Ok second fanfic.I know I did alot of mistakes in my first story, and a lot of word repetition and other stuff. But keep in mind that one of the reason i'm doing this, is to ameliorate my english (french is my mother tongue). Second reason i'm doing this it's because it's FUN.
Here is the time setting : November first 1999 (meaning about 2 months after the digiworld)
Caracteres Ages
Izzy-10
Kari-9
Tai-14
Sora-14
Matt-14
Mimi-12
Joe-16
TK-7
(don't worry Yaoi haters there is none of it here)
Disclaimer: *Geneviève is standing on a sky-scaper with a microphone. Ear percing mal ajusted sonds come out of the gigantic speaker. See poeple turning their heads. Birds start to fly away and she begins to speak* Attention every body. I do NOT own Digimon.They are own by SABAN (and other people)So nobody sue me !* She starting to walk away. And we see a couple of lawyers talking. Let's go see what they are saying shall we?
Lawyer #1: Darn Can't sue her!
Lawyer #2: Ohh, yes we can.
Lawyers#1:Really? How?
Lawyer #2:She took the lottery advertisment.
Lawyer#1: That so true. ^_^. Can I have her cat Kino?
Lawyer#2:Sure, I'll take her other cat Lucky.
Geneviève: What your gonna take my Cats??!!
*Geneviève is seen running quickly back to the microphone *"I don't own the lottery advertisment, so you two lawyers shut up so the readers can go and read the story!"* said a really mad Geneviève.
Lawyer#1: Darn , no cats!
Lawyer#2: Lucky would have done a fine fur hat. :(
o_0 Euhh.... On with the story
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Week at the Kamiya:The arrival (1)
Izzy was setting at the dinner table , his head resting on his hand wating and looking at the door. Keys could be heard and he saw the doornob slowly turning. He say his farther coming in holding his suitcase. Izzy gaze fowolled his father has he put his coat at the usual place he put it, on the coat hangner. Finally Mr.Izumi looked at his son curiosity ,who was still looking at him.
"What is it Izzy?Something wrong?" asked his dad a bit worried by is son's behavior."Nothing's wrong , just wondering" Izzy responced a bit distant. His dad was not beliving that there nothing wrong so he asked an obvious question. "Wondering about what Izzy?"
"Ohh , just wondering what you are going to do this weekend for your fiftteenth Annirversary, that's all" said Izzy flatly. "What, wha..W..HAT!" Said his father as he remembered. "I didn't plan anything, I totally forgot!"With that Izzy produce a small satisfaction grin.
"You know Mom is going to by pretty disapointed that you forgot'' said Izzy moking is dad.
'He got something plan,I know you got something plan Izzy' tought his dad. Mr.Izumi got to his knees and begged "Izzy, what do you have planed,tell me, you are killing me!"
Izzy got up and put a conforting hand on his father shoulder " Don't worry, unlike you , I remember special events"Said Izzy know with a very big smiled on his face.Izzy went to his room and came back with something that look like a panflet. His dad slowly got up and looked at Izzy who was opening an envolope that he hadden't seen.
"What is that?" asked Izzy's dad when he saw him pull out two rectangular piece of white papper with some writting on it. "Plan tickets, of course" said Izzy not really caring for his father reaction "you are going to go to Hawaii for your fiftteenth Anniversary. You will be staying a four star hotel call 'the dream come true' or for your case it would be 'thank god there was one room left and my wife won't kill' "
"Izzy , I don't know what to say" said his father chocked in emmotion that his son went trow so much trouble.That's when he remember what Izzy said, that he was going to be gone for a week, what will he do for work, but the most important was what Izzy going to do.He much to young to stay a home alone.
"Anyway Dad, I sent a e-mail to your boss and he said it was OK if you some time off. He said that with all the extra hours you do you should take two weeks off" joked Izzy as he broke trow his father strain of tought.
"But what about you Izzy? You can't stay alone."said Mr.Izumi awaiting his son's anwser for his biggest conserne. "Dad , do you really think I would forget about me?" Izzy said a bit annoyed "I talk to one of my friend, Taichi Kamiya, you know the guy with the messy brown hair and goggles. Anyway I told him that I needed a place to stay for a week because you were going away. He said he asked his mother. The only thing left to do, is for you to go to the phone and call Ms.Kamiya and confirm my staying" finish Izzy.
His dad looked a him then at the phone. He walking towards it and started to compose the number of the Kamiya residence.
*RING*RING*
"Yes Hello, Kasumi Kamiya speaking" said a soft voice.
"Oh, Hello , this is Kojiro Izumi, Izzy's father. Anyways my son said that your son said he asked you to know if you could take care of Izzy for a week. Well I just wanted to confirme to you that it's this weekend" Said Kojiro. "Yes I know and the kids are glad that's his coming"said the soft voice.
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*in the background*
"Oh great Izzy actually coming, I don't even know a thing about him, exept that he likes computers" said an exaperated Kari. "Why did you said yes to him?" "What esle could I say ,' I don't know Izzy, your like a total stanger?' I mean I can't say that!"said Tai to Kari low enought so that his mother didn't hear him. "Beside it's only a week, a week past pretty quickly, and he will probably stay on is laptop the whole time his here" "Yeah you right" signed Kari.
