Ok, this is a short story and it may be pretty weird for someone who's not balanced at writing but this is my story based on the Incredibles movie. Hope you like it!
Reminder: I do NOT own or direct the movie or the characters so please don't sue me if you think I'm offending the characters. I would do no such thing!
Off with a bang…
"Get me some more orange crush now!" Bellatric cried to a servant.
"As you wish your holiness!"
"Shut up and do it NOW!"
It was a dark stormy day and the new evil teenager was sitting on the royal throne. She had taken over Syndrome's place and was resuming his glamorous work, or as she says so. Her name, is Bellatric (Bell-a-trick), ruler of electricity. Her sisters, Icy and Mage, were also in favour of Syndrome's work. Here's a little bio about those trio:
Bellatric doesn't control electricity but can use electricity. Her specialty, The Electric Bang, can cause a black out for days. Never mess with her! She's the leader of the three. But if you know her weak spot, she's as weak as a sponge! As you all know, or I hope you know, if electricity touches water, well, let's just say the next scene won't be pretty! And the scenes of horror on people's faces in between don't count!
Icy is the youngest of the three. But don't let that fool you, she can create ice as thick as a house and as strong as metal. Oh and did I mention the part where she uses ice and water? Obviously her weak spot is fire and the bigger it is, the better.
Mage is a pro on magic and potions. She's somewhat good and bad. Mage does have an evil reputation but never liked Syndrome so why would she like to do his dirty work? Still, Mage can brew up evil potions and cast horrible spells on those who are irritating and remind her about Syndrome. Her weak spot is unknown to everyone, including to her sisters. But there are rumours that her worst fear is snakes.
I warn you, though; the amount of people who know their weakness is 0.002 of the whole universe! And most of them are dead. Anyways, continuing with the story.
"Jack," Bellatric commanded to the leader of the soldiers. "Have you found any trace of the whereabouts the Incredibles are?"
Jack bowed deeply. "No, your holiness. The broken house that Syndrome's last battle was is still imprinted in our computer but they had long ago moved."
"I'm not interested in the history," Bellatric snapped. "I only want to eliminate all heroes that Syndrome wrote on the sheet of paper and the Incredibles are on top!"
"The washroom is free if you still got an erupting bladder." Icy came over with a towel in her hair. "What's going on?"
Bellatric stood up and walked to the washroom briskly. Icy stared. "What's up with her?" She asked.
"You don't want to know, honestly" Jack muttered and looked at his computer screen. "Emails, junk as usual." He checked his inbox. "Too boring, not interested, another love request etc. Hey, what's this?" There was an email he'd never seen before. It read "Alert!"
"What you gazing at now?" Mage asked impatiently. How did she turn up? Icy thought. That's impossible! No wait; this is the pro of magic I'm talking about. She could have used magic of some kind to teleport here. Mage looked at the screen too. "Alert?"
"Read it," Icy said. Jack turned to look at them. "No way," He said. "This is my email box, not yours so back-"
"Read it," Icy repeated, this time, more threateningly. "Or face the snow." Jack shivered. Even hearing her talk could feel like plunging into a bucket of cold water. "Ok," He opened the email.
Mage gasped. Icy's mouth dropped and Jack's eyes were as round as a CD. For on it was recorded a short note:
"The Incredibles are hiding in California!"
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