Disclaimer: I do not own Pokemon or any related characters, ideas, or any thing else related to Pokemon.
I rewrote the first chapter because I was lazy the first time and now I improved the chapter review and let me know how I did thanks.
Chapter 1
"Lightningshark get your butt out of bed" JC, my fathers Talking Kabutops said
"10 more minutes JC" I asked
"No, I gave you a warning, Thunder" JC said as he fried me with the most powerful electric attack
"Thank you for the morning refreshment" I said after I shake off the jolt
"You should get an electric Pokemon because you love the voltage so much" my Father said as I finished getting ready "your license arrived in the mail, you better hurry to the lab to get your first Pokemon" my father added
"Thank you" I said running out of the house
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The trip to the lab was not very long and when I got there an assistant was opening the lab
"Hello I see you got your license, you are here to get your starter Pokemon." The assistant said
"Yes I am" I told the assistant as I was shown into the lab
I was greeted by a woman with long green hair, and a large white lab coat
"Hello I'm professor Maple we have three Starters Bulbasaur, Cyndaquil, and Mudkip. Which one will you choose" the woman asked
"I choose Cyndaquil" I said picking up Cyndaquil's ball
"Just to let you know that Pokemon is bizarre it Knows thunder shock, ember, Thunderbolt, and flame tackle" Professor Maple said
"Alright I got a Fire-Electric Pokemon" I said joyfully as I let Cyndaquil out of its ball
Cyn-da-quil the fire Pokemon said as it zapped me
"You have the best Thundershock attack to" I said as I left the lab thanking Professor Maple
As I got outside the lab there was a shadowy individual standing in front of me
"Give me your Pokemon, this here is a robbery" the robber yelled
"Let me think about it uuh no" I said as I started to walk away
"Yo think you so tough not when I am through you wont" The robber said
"What did they kick you out of Preschool" I said to the robber
"That it Magnimite, Lairon go" the robber yelled calling out his pokemon
"Cyndaquil, here is our first battle use ember on Magnimite and then use flame tackle on Lairon" I said
Cyndaquil assailed Magnemite with ember causing it to faint; using the momentum from the first attack Cyndaquil landed a powerful flame tackle on Lairon
"Now finish off Lairon with a second ember attack" I yelled as Cyndaquil overwhelmed Lairon with ember
"This is not over" the robber yelled as he ran away
"You are awesome Cyndaquil" I told Cyndaquil as I headed back to my house to celebrate my birthday
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When I got home my mother cuddled Cyndaquil. And he seemed to like all the attention he was getting as well as the food. I got several poke balls, a large unabridged reference books and a new outfit.
When it got too late we all went to sleep
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I will start work on chapters 4,8 soon