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"Ok thanks Ms.Kamiya , we will bring Izzy sunday night"said Mr.Izumi.
"Good, I hope you have lots of fun there, wow going to Hawaii, you know my husband frogot about our fiftteenth Anniversary.I wish he where more considerent''said Ms.Kamiya a bit mad. "Euhh, anyway see ya sunday night."
nervously responded Mr.Izumi then he hang up.
SUNDAY NIGHT
at the Kamiya 9:00
Izzy, his mom and his dad were outside of the Kamiya residence. Mr.Izumi was the one knocked on the door. "Hello, I was getting a bit worried"
said Ms.Kamiya has she open the door. "I'm sorry it's my fault i'm just worried about leaving like this" responded Ms.Izumi. "Put your worries a side, Izzy going to be fine with us" said Ms.Kamiya.
"Mom, don't worry ,I mean she live with Tai her whole life and the apparment building didn't blow up. And you should be having fun now right? Every thing is gonna be fine. Now you have my e-mail adress right? If Dad's bugging you you tell me ok?" said Izzy has if he were the parent. This made is Dad chucked a bit and he said "Don't worry Izzy I want bug your mother,I'll just be nasty'' and he gave a little wink.
Izzy simply rool is eyes as did is mother. "Well I hate to break this, but it's past 9:00 and I do think that Izzy got school tomorrow.You go to the same school as Kari right? So I expect you to sleep a the same time. I hope there's no probleme with that."
"No, not at I usually go to bed arond that time. But hum..Where is my bed?" said Izzy wondering if he was going to sleep on the floor. "Oh, you will be sleeping in Tai's bed'' Izzy was about to ask where would Tai sleep but she saw this and answer is quetion. ''Tai will be sleeping on the floor''
"Well it's seem that every thing is ok, so we should be going" Said Mr.Izumi. "Yes your right" anwsered his wife. She bet down and give a little kiss on Izzy forhead. She looked back Ms.Kamiya and said "Thanks for whatching him.'' And with that she and here husband left.
"Well Izzy , you should get ready to go to bed now'' Izzy nodded and entered the appartment.
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End of part one.
It wasn't really long I know.
Anyway you do you think?
Was It better than the first?Worse?
Please tell , and there are gonna be more chapters. (Week at Kamiya: Monday)ect
Also I'm looking for someone who may help me in my english (By that I mean editing My work) Say it in your review or e-mail me .
Well that all
-Geneviève
Here is the time setting : November first 1999 (meaning about 2 months after the digiworld)
Caracteres Ages
Izzy-10
Kari-9
Tai-14
Sora-14
Matt-14
Mimi-12
Joe-16
TK-7
(don't worry Yaoi haters there is none of it here)
Disclaimer: *Geneviève is standing on a sky-scaper with a microphone. Ear percing mal ajusted sonds come out of the gigantic speaker. See poeple turning their heads. Birds start to fly away and she begins to speak* Attention every body. I do NOT own Digimon.They are own by SABAN (and other people)So nobody sue me !* She starting to walk away. And we see a couple of lawyers talking. Let's go see what they are saying shall we?
Lawyer #1: Darn Can't sue her!
Lawyer #2: Ohh, yes we can.
Lawyers#1:Really? How?
Lawyer #2:She took the lottery advertisment.
Lawyer#1: That so true. ^_^. Can I have her cat Kino?
Lawyer#2:Sure, I'll take her other cat Lucky.
Geneviève: What your gonna take my Cats??!!
*Geneviève is seen running quickly back to the microphone *"I don't own the lottery advertisment, so you two lawyers shut up so the readers can go and read the story!"* said a really mad Geneviève.
Lawyer#1: Darn , no cats!
Lawyer#2: Lucky would have done a fine fur hat. :(
o_0 Euhh.... On with the story
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Week at the Kamiya:The arrival (1)
Izzy was setting at the dinner table , his head resting on his hand wating and looking at the door. Keys could be heard and he saw the doornob slowly turning. He say his farther coming in holding his suitcase. Izzy gaze fowolled his father has he put his coat at the usual place he put it, on the coat hangner. Finally Mr.Izumi looked at his son curiosity ,who was still looking at him.
"What is it Izzy?Something wrong?" asked his dad a bit worried by is son's behavior."Nothing's wrong , just wondering" Izzy responced a bit distant. His dad was not beliving that there nothing wrong so he asked an obvious question. "Wondering about what Izzy?"
"Ohh , just wondering what you are going to do this weekend for your fiftteenth Annirversary, that's all" said Izzy flatly. "What, wha..W..HAT!" Said his father as he remembered. "I didn't plan anything, I totally forgot!"With that Izzy produce a small satisfaction grin.
"You know Mom is going to by pretty disapointed that you forgot'' said Izzy moking is dad.
