Octavian
"If you're not part of the solution, you're part of the problem."
~Unknown
Cold.
Jerk.
m.e.r.c.i.l.e.s.s
those words s*t*u*n*g
They needed to look
d
e
e
p
e
r
(underneath)
He loves [hates] being an absolute jerk, obviously.
"He might as well go to p|r|i|s|o|n, he deserves it."
that /new/ r:e:p:u:t:a:t:i:o:n was too late to change.
a blonde scrawny s/c\a/r\e/c\r/o\w/
{they [neversawthesympatheticsmiles] saw the heartless smirk}
his thoughts often w~o~n~d~e~r about what he could have done –
the things that n/e/v/e/r happened.
&&and&&
now
he wasn't the "respected, brave, soldier."
things went too
f-a-r
he. was. !e!v!i!l!
well, that's what they thought.
he. went. cRAzY
*power hungry*
didn't have {enough}
he was
***lucky***
though he didn't realize it.
(he never really thought of the c.o.n.s.e.q.u.e.n.c.e.s)
he wonders –
was Camp Jupiter really his [h]o[m]e?
no one liked him anyway.
maybe he should just ^vanish^ into thin -air-
it was simple, really:
Octavian + Dead= PERFECT
he thought about that e=q=u=a=t=i=o=n often
maybe he should c
he wanted to C.H.A.N.G.E
-back to his old, kind, self.
but how?
who's even going to be there to help ?h?i?m?
no. one.
[because he's a (j)(e)(r)(k)]
Jason Octavian
Percy Octavian
Reyna Octavian
EVERYONE Octavian
slimy toad of a jerk = Octavian
he's different.
he changed.
he's wondered.
no one's helped him.
O-C-T-A-V-I-A-N
it was their fault, as much as it was his.
because no. one. ever. helped.
his facade's c`r`a`c`k`i`n`g.
he isn't a slimy toad.
really, he isn't.
(But who's going to believe him?)
A/N: Thanks for taking your time to read this. Constructive Criticism is definitely appreciated.
Recently, in English Class, we were discussing quotes which was where I heard the one I put at the top from.
Okay, I'll come clean. Octavian is actually one of my favourite characters. I know he's still kind of like a villain, but hey, you always need an evil guy to ruin everything, don't you? I hope I've improved from my last time, and thanks to those who gave me advice on how to improve.
Personally, I don't think Octavian's a bad guy (even though he's pretty much portrayed as one), which was sort of like the point on why I wrote this. To be honest, he actually reminds me of Drew. Sorry for the long A/N!
