OK this is my first VK Fiction so tell me how i can make it a lot more scary, ok brian is brain, :) ok its also going to be a series, and this is a homework thing for school so not to scary if you have any ideas...

I woke up in the middle a hospital the room was dark and the floor looked cold, i dont know what happened, but something was odd, i accidentally bit my tongue it was bleeding badly and then healed, the nurse came in and opened the curtains and the light was blinding " good morning you were out for a week, ya know" she said loud, i heard her pulse, her pulse? "AAAH!, what is happening to me" the nurse tried to calm me down " i'm not to sure, please calm down" i ran away from the nurse, the nurse run to grab me when i hit someone in the chest "i'm having the worst of luck" i whispered " um, nurse ill take care of her ill sign her out" the nurse walked away then i said " who are you?" he was very tall like super-model tall and he had dark brown hair and with brown eyes, he wore a white school uniform, he went to the office and signed me out, i walked to get dressed in my clothes that were nice and clean but my turtle neck had two holes in it. "are you ready?" he said i walked out and followed him out i saw a limousine he walked in and said " come" i walked in and accidentally hit my head "ow" i heard laughing, i sat next to a guy with orange hair and blue eyes with the same uniform on. my ash blonde hair covered a bit of my face "my name is Kaname Kuran" he started and pointed to the others "this is Yuki & Adio" yuki had brown hair and light brown hair and wore a black version of the uniform, adio had the same uniform as kuran. "where are you taking me?" kuran stared at me for a bit and said"to cross Academy do you know what you are?" i remembered my past on the monday...

on monday

There was man walking to the door & the kids, the ones i was looking after while there mom was out for the night, they were fast asleep, i was cooking a little snack, when all of a sudden the door flew right open i heard foot steps and then a loud voice a voice i knew

"Come here, Yukiko i want to see you" my legs forced me to walk towards him but my brian said no.

when i got deadly close to his chest when i looked up it was the man i knew his name was Eric, his orange hair covered a bit of his eye's they were blood red as in vampire red eye's, his fangs just pocked they were stained red and yellow.

" why is it that your here, eric?" and just then i heard faint, but noticeable screams in the kids rooms.

"Eric? what have you done?" i shouted in anger not knowing my fate,

"well let me put it simply, i love you, but you love someone else so, im going to keep you forever, lets hope you survive" he said in a dangerous voice one that could hurt ones ears.

my light orange eyes were filled with shock when i noticed he reached for my neck i was a frozen statue and then it happened.

his fangs. were in my neck. i tried to scream but he put his hand over my mouth, i tried to fight, but i was too weak and when he finished i fell to the ground...

back to present day

i looked at my pale skin, i felt so cold & i could hear there pulse...bu-dump bu-dump...

and then i knew "Im not Dead or Alive, so i'm a vampire" and that was the start of my undead life...