'He got something plan,I know you got something plan Izzy' tought his dad. Mr.Izumi got to his knees and begged "Izzy, what do you have planed,tell me, you are killing me!"
Izzy got up and put a conforting hand on his father shoulder " Don't worry, unlike you , I remember special events"Said Izzy know with a very big smiled on his face.Izzy went to his room and came back with something that look like a panflet. His dad slowly got up and looked at Izzy who was opening an envolope that he hadden't seen.
"What is that?" asked Izzy's dad when he saw him pull out two rectangular piece of white papper with some writting on it. "Plan tickets, of course" said Izzy not really caring for his father reaction "you are going to go to Hawaii for your fiftteenth Anniversary. You will be staying a four star hotel call 'the dream come true' or for your case it would be 'thank god there was one room left and my wife won't kill' "
"Izzy , I don't know what to say" said his father chocked in emmotion that his son went trow so much trouble.That's when he remember what Izzy said, that he was going to be gone for a week, what will he do for work, but the most important was what Izzy going to do.He much to young to stay a home alone.
"Anyway Dad, I sent a e-mail to your boss and he said it was OK if you some time off. He said that with all the extra hours you do you should take two weeks off" joked Izzy as he broke trow his father strain of tought.
"But what about you Izzy? You can't stay alone."said Mr.Izumi awaiting his son's anwser for his biggest conserne. "Dad , do you really think I would forget about me?" Izzy said a bit annoyed "I talk to one of my friend, Taichi Kamiya, you know the guy with the messy brown hair and goggles. Anyway I told him that I needed a place to stay for a week because you were going away. He said he asked his mother. The only thing left to do, is for you to go to the phone and call Ms.Kamiya and confirm my staying" finish Izzy.
His dad looked a him then at the phone. He walking towards it and started to compose the number of the Kamiya residence.
*RING*RING*
"Yes Hello, Kasumi Kamiya speaking" said a soft voice.
"Oh, Hello , this is Kojiro Izumi, Izzy's father. Anyways my son said that your son said he asked you to know if you could take care of Izzy for a week. Well I just wanted to confirme to you that it's this weekend" Said Kojiro. "Yes I know and the kids are glad that's his coming"said the soft voice.
~~~~~~~~~
*in the background*
"Oh great Izzy actually coming, I don't even know a thing about him, exept that he likes computers" said an exaperated Kari. "Why did you said yes to him?" "What esle could I say ,' I don't know Izzy, your like a total stanger?' I mean I can't say that!"said Tai to Kari low enought so that his mother didn't hear him. "Beside it's only a week, a week past pretty quickly, and he will probably stay on is laptop the whole time his here" "Yeah you right" signed Kari.
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"Ok thanks Ms.Kamiya , we will bring Izzy sunday night"said Mr.Izumi.
"Good, I hope you have lots of fun there, wow going to Hawaii, you know my husband frogot about our fiftteenth Anniversary.I wish he where more considerent''said Ms.Kamiya a bit mad. "Euhh, anyway see ya sunday night."
nervously responded Mr.Izumi then he hang up.
SUNDAY NIGHT
at the Kamiya 9:00
Izzy, his mom and his dad were outside of the Kamiya residence. Mr.Izumi was the one knocked on the door. "Hello, I was getting a bit worried"
said Ms.Kamiya has she open the door. "I'm sorry it's my fault i'm just worried about leaving like this" responded Ms.Izumi. "Put your worries a side, Izzy going to be fine with us" said Ms.Kamiya.
"Mom, don't worry ,I mean she live with Tai her whole life and the apparment building didn't blow up. And you should be having fun now right? Every thing is gonna be fine. Now you have my e-mail adress right? If Dad's bugging you you tell me ok?" said Izzy has if he were the parent. This made is Dad chucked a bit and he said "Don't worry Izzy I want bug your mother,I'll just be nasty'' and he gave a little wink.
Izzy simply rool is eyes as did is mother. "Well I hate to break this, but it's past 9:00 and I do think that Izzy got school tomorrow.You go to the same school as Kari right? So I expect you to sleep a the same time. I hope there's no probleme with that."
"No, not at I usually go to bed arond that time. But hum..Where is my bed?" said Izzy wondering if he was going to sleep on the floor. "Oh, you will be sleeping in Tai's bed'' Izzy was about to ask where would Tai sleep but she saw this and answer is quetion. ''Tai will be sleeping on the floor''
"Well it's seem that every thing is ok, so we should be going" Said Mr.Izumi. "Yes your right" anwsered his wife. She bet down and give a little kiss on Izzy forhead. She looked back Ms.Kamiya and said "Thanks for whatching him.'' And with that she and here husband left.
"Well Izzy , you should get ready to go to bed now'' Izzy nodded and entered the appartment.
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End of part one.
It wasn't really long I know.
Anyway you do you think?
Was It better than the first?Worse?
Please tell , and there are gonna be more chapters. (Week at Kamiya: Monday)ect
Also I'm looking for someone who may help me in my english (By that I mean editing My work) Say it in your review or e-mail me .
Well that all
-Geneviève