Rivalry: Rini and Serena

One day while Rini was walking home from school someone had snuck up behind her and kidnapped her! That very same day when Serena was going over to Darien's place she stopped. Just out of the blue stopped and turned around. Now she was very scared and suspicious. 'Is somebody following me or, is it just my imagination?' Serena thought to herself as she continued walking down the empty sidewalk. She paused for a moment to look both ways before crossing the street when.someone grabbed her mouth and taped it shut.
Serena awoke several hours after Rini did; of course she needed her beauty sleep. When she rose from the ground something was different, something just didn't feel right. She looked around her and it hit her. literally, it hit her. The waves of the Pacific Ocean crashed on her feet like it would upon the rocks. Serena looked down at her feet and suddenly became completely brain dead. She had no idea where she was or how she had gotten there.
Serena had spotted Rini and had started walking over to her. "Do you have any idea how we got here?" Serena asked as she came closer to Rini. "No." Rini replied not taking her eyes off of the ocean. "I don't. Do you?" she asked taking her eyes off of the beautiful sunset across the ocean. "No. If I did why would I ask you?" Serena said with such a tone that made Rini very angry with her. "What are you doing? Do you wanna start a fight with me Serena? Well, do you? Because you realize that getting that kind of tone with me WILL start a fight between us!" Rini snapped.

How did you like it? It's my first so don't flame me please!