Claim: I changed how the kids got out of the shadowland they met a person in the shadowland that helped them find the way but I took that part out because I want the readers to think that The characters made it out of the shadow land by themselves.
Have you ever heard of a story where two kids have magical powers and are finding a way out of an unknown place?They're both in a dark place called the shadow land. A place where lost souls go like limbo or something along those lines. They have to get out of there before they become lost souls as well and then stay there forever! O right I almost forgot they have been followed by the government of the world, which is commanded by the "one who is the one."
They also have mystical powers Wisty is a witch and Whit is a wizard, Lost souls only want salvation by humans or they will use humans as "warmth" they will steal your warmth from you making you cold and in some occasions, they will eat your flesh. They walk through the shadow land and they find a portal they finally come out of the shadow land into freedom land, Then they quickly spot a airplane that drops a bomb on them Boom!