Inside And Out

by Destinyhopexd

Tris is being bullied, has been for practicly all her life. And the only way for her to heal the pain is by using more pain: self harm. She has some friends, and her brother but they only know whats going on at school. Whats really happing is she is breaking a little each day inside and out. Rated M for gore, sexual themes and language. No FourTris.

Hello people I am writing my first story! Please read and review, also comment on how I am doing I could always use the feedback now lets begin! :)

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TRIS POV

OMGGGGG! Christina and Will are engaged! I roll over on my side, still in bed after one of Zeke's CRAZY party's. I swing my legs on the floor and suck in a sharp breath as my feet hit the cold hard floor. I don't bother making the bed seeming that I'm just going to sleep in it again tonight. as I am slipping into my black fuzzy slippers Christina comes barging into my room. "Trissssyyyy" She yells at the door frame. "Whaaaatttt" I yell back trying my best to mimic her voice. "Trisy-poo, me Will and the others are going down to the café to eat breakfast and your coming no excuses!" I try my best not to walk over and yell "YOU CAN'T MAKE ME!" Instead I tell her I'll meet her down in a few minutes.

"Perfect" I whisper to no one in particular, I'm wearing the new clothes Christina bought me from forever dauntless. Ya hard to believe that I would like picking out clothes, but to be honest its actually pretty fun. The outfit that I'm wearing is my black ripped skinny jeans, a grey tank top with my black crop top that says HELLO on the front and GOODBYE on the back. Oh and I have on my black combat boots and my hair is in a pony tail. I take my pocket knife (you never know what could happen) and stick it in my back pocket and head out the door. The cool air of the dauntless compound hugs my bones earning a small shiver from me. "TRIS!" someone yells from behind me I look over my shoulder and see Zeke running up to me out of breath. "Hey..Tris...did...you..hear..that..Christina..an- "And Will are engaged? I finish,with a smirk on my face. "How did you know?" hey asks confused. "Me and Christina are roomates and bestfriends, so what do you think?" I roll my eyes "Come on lets just get there before all the dauntless cake is gone!" I say and start sprinting down the hall with Zeke right behind me.

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So what did you guys think? I know I know The chapter was VARY short, but I promise that the other chapters will at least have 1,000 words each. I am planning to write 50 chapters in all but idunno imight add more. Review please! Also give me some feed back on what you thinkon the first chapter. Bye!