I do not own Cars or any of its characters.
PIXAR AND DISNEY CLAIM THAT RIGHT.
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Please read and review! I need criticism and encouragements!
Rated M for language and sex.
The OC -John Black- Belongs to Ghost 1998
First things first: Names (Some had to be changed because of the other story)
Tara(A huge shout out toQwerty for that awesome name)-Lightning and Sally McQueen's 15 year old daughter, and racing prodigy
Thunder-Chick and Chelsea Hick's 15 old son
Bella-Lightning's Mother
Chelsea-Chick Hick's wife
Chance-Tara's Boyfriend and love interest
Brody-Lightning's brother
Monte-Sally's father
Lilly-Sally's mother
All cannon and all other original charter's names are remaining the same
AN: REVEWS- I HAVE CHANGED ALL THE NAMES THAT NEEDED TO BE CHANGED TO MATCH THE NEW STORY.
Shit! Brody really is a fraudulent shit spreader. He's just trying to brake Lightning, Riley, Bella, Sally, and Tara's lives coz he's not one for owning up to his guilt and to get a satisfaction nobody will grant him.-That's because he is a selfish bastared, who only cares about himself.
Good job in Riley and Doc holding Lightning back. No doubt the evidence from Tara's black box will seal his fate and destroy all the shit he made up. Nice job.-Yep, it will.
The fact that Brody mentioned that he had a knife he's just given himself away and sealed his fate even more. There's no excuse or defence for having a knife coz that's a dead straight jail sentence. The judge should put that statement to him-Good idea, I'll have to write that in.
The idea from QWERTY about Brody trying to kill the baby sounds alarming but if you do add that to a part of your story then please make a part where Lightning really ends it for Brody with authorised permission of course.-I'm, considering it
From Brody going that extreme he should pay by having his fate sealed. Here's another idea I've just thought of. It is your choice though. Lightning's retired from racing and needs another job. He's a very strong willed, extremely fast, and communicative car and he doesn't get so easily offended even by Brody from verbal abusive attitude so he would make a brilliant police interceptor alongside the sheriff and Scarlett. You can't lie to him either as we all established from Tara making that mistake and when his parents tried to hide Brody's arrest for drugs from him. My nephew has the cars toons DVD of Mater's tales and Lightning looked pretty intimidating as a police lieutenant. Just an idea. See what you think?-Like my best friend pointed out. Lightning's bad axle won't let him go over 85 when it's acting up, he would never be accepted into the police academy. So Lightning can't be a full time police car, but I'm thinking that he can be a reserved officer. That way Scarlet and Dunkin can train him themselves, John might help as well. Then all Lightning would need to do is be certified as a deputy by the state police.
Hi. I read the horrible comment the reviewer who insulted your story.-Some people are just assholes, because he's jealous. If you want to see what horrible stories that sound like they are written by a retarded 5 year old, read some of his.
I'm sorry to hear that you won't be writing this particular story any further but I look forward to reading your new stories. I can respect you wanting to work it all yourself so I won't leave any ideas unless you ask me. You're a brilliant writer no doubt. You make a story entertaining, exclusive, and striking to attract happy reviewers so never give up and let the insult from that reviewer drag you down.-Like I said there is always one asshole around, to fuck things up.
Whatever you do with your stories is your choice nobody else's. Of course I'll leave you a comment to your chapters but like I said I'll leave you to write whatever you decide unless you ask for some ideas. Thank you for your brilliant stories. Looking forward to your new ones. Good job -NO… PLEASE! Don't stop sending me ideas please! (Don't make me beg) Most of your ideas are brilliant. They make the story awesome.
Guest-From all the evidence presented to the jury over Brody stealing, his abusive nature, his verbal and physically abusive actions throughout the court case, all the fraudulent bullshit he spat out about Lightning, Sally, Tara, Riley, and Bella and the fact that he's rebelling against his actions all proves significantly to the jury that he's the guilty party with guilt written all over his bumper and its in his criminal record positively what he's been to prison for. Most criminals will rebel against there offences as they are cowards and don't know what honesty is. You could have a part where Tara secretly recorded the porn statement that Brody spat out towards her on her black box as well as the rape part and when they play the evidence Brody and the family are all taken by surprise. Tara is a smart girl remember. Your choice though, you decide. Hope Brody gets banged up soon.-The entire attack was recorded, so the jury will hear everything that Brody said to Tara.
Qwerty-What About-Ena Nyree McQueen, Lilian Jeanie McQueen, Jodie Krystine McQueen, Madysin Evalina McQueen, Merylin Alishia McQueen, Celestine Cyndi McQueen, Ami Val McQueen, Amidala McQueen, Corté Evagelina McQueen, Jacqueline Annabella McQueen-Thank you. Wonderful list of names… I will pick something from this list. However I will not revel the name until the baby is born.
You Know You literally Confirmed that Skye Is Having A Girl.-Yeah, I released that after I posted it. I look at it this way…It's an early Christmas gift.
Also, The Doc-Villian Plot I recommended, you should have doc had a child that he didn't know about, but before his accident. I actually got this idea from another Cars Fic Also Named like father like daughter, from when I googled this story. It's on hiatus for who Knows how long. But anyway, it was about doc having a wife that died from the race car that crashed doc, but she died across the country 50 years later after she ran away, carrying their child, a girl Dodge Viper ACR. She found doc and stayed with, but the evil race car stalks her. It's also rated m, so I would be careful if you post it, cause there may be readers that aren't old enough for...Certain Chapters, so they just skip over them(Even tho we both know they read them anyway).-I don't know. I have another idea for Doc/Villon plot.
Or You Could Transfer This Work to Wattpad. Are they demanding all three, or just like father like daughter-All three. What is Wattpad? I work retail and with this time of year. I've been busy and haven't had time to look and see.
I KNOW THAT THIS STORY WILL BE A LITTLE CONFUSING WITH THE NAME CHANGES. BUT IT WILL GET EASIER IN A FEW CHAPTERS.
OKAY, I'LL SHUT UP NOW AND LET YOU GET TO THE STORY!