So this is my first story so go easy on me :) just tell whats right and wrong. ANNNDDDDD START!
At Anubis House….
Fabian,Patricia,Amber and Eddie was leaving the Anubis house to go to the hospital to see the real Harriot Denby and Alfie was forced to stay back because of the last zombie incident.
Nina's POV
As I stepped out of the cab, I just stared at the Anubis house thinking,"okay,okay, just calm down and walk in there...nothing will happen...nothing at all. It's a new term so start fresh and this time no mystery's. I MEAN NO MYSTERY'S AT ALL!GET THAT IN YOUR HEAD NINA!. Okay I should stop talking to myself and walk in the house." I carried my luggage up the steps and took a deep breath before opening the door.
Alfie's POV
"Man Joy looks hot in the new outfit…SNAP OUT OF IT ALFIE!AMBER WILL KILL YOU IF SHE HEARED YOU SAYING THAT! AND SHE WI-
*SOUND OF FRONT DOOR SLAMMED*
Me,Mara and Joy ran to the front door and saw a girl pulling her luggage in. Her back was facing us so we couldn't see who it was .
Nina's POV
"GODS!THESE BAGS ARE SO HEAVY!WHAT DID I BR-
"Who are you?" a voice said and I immediately turned around to face three shocked Anubis residents. "Hey guys…." I said while giving an awkward wave. After a second of awkwardness , they squealed and gave me a bone crushing hug, I was quite surprised when Alfie squealed, it sounded exactly like a girl."Hey guys…, this girl needs to breathe" I said and they immediately released me."Woah…Joy cool clothes!" I said, looking at her."Thanks…what's with the British shirt?"Joy asked with an eyebrow raised."Whatttt….i'm just supporting my second home."(the pics of nina's outfits will be on my profile :P )I said and the three of them just laughed at me. Then Trudy came out of the kitchen,"Nina deary!welcome back!I've missed you,come on I have made some cupcakes for all of you."she said."OOOOOO CUPCAKES!" Alfie shouted and ran into the kitchen followed by Mara shouting "DON'T FINISH ALL OF IT!"."Come on , lets go get some cupcakes before it finishes." Joy said, I just nodded and followed her to the kitchen.
So how is it? is it good?is it bad? terrible? please review!
Nina:"it was terrible dont you think?i mean come on!
Me:Hey shut it or i just might kill you off the story
Nina:O.o
Me: that's what i thought.. :P anyways guys! please review!
Nina:Just do it so she can shut up!
Me: thats it !i'm going to kill you! die!
-REVIEW - :p
(I WILL DEFINITELY POST A SECOND CHAPTER TMRW)