I fixed the chapter, so now its easier to read.

Alexander breathed in a shaky breath as he lifted up his left arm and began to rap his fist against the dark wooden door. A man with brown frizzy hair pulled into a messy ponytail opened the door.
"Oh, you must be our new roommate" the man assumed, opening the door more so Alex could come inside.
Alex stepped in awkwardly, not knowing what to say or what to do. He saw two other people in the dorm. One with frizzy hair that was pulled up, Who was tossing dehydrated marshmallows into his mouth, and the other who was cleaning the dehydrated marshmallows on the floor.

"So, my name is John Laurens, just call me Laurens though," The man welcomed with a smile stretched on his freckled face.
"Oh, I'm Alexander Hamilton," Alexander Said nervously.
Laurens turned around, so he was facing the other people, "Let me introduce Hercules and Lafayet-"
"Exsqueeze me, but I need no introduction," Hercules Shouted from the kitchen that you could see from the living room.
"Oui, oui, Je m'appelle Lafayette," the other roommate introduced himself.
"Laurens sighed, "Lafayette he doesn't speak French."
"Actually I do!" Alex stated proudly.
"Oooo, we're going to speak garbage about others" exclaimed the French man.
Laurens began to help Alex place all of his things in Alex's tiny room. They had a few small chats about non important things like turtles and Shakespeare. But Laurens then mentioned a party next Saturday, and Alex agreed to come.
Once everything was put away Alex and John walked out to the small living room where Hercules and Lafayette were watching Clueless.
"You're a virgin who can't even drive," Hercules scoffed.
"That was way harsh Herc," Lafayette fake offended.
"As if!"John added.
"Ugh. Skateboards. That's like five years ago." Alex joined in.
Hercules smiled, "Hey, the new guy gets it!"
"Guys come on join us!" Begged Lafayette, who was giving them the puppy eyes.
"Yeah, after this we're gonna watch Heathers, and then Mean Girls," Hercules told them.
Alex and John sat down on the couch watching the ending of Clueless. As Hercules began Heathers, John, Lafayette, and Alex began saying lines from the movie.
"Did you have a brain tumor for breakfast?" Alex asked in a fake snobby voice.
"I love my dad gay son," Lafayette exclaimed, while hugging Laurens.
"Greetings and salutations," Laurens said, trying to be serious but he broke down laughing.
"I do not patronize bunny rabbits!" Gasped Hercules.