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So, this is just a MIT piece, the way I wrote it was to be choppy, so you can get all of the different perspective without changing tenses or pretexts.
Review please, and Enjoy.
-BN
The late Autumn breeze flows freely through the trees. Whistling past flowers with dainty petals,
the weaker petals fall and gracefully soar with the Autumn breeze. The birds greet it with a loop,
as it ruffles their feathers gently. One of the petals lands on an oblivious bird. Startled the bird takes flight with the Autumn breeze.
It slowly pushes the bird along, the bird becomes part of the great soar. The fallen Autumn leaves join the Autumn breeze, the soar continues,
growing faster. Animals on the ground look up to great the Autumn breeze, it surrounds them and hugs them knowing that they wont be able to join it,
they nod sadly and continue on with their work. The Autumn breeze breathes goodbye and continues on. A bird lands near a girl, and calls to her,
The girl looks up, her hair moving in the sudden breeze. Her eyes land upon a fallen petal. She picks it up admiring its beauty.
The sudden breeze whispers farewell in her ear, the bird once again takes flight cooing anon, the petal starts to rise and stir.
The girl clutches it to her chest and softly whispers adieu, opening up her hand and letting it go. She watches the petal soar side by side with the bird,
as it does a graceful whirl in the breeze...
...The late Autumn breeze sighs contently and continues on...
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Review, Thanks!