Disclaimer- I wish I owned Legolas...really, I do.
Author's Note- Someone please, please help me think of a title!! I'm on my hands and knees here! I'm begging! PLEASE!!! Without further ado...
Thinking
Chapter 1
The young girl of 23 walked into her house and dropped her purse. She had long, flowing dirty blond hair, was tall, and had a deep tan. She was young, but didn't look it. She had been having a very bad week.
Her boyfriend dumped her, her car broke down in the middle of nowhere, an her dog had been hit by a car. She wondered to herself why she had it so hard, what had she done so wrong. She walked to the front door, and saw a box.
She picked it up, and she looked at it.
Secret Wood
P.O. Box 332
Sullivan, Illinois
61951
" Finally!" she exclaimed. She tore open the box, and then picked up the smaller box covered in bubble wrap. Secret uncovered the bubble wrap, and looked at the small, royal blue velvet box. It had neat little writing all over it. She was guessing it was Elvish.
Before she opened the box, she thought back to the day she had ordered it.
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She had been searching the Internet, and she found the Lord of the Rings official site. She looked at the souvenir stuff, and found the ring. It was a fake, of course. It was a fake of the One Ring to rule them all. She found it so interesting, so she bought it.
Secret had lived a nice, calm country life, but when she ordered it, she had never in her life been so razzed by everyone for liking something so childish. But she didn't care. She loved everything about Lord of the Rings. The books, the movies, the sites, the whole deal.
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She jumped back into reality, and started to open the box.
Secret caught the breath that was going to escape. The ring looked so real. It even had the little marks of the poem to go with it. She slowly slid it on her finger, and felt a chill go up her spine. The chill was so disturbing, she took the ring off, and put it back in the box.
She started to feel light headed, and fell to the ground, going into the realm of unconsciousness.
So, what do ya'll think? Don't ask me where I came up with her name. But I like it. Strange, and I like strange things. I hate being made fun of for liking something like Lord of the Rings. But that other peoples problems if they don't like LotR. Please review!!!
Cleo
Author's Note- Someone please, please help me think of a title!! I'm on my hands and knees here! I'm begging! PLEASE!!! Without further ado...
Thinking
Chapter 1
The young girl of 23 walked into her house and dropped her purse. She had long, flowing dirty blond hair, was tall, and had a deep tan. She was young, but didn't look it. She had been having a very bad week.
Her boyfriend dumped her, her car broke down in the middle of nowhere, an her dog had been hit by a car. She wondered to herself why she had it so hard, what had she done so wrong. She walked to the front door, and saw a box.
She picked it up, and she looked at it.
Secret Wood
P.O. Box 332
Sullivan, Illinois
61951
" Finally!" she exclaimed. She tore open the box, and then picked up the smaller box covered in bubble wrap. Secret uncovered the bubble wrap, and looked at the small, royal blue velvet box. It had neat little writing all over it. She was guessing it was Elvish.
Before she opened the box, she thought back to the day she had ordered it.
------
She had been searching the Internet, and she found the Lord of the Rings official site. She looked at the souvenir stuff, and found the ring. It was a fake, of course. It was a fake of the One Ring to rule them all. She found it so interesting, so she bought it.
Secret had lived a nice, calm country life, but when she ordered it, she had never in her life been so razzed by everyone for liking something so childish. But she didn't care. She loved everything about Lord of the Rings. The books, the movies, the sites, the whole deal.
----
She jumped back into reality, and started to open the box.
Secret caught the breath that was going to escape. The ring looked so real. It even had the little marks of the poem to go with it. She slowly slid it on her finger, and felt a chill go up her spine. The chill was so disturbing, she took the ring off, and put it back in the box.
She started to feel light headed, and fell to the ground, going into the realm of unconsciousness.
So, what do ya'll think? Don't ask me where I came up with her name. But I like it. Strange, and I like strange things. I hate being made fun of for liking something like Lord of the Rings. But that other peoples problems if they don't like LotR. Please review!!!
Cleo
