Ok. Its as simple as this people. I've decided that while I may not continue this story, I'll at least revise it, make it better and what not. So here it is, revised chapter one and rest as well. Hope you enjoy.

Disclaimer: I don't own Runescape.

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Chapter 1: Meetings and Trouble at Sea

(Sieg's POV)

Hi. My name is Siegfried Tomonari. I know what you're thinking. It's a strange name. Kind of mixed up so I just go Sieg. But still, my name rolls off my tongue like its nothing. So anywho, I'm 5'7", tan skin, black hair and not so much on the muscle part, and have brown eyes. Right now I'm in nothing except for some blue jeans and a black jacket.

But anywho, I was born in Rimmington and am now 17 years old! And as all my people, I will eventually get sent to Tutorial Island. It's nothing new. Since we're a small town, it's hard to get bigger. Really hard considering most people don't even know the name of town!

I'm on a boat right now heading towards Tutorial Island. I'm the only one from Rimmington this year. No one else will leave Rimmington until the next 17 year old leaves and that won't be for another 3 years. It kind of sucks being the only person. Last year there were at least three. The number has been going down a few years now. From drought to famine to even unrest from pirates, we've been through some tough times as a small town.

The reason we send our 17 year olds to do this is so they can escape the village for a while and hopefully return a better person. Hopefully, and I stress this part, a good enough warrior to help defend the village. So far, we've only had a few people return. Most just stay away from returning or just return once, never to heard or seen again. Not because they die but because its almost as if they're ashamed of where they came from. We're country bumpkins, I admit, but I couldn't be more happy and proud of where I came from. But, I must become strong.

"I have to become a strong warrior, I must. For my village, I will...

Suddenly I felt some hot burn on my back. I black out.

(Normal POV)

"Hey kid! You still there?" an old mage's voice says from no where.

"Ugh…my head…where am I?" Sieg slowly opens up his eyes. He looks around at his surroundings. He's in a bed in a pretty empty room. Looking around with confusion, the mage responds to Sieg.

"You're on the boat to Tutorial Island. But then again you should already know that," the old doctor said. "So what's yer name kid?"

"Huh? Oh my name," Sieg gets up off the bed and brushes himself off. "My name is Siegfried Tomonari, Sieg for short. And can you please stop calling me kid? I'm not a kid."

"Nope. You're still a kid to an old man like myself Sieg," the mage responds.

Sieg looks at the doctor. He's wearing a mages clothing. He has pale, wrinkled skin, looking a bit skinny and has a white beard flowing down to his chest. He's wearing a mages cap so Sieg can't see the top of his head. He's holding a staff with a white orb on the top. He's looks like the ideal mage.

"I suppose I might still be a kid to someone like you. Though I don't wanna admit it," Sieg responds to the wise looking mage.

"Good for you realize that. With that view point in life, you'll get far," the old mage chuckled.

"Maybe. Say, what hit be back there?" Sieg says still rubbing the back of his head.

"Oh that. Sorry about that. I was teaching one of the passengers a magic technique. I guess they missed!" The mage chuckles.

"Well whatever it was, it felt powerful!"

"It wasn't that powerful. It was a basic magic spell, Wind Strike," the old mage smirked.

"WHAT?! That's the most basic of basic! How could I lose that easily?" Sieg looked down in defeat.

"You need training against Magic resistance. Without it, you'll be defeated by thing much worse then Wind Strike. You might not just the wind knocked out of you. It could mean that you'll just lose next time," the old mage said while stroking his beard down.

"That's not an option I'd like to think about old man."

"Very true. Well I must be off now. I have a job to do after all." The old mage waved and left Sieg standing there.

(Sieg's POV)

What a strange guy. So he's a mage eh? Well I suppose I'll have to learn more magic then I want to. OH CRAP! I didn't get his name. Oh well. I'll get it next time.

I began walking around the boat. It wasn't very big. I found myself in front of the mast. I plopped down to rest next to it.

"How much longer is this gonna take?" I thought to myself. "I thought leaving from Port Sarim would be the shortest way to Tutorial Island."

Suddenly the ships rocks like crazy. I quickly get up and rush to the front of the ship. A bunch of the passengers are there looking at something. I run between the crowd to see the what's got all the attention. I don't have to get to the front.

"MONSTERS!!" The look out on top of mast yells down.

Crap…I thought this was suppose to be a simple trip. I didn't expect this. The ship is starting to rock even more. I can barely keep my balance. Well…I can't keep my balance and fall back on to the deck.

Water is starting to get on the boat. Some salt water splashes in my eyes. Of course my not being used to this, it hurts like hell. I quick trying to get the salt out of my eyes when I hear a screeching sound.

