Prologue.
She ran, fast as she could as trees zipped by. She hurt all over and wanted nothing more than to rest, but she knew if she did she would get caught and lose the one she ran with. Tears stung her eyes and clouded her vision and branches from the trees whipped at her face she was just about to give up when a hand folded around hers. Looking to the side she saw her fellow escaper pulling her along, he smiled a cat like grin and said…
"Don't worry just keep on going were nearly there nearly free, don't give up now because I won't let you."
She could tell he too was in pain and talking was causing him even more pain. So she smiled back with all she was worth to assure him she wasn't giving up. Behind them there was shouting to be heard, they were the people they and others who ran in different directions were running from. She held in her scream as her bare feet cut themselves on yet another sharp rock, screaming would only give away their position. She heard the sound of running to the left of her and let go of the boys hand to draw her found weapon but relief washed over her when she saw it was a fellow escaper, she nodded at him. Grabbing hold of the other boys hand they ran dodging all they could, if they could make it there before the door closed they would be free. Almost there they now ran into a clearing, she could now hear the sound of the other children running and the shadows of her fellow escapers running just behind them as they lead the group to the doorway. She and her friend stopped at the doorway while the other boy ran strait through as it pulsed light they quickly ushered the others into the light and into safety because it was their duty as the leaders. She drew her weapon which was a gun just as the their pursuers entered