I'm reposting Curse of the Genie

I'm reposting Curse of the Genie!

Added descriptions of why I did it (you don't have to listen if you don't want to!)

I've gone over it a couple times and realized some mistakes, not only with grammar, but with bluntness and no explanations. Please don't fault me for it; it was one of my first stories as a writer and I hadn't developed any technique yet—plus I have no patience for outsider revision. If this version seem more drawn out for you and you don't like it, then I'm sorry, but I just don't like it that way. So, without further ado, here's my rewritten version of Curse of the Genie (which I might redo again if I refine my technique any more (but I hope not :-P))