Unwanted Potential

Chapter One: Something Sue

Alyssa Bethany Caroline Della Evelyn Flora Hailey Genifer Irena Jasmine Kayla Lauren Makai Nola Olivia Payah Qwerty Rebekah Stella Tara Ula Vanessa Whitney Xena Zeller was total Mary-Sue. However it didn't matter for her author never published, wrote down, or even talked about her. She was just a daydream and was perfectly fine with that.

Alice Kayla Teller was an ordinary girl. She was slightly obsessive about anime, but she told no one about this. She had a secret identity on a web site called FanFiction. There she read many stories about fan characters or 'OCs' that were introduced to an anime. Some were about girls form the real world who was transported there. Some were about awesome characters were great at whatever the main character was and met him then went one super cool adventures.

Her favorite anime and manga was Full Metal Alchemist. She had only read about ten chapters and watched about fifteen episodes, but she loved it. She decided to write a fan fic about it. One with her awesome character Alyssa who would join the military as an alchemist and…

She rushed over to her computer and began to type. This would be good. And original.

Edward Elric waz the younget state alckemist in ameties. But rite now that didnt sem to help…

Alice glanced over her work. It was a bit ruff around the edges, but okay. She might need a beta reader or at lest a spell checker.
She opened Internet Explorer and looked over her homepage that was FanFiction. There it was! "Download OpenOffice 3.2 for PCs and Macs. OpenOffice is a free word processing software produced by ." She hit download and waited for the little green bars to finish their job.

She swiveled around in the wheeled chair. She had lot of ideas for her story. She couldn't wait to read the endless supply of reviews.

Edward Elric was the younget state alckemist in ameties. But rite now that didnt sem to help.

'I spent al of lest knight think about what we believe alchemy's are.' Ed said.

Al said, 'Alchemy is know, analysic, and recreation of the law and current that exist within a substance.'

A teen girl with light bond hare and blue is. 'is somthg wrong.'

'ed smilded dopely. 'yeah.'

'U can talk2 me.'

That was what stared ed and Alyssa's fiendship...

Alice grinned and hit the save button. Her story was the best.

Edward Elric was the youngest State Alchemist in Amestrsis, but right now that didn't matter. It didn't matter. All the faith he put in his alchemy was fading.
"I spent all of last night thinking about what we believed alchemy is." Ed muttered. His brother little Alphonse turned to him.

Al answered, "Alchemy is knowledge, analysis, and re-creation of the laws and currents that exist within a substance."

"And now I'm think I'm starting to whether I could have done something about something I can't do anything about." Rain fell as Ed looked up to see a girl. She was looking up at the sky shouting some profane insults.

"You can't make me be a Mary-Sue! I won't!" He stared at girl. She was beautiful with long blond hair, stunning blue-violet eyes, and right now if looks could kill the "author" would be dead.

"What's with you?" Ed asked. She spun round.

"Forget about me." She ran off into the street.

Alyssa was happy being a Sue, but Author never wrote about her. She probably could do alchemy just like Edward but better. She knew all about automail and was better than Winery. The author never like girls who were in the way of "better fan characters." She didn't want to be a Mary-Sue that hundreds could read.

So she wouldn't be. She wouldn't even look at Ed ever again. Easier said than done.

"AL! Run away!" Screams reached her ears as the Sue watched the fight unfold.
She was the ultimate character but she felt rather queasy. She should at least tell someone. It really did look like Ed was going to die.
"You won't get away." Scar's calm voce jerked her focus back. Ed was running. Fast.

'He really thinks he's going to die,' Alyssa thought. 'I can at least follow.' She ran slipping and sliding on the slick ground after the killer and prey. She sped past buildings and signs to where near where the older Elric had fallen. His arm was broken. He looked done for.

"Stop!" The Sue didn't' know what she was doing until she collided with Scar.

"Those who interfere must perish!" He yelled advancing.

"Great!" Alyssa grinned. "Just finish me off nice and clean."

This was perfect she would die before ever really meeting any of the characters and destroying them with her Sue-ishness. Honestly she didn't want to be killed, but she knew what would happen if she didn't. Everyone would become out of character and love her mighty Sueness. Winery would transform into a jerk. It was just another of the bad Sue stories. Except this Sue was going down without a fight.

Alice wanted to check for reviews. She had looked only a fifteen minutes ago, but she really wanted to see.

'Great story! I love Sue bashing. I wasn't expecting this when I read the summary. ~SuelessAlchemist'
"Sue bashing?" the young authoress said aloud. "What's a sue?"

But there were to more.
'You should make this humor/parody not romance. I loved it though.
~TheRandomFangirl'
It was romance! She's written it that way.

'Wat? Why is ed not likikn aliysa? I thought u sid tey mad 4 eacother.
~EdWinHater'
EdWinHater or Bethany was her best friend and the only one who knew of her anime-craze. What was she talking about?

Something was wrong here. Alice looked lover her story. Sure enough it wasn't romance. It was a parody of some fan character who didn't want to fall in love with Ed. Instead of Ed shouting for her to leave and Alyssa trying hard saving them both she ...was suicidal! What was going on? This story was awful.

Scar locked eyes with the girl. Was she suicidal? He wasn't sure. He'd better just finish the deed before the military arrived.
A gunshot broke the temporary silence.

"That's as far as you go," Roy Mustang said to Scar.

'Aw, dang it,' thought Alyssa. She wasn't going to die that easily. The calvary was here.

~-~-~-~
If you haven't already guessed I'm writing a Sue parody fic. This is my first FMA fiction so I hope I'm doing okay. It's about a teen-aged fanficton authoress's fan character Alyssa. When Alice writes her story and posts it it changes inexplicably. What happened is when she posted her story she really put her OC in the FMA universe, but the OC doesn't want to be a Sue. So she has all the powers of one, but won't really act like it.
If that wasn't comprehensible whack me one the head and steal a cyber cookie. Do the same if you think anyone is OOC or if you have any constructive criticism. You mave a brownie if you review. I will giggle if you flame or torch me.

I do not own the anime or manga Full Metal Alchemist (all quotes were taken from the book chapter 6 and 7 on OneManga dot com), OpenOffice 3.2, Internet Explorer, or anything other than the plot, Alice, and Alyssa. Please do not be offended if your username is on the review list. I don't know if the users exist and the names are use fictionally.