Hello my lovely readers! As I promised, here is the beginning of my revision of Sailor Moon: Destiny. I spent two whole days just sitting and rereading all of the chapters and fixing them up and they're all completely done and ready to be posted. But I've decided that I'm going to be uploading one every Friday, rather than doing it all at once. This is partly because I...have gotten a tumblr O.o And I want to update it on there so more people can read it. And I think chapter by chapter would be better than just throwing the whole thing up at once anyway.

My tumblr is (drumroll please) sailorxstar and I will be updating there when I update anything on here (new stories, chapters, announcements, ect). So yeah, you can follow me if you want. ^^

Anyhiddles (btw I'm in love with Tom Hiddleston now, just saying) as you will notice, I am uploading this as separate from the original version of the story. I just didn't have the heart to take it down. So if you want you can read this only or that only or compare them both, whatever you wish. I'd like to see what some people say about the revisions if they've read the original.

So long story short (too late) please enjoy the revision of Sailor Moon: Destiny, let me know what you think, and I'll talk to you later. Love ya!

~SXS

P.S. I'm starting a summer project over on YouTube called Sailor Moon: The Lost Episodes. It's going to be a fandub of the episodes from seasons 1 and 2 that got cut. If you're interested, look me up and audition (username SuperSailorX). Thanks! :D

Disclaimer: I do not own anything except the villains of this story. Anything recognizable to the original Sailor Moon story, characters, ect. belongs to Naoko Takeuchi and Toei Animation. Thank you!

They both reached out, stretching as far as they could, and grasped hands tightly. Galaxia's body was suddenly overcome with light, and her outer shell of Chaos exploded. Her skin returned to it's natural pigment and her long golden hair fell to her ankles. Chaos, like a black streak of lightning, shot into the sky which cleared to blue. Silence swept over the area as Sailor Moon and Galaxia floated there together. The Star Seeds collected from all over the universe appeared, surrounding them with tiny twinkling lights.

"Thank you, Sailor Moon," Galaxia said. "Your shine lit up the galaxy with that very warm, sweet light." Her eyebrows knit together. "Is Chaos gone?"

"I think it went back to where it belongs," Sailor Moon replied, looking up as Galaxia was.

"Where it belongs?" Galaxia asked.

"Yes," Sailor Moon said. "Back to people's minds."

"Then, again..."

"Let's believe them." Galaxia looked up. "The people who love their world." There was a pause and Galaxia still looked upset. "Please don't worry! The Light of Hope is in everyone's mind." Sailor Moon smiled which made Galaxia smile as well.

"How strong you are. But what I did was irreparable."

"Let's do it again, from the beginning. It's not too late." Sailor Moon spread her arms wide. "Please guide the Star Seeds so they don't get lost."

Galaxia smiled again. "Thank you, Sailor Moon!" Then she and the Star Seeds shot up into the sky in brilliant flashes of light. The image faded and the screen was blank.

"Not even Chaos could defeat Sailor Moon. She is truly a force to be reckoned with," a voice commented from the shadows.

"Indeed," another responded. "Nenkaningen-sama, are you sure that we should attack the Earth? Can we possibly hope to overcome such a powerful foe?"

A deep voice sounded in the darkness. "We must attack the Earth. I must have revenge on that planet and the two people who ruined my chances at becoming king." A hand waved and the screen showed another area in the same scene. Three leather-clad senshi surrounded a red-haired princess.

"She is one that we shall seek revenge on. He is another." The hand waved again to show Sailor Moon clinging to a figure in armor. "And did you yourselves not say that the instrument of my success lies here as well?"

"Yes, it does," the first voice said.
"Then we attack, in time. Then the universe will be ours to control."

Somewhere in the space time continuum there was a shift, opening a rift in the time line leading to alternate futures.

Next chapter in Sailor Moon: Destiny, it's graduation day and everyone's ready for summer vacation when suddenly a new enemy appears...and Chibiusa disappears? When Pluto takes them to the Time Gates, will the senshi like what they see? Find out next Friday in Chapter 1: Forks in the Timeline; Usagi's Future Unclear. And remember, Destiny is not always set in stone.