Heyy, so before I start I do not own Harry Potter :'( even if I wish I did…. So before I start rambling lets begin.
Backstory:
This take place at the start of the 6th year at Hogwarts.
Numb, that was the only word to explain how she felt at that exact moment, completely and utterly numb, she stared past the police tape and the flashing blue lights, past the police, firemen and the paramedics, she was staring at the wreckage of the blue ford wrapped around the lamppost. She could feel her body poorly attempting to escape the firm grasp the two policemen had on her as her chestnut hair became stuck to her face by the unstopping rain and then it all stopped, the rain, being held, trying to move and the numbness, it all stopped.
The Hogwarts express left the station in a billow of steam covering all the waving parents and families who they were leaving behind, Harry slumped further back into his seat as he looked over at the girl he thought he knew so well, so many things had changed in the past months and that is was no wonder she was the shell of her former self. Her once brown hair which had always been held in a bun was now dyed black and hung around her face like curtains blocking out the world, her eyes that used to hold such knowledge and intrigue looked red from the crying which she hid herself away every night to do and were sunken back into her face, her skin now hung from her once slender frame like an ill-fitting dress. It was safe to say Hermione Granger was gone and he nor anybody else was sure what was left and neither did they really want to know.
Four carriages down sat Draco Malfoy, Blaise Zabini and Pansy Parkinson all in their pristine robes, and looking to any outsider as if they didn't have a thing in life to worry about other than what luxury they would spend their money on next. Behind the closed doors of the carriage was another story completely. "Draco" whispered pansy "Draco do yo… do you know when.." she faltered again as her eyes flitted across the interior like a rabbit caught in the headlights. "No" it was a simple enough answer that had left his lips but it left them all feeling like they knew even less than they last did of the predicament they had found themselves in just weeks ago.
So let me now what you think of the intro and if you like I will carry on writing :)