"I recognize that sound…" I whisper to myself.

Out from the water bringing furious waves of water on the boat, a huge serpent comes from out of the water looking for a good meal. And yeah, I think I might be that meal.

(Normal POV)

Sieg's standing there, to scared to move. The passengers are rushing by him one by one, quickly trying to hide from the monster below deck.

The crew of the boat begins throwing spears at the serpent's rock hard scaly skin.

A crew member suddenly grabs Sieg, shaking him to move. "C'MON KID! MOVE IT!" But Sieg doesn't move.

"IBAN BLAST!!"

Sieg looks behind him and sees the old mage walking up with Air Staff in hand.

"You might wanna move for this one kid," the crew member yells. "Don't want to get in the way of Delferic's attack."

(Sieg's POV)

Why? Why can't I move? I hear the crew man behind me yelling but I can't move.

"Damn it! Kid get out of here!"

I hear the sound of wood break.

"Shit. First the serpent, then the kid not moving, and NOW more monsters?! This just ain't my day…" The crew man sighs. "Kid move now! Don't make me drag you.

"…."

"C'mon kid! Move!"

"…."

"Kid I don't gots all day. Get out of here now!"

"I'm…I'm…"

A fish like monster jumps right at me. It's teeth are creeping out, ready for bite.

BOOM! There's a splattering sound. The monsters is blasted by an attack. The monster's skin is burned off, leaving only the blood and insides coming out.

"Huh?..."

I look in front of me. The old mage Delferic is standing there. His robe is swaying to the wind. He looks almost majestic, worthy of a mage of his caliber.

"Boy-o. I would suggest to get back. If you're in the way, there's no way I'll be able to beat this serpent." Delferic looks at me. His eyes aren't the same. Last time, his eyes had a gentle, grandfather look in them. But now, he's dead serious.

I run back to the mast, close to the door to the hull.

Finally, my legs work…

I open the door and get down in the hull. Or that's what I was supposed to do. Instead, I went behind the mast and looked back around at the battle.

Let's see what this old man's got.

(Normal POV)

As Sieg looks from a distance, Delferic prepares his attack. The serpent hesitantly looks at the old mage.

"You've caused quite the mischief you old snake. Let's see if I can calm you down."

Delferic then pulls out a staff and couple of runes, staff in right hand and runes in left. He closes his eyes and begins chanting quietly. The runes begin to glow brightly with an eerie white light, looking as if it's the man's own aura eradiating from his body.

The sea serpent then begins to look at the old man, with mouth opened enough so that you could see his teeth. The teeth look very sharp, stained with blood. The drool of monster drips down to the deck making puddles of salvia. He moves back from the boat and goes down below the water, looking like he was going to leave. The other fish-like monsters then all leave, jumping over the side of the ship in fear, as something big was to happen next. The boat is left in a complete, utter silence…

"Is it over?" a scrawny deck hands whispers to another deck hand.

"How should I know?" The other whispers back.

"It's not…" A older looking man responded. "Delferic is still casting his spell. He would have stopped if it was truly over."

The water around the ship begins to calm down when some water begins to push up. The area in which the water is moving up explodes, causing sea water to rain on the ship. The serpent, in which some thought had left, jumped into the air in an arc. He was aiming towards Delferic.

"OLD MAN WATCH OUT!" Sieg yells from his hiding place.

Delferic suddenly snaps his eyes open and the palm in which the runes were in he slams into the staff. The staff begins to gust a wind from Delferic.

"Sorry ol' chap. But you lose this one," Delferic smirks.

He holds the staff in his right hand high up. The serpent is closing in, mouth literally oozing with the drool of what was to be his next meal! The staff glows brighter then before with the white light.

Delferic then shouts out, "Power given to me by Saradomin! Strike down this vile beast before me! SARADOMIN STRIKE!"

The serpent stops in mid air, face to face with Delferic. A bright orb of energy goes into the serpent's mouth and through the body, fully eradicating whatever remained of the serpent.

Delferic puts his staff down and looks back to the crew. He chuckles. "Now then, shall we get going back to Tutorial Island? I think we've had more then our share of fun!"

(Sieg's POV)

What the hell?! The old man just kicked that serpent's scaly hide and then laughs about it. He must be incredibly powerful to do that..

Delferic then approaches me, behind the mast. As he's about to walk past me he whispers, "Next time, it would be wise to run."

I stand there in a bit of shock. The rest of the trip was uneventful, luckily.


Ok that was a revised first chapter. Man…I want to continue but I at least need some reviews. Read and Review!