunged it into my kill's heart. I had no idea what to do. All I could think was, How could a vampire be touching silver and not burn? What the fuck?
As he stood up and everything started to sink in, I began getting mad. Mad because I felt like an idiot at thinking he was a vampire when he really is a hunter, and because another hunter just stole my kill. As this asshole hunter brushed off all the dirt from his clothes, he bent down and pulled his steak out of the now disintegrating corpse. He slowly strode over to me, his hair was messed up from the fight, but he smoothed it down with his hands. His eyes were a deep green that made you feel like they could see your soul.
He extended his hand to me and introduced himself.
"Hi my name is Fasya. I thought you might need some help." He smiled. His smile could melt a stone cold heart. But he just ruined my reputation in the hunter community. My confused expression turned into a hard glare. I looked at his had then back up at him, turned around and walked away.
"Wait please!" Fasya called behind me. His footsteps right behind me. I started running and he started running towards me.
"What do you want?" My voice impatient as I stopped and faced him, my hands on my hips.
"I want to apologize. I know it is wrong to take down another hunter's kill but he was about to kill you." His face was strained as if he really did feel bad. My pose did not change except my glare turning even darker. I was beyond pissed off. If it were not for laws, this guy would be lying next to the now pile of ashes with an arrow through his chest. It is practically illegal in the hunter's community to take another's kill. If you are not strong enough to take now your own beast then you shouldn't be alive. Survival of the fittest.
"Fasya, you messed up. I won't turn you in but do not ever, and I mean EVER, kill my predator or I will kill you. Got it?"
His smile returned. "What is your name?"
"My name is none of your business Fasya. Now, go off and hunt your own vamps." I turned around and started to leave.
"But I want to apologize properly. What is your name?" He called out to me.
"Rose." With that I ran towards home.
Alright that's chapter one and I know its short but this is just to get people's feedback on this. Now there is abuse in this story so if you don't want to read it, then skip ahead or don't read this story. Review!