Peter in Circumspect

Peter POV in Divergent, Insurgent and Alleigant. Continues after Alleigant with no Tris death, no memory serum and a main character death. Feedback please, I am trying to keep Peter in character, and will be drawing much more from the character as MIles Teller plays him .

Well Hell, its choosing day. Stupid Test. Go figure. Can mean only one thing for me. Off to live with the meatheads. Cant be all bad I guess. Some of the girls are hot, not the ones with the insane hair or face piercings, but whatever. Anything beats being Factionless and depending on a bunch of Stiffs, I'd rather die than be worthless... Plus I think it'd make Dear Ol Dad happy to have a Dauntless kid. Whatever it takes

The factions are actually really interesting and its strange to see how many people are in the city. The differences are actually pretty funny when you look at each faction. Bookworms still studying while they wait to see if their kids are moving out, probably secretly hoping so that way their kids wont grow up smarter than they are. Stiffs avoiding eye contact with everyone in the typical pretentiousness that is Abnegation. Amity chicks singing, actually singing here. Least they're hot. Names are called, factions chosen. Cant believe a Candor chose Amity...dude and his parents are bawling...get over it, use his room for an office. Wait, what? A stiff just chose Daunteless? This is going to be fun.

I hear my name called and walk up to the bowls. I tested for Erudite but no way am I going to do that. Its a no-brainer. Cut, Bleed on the coals, move to Dauntless. There are alot from Candor: Drew, Molly, Christina, that idiot Al. Whatever. Its every man for himself.

What? Stiff jumping first? "Take it all off!" Did she really just throw her jacket at me? OH this is gonna be fun. I jump third. I done more Dauntless stuff in my own house. The leaders and trainer are all meatheads with the air of self importance about them, think we will get along just fine, Surely they can appreciate someone who isn't depending on everyone else to survive here.

The dorms. Gross, but hell I saw some skin on Stiff. She acts so innocent, we'll see about that. At dinner we all sit together. Pretty funny actually to see that Erudite, Will, and Al shut up about their factions. Dude, let it go, we are in Dauntless now. And Stiff actually trying to talk to Four? Thought Abnegation were just supossed to shut up and wait on others... Guess she's not as selfless as she put on.

Skip to Training...

Some of this is hard, ain't gonna lie. I worked out some in Candor but not enough to really prepare . But the shooting, thats easy, never take your eye off the target. Shoot I'd make it, all the time. Too bad Four didnt appreciate my honesty on how good I was. Asshole.

Checking up on the factionless makes it even more real, survive, pass make it or be like them. "Check it out Stiff, thats gonna be your new family. Go say hello." She seems to ignore me but I've seen the rankings, shes in over her head. Why in the hell would a skinny Abnegation girl choose Dauntless anyway? She seems brave and determined to do it, but why?

Ah crap, hand to hand and I get the big Erudite. For a bookworm he's tough. This doesnt help my rankings, He will Pay for that. Molly's big ass has Tris as her fight, Stiff didnt stand a chance, Molly is ruthless and Stiff takes a beating. Could tell she didnt want to fight, thats not in her blood apparently. Guess in Abnegation you sit down and take your beatings, Like the Eaton kid.

Please give me your opinion. I have a long storyline laid out.

Let me know if you feel he is in character enough.