So, I got this review a while about my story "PJO and HoO characters theme songs" saying something like "Cool, but it isn't really FanFiction" It's been bugging me ever since, so I've decided to change the syle a bit. Don't Worry, the songs will stay the same as the other story, the chapter style will just be different. So without further ado:
Mr. D was sitting at the weekly counselor meeting, this close to losing his cool. This had been a particularly bad week, and all the counselors were shouting at him at once about what Brandon had done during Sword fighting, or Jayden had done during campfire...It was an absolute mess! He wanted to make the little brats spontaneously combust, but that would involve a bunch of paperwork...Finally, he'd had enough.
"SHUT UP!" He yelled, jumping out of his seat. The room went deathly quiet. He angrily stomped outside, muttering to himself.
"Demigods
Demigods
Everywhere I turn I can see them."
A pair of 8 year olds ran past giggling, but stopped short as they saw his mood, waiting for him to walk by before continuing their game.
"Demigods
Demigods
Night and day
I eat, sleep and breathe them"
He stopped to rest on a bench, but immediately hopped back up and looked donw. He had sat on someones spear. Growling, he snapped it in two. Not that it made him feel any better.
"Demi cheeks
Demi teeth
Everything around me is Demi"
As he nearly tripped over a sheild someone left lying around, he wondered if Zeus would let him get away with killing one or two of the little brats.
"If I wring
Demi necks
Surely I will get an acquittal"
He made his way to the cabin circel. He gazed at the large, lavish cabins for the other gods, then his own small one. WHile it was the perfect size for his two sons, it was dissappointing to be outdone by the others.
"Some gods are dripping with diamonds
Some gods are dripping with pearls
Lucky me! Lucky me!
Look at what I'm dripping with
Demigods"
He heard something crunch under his feet and looked down. There was a random shoe laying there. Grumbling, he picked it up and threw behind him, not even pausing when he heard a loud "OW!"
"How I hate
Demi shoes
Demi socks
And each Demi bloomer"
Two of the cabin counselors started walking up to him, bickering angrily, then backed off when they saw the look on his face.
"I'd have cracked
Years ago
If it weren't for my
Sense of humor"
When he was nearly hit with a stray arrown form archery, you could practically see the steam coming off of him. One day he would get his revenge. One Day...
"Some day
I'll step on their freckles
Some night
I'll straighten their curls
Send a flood
Send the flu
Anything that you can do
To Demigods"
He walked past a large group of Demi-gods all shouting something different, proably a spirit game or something. He winced. I fhe didn't get out here soon he would go insane. And he was the God of insanity.
"Someday I'll land in the nut house
With all the nuts and the squirrels
There I'll stay
Locked away
'til the prohibition of
Demigods"
Song used: Litte Girls from Annie.
Yeah...Hopefully this seems a little more FanFiction-esque. Please, leave in a review, do you like this style or the old stye better?
By the way, I don't own Little Orphan Annie. Just saying.
And, I apologize for any mistakes, it's almost 11pm where I live.
See y'all...next time I update!
-WolfyBD