A lady is walking from fl suddenly she received a private msg

Lady: pata nai ye mujhe bar bar kyu pareshan karta

Then she was went to her car and started it

Uffo ye start kyu nahi hota , yaar ab is ko fuel khatam hogaya ab mai ghar kaise jau

A horn sound came from back

She saw a familiar face and smiled at him

Aajau hum aap ko ghar chod dete hai

He opened front door for her .she smiled and sat beside him

Again she received a got tensed by reading it.

He saw her tensed and asked her - kya hua tarika tum pareshan kyu lag rahi ho

Ku...kuch nai mai thik hu .she covered the topic by saying - thank you abhijeet mujhe lift dene ke like liye

Abhi : tarka jee aapko thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi .aap ka tension door karne ke liye mere paas ek tarika hai

He switched on the radio

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya vajood mera

Tujh se juda kar hojaayenge to

khud se hi hojaayene juda

Kyun ki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Abhi 's pov: mai jaanta hu tarika tum kuch din se pareshaan ho .

Mujhe kuch na kuch karke pata laga na hi hoga ki tumhari pareshani ki wajah kya hai

Tarika' s povai tumhe kaise batau abhijeet ki lya hua hai.

Suddenly car stopped.

Tarika: kya hua abhijeet tumne gaadi kyu rok di

Abhi:hum aap ko aapke ghar chod denge lekin dinner ke baad

She smiled and went to restaurant with him

Abhi with his nok jhok made her happy

He dropped her near her home.

Tarika: thank u abhi , and good night.

Abhi: wah bhai aaj mere night good hone wali hai kyu ki aap ne good night jo kaha

Tarika smiled and went inside.

She went near door and rang the bell.

She again received the msg . she got very angry .Her father opened the door and her .

Tf: kya hua tarika tum pareshan kyu lag rahi ho.

Tarika: kuch nahi sone jaa rahi hu.

Tf: thik hai beta good night.

She went to her room and forget to lock it

She went to fresh up . suddenly light was gone

She heard a sound near the door .

Tarika:kon kon hai waha pe

The man came near her she started to shout.

Man: marwao gi kya tarika

She recognized his voice abhijeet tum

Abhi: ha mai

Tarika: is waqt yaha

Abhi : kuch bhool gaya tha

Tarika: kya

Abhi: tum ne good night to kaha lekin good night kiss to nahi dia .he said very innocently

Tarika blushed by hearing this .

He came near and they both were lost in each other.

He came near and first kissed on her fore head

She blushed harder.

He very slowly kissed on her cheeks

Then he kissed on her lips.

After some time they broke the kiss due to need of oxygen

Tarika blushing and she says that abhi mujhe lagta hai thume chal na chahiye

Abhi: ethini bhi jaldi kya hai

She blushed and pushed him outside.

This time she received a call from private number.

She lifted it and said hello.

Other side : hello jaan kaise ho .bohat romance karliya hai us abhijeet ke saath.

Tarika: kon ho tum.

Other side : mera chodo tum uss abhijeet ki jaan ka chinta jald wo marne wala hai.

Tar: tum abhijeet ko kyu marna chahte ho.

Other side : bohat jald tumhe pata chal tumhara abhijeet mar jayega aur tum mere ho jaogi and he cut the call

Tar: tum abhijeet ka baal bhi baka nahi kar paogi . samjhe tum. She threw the phone and cried.

So guys how is this, should i continue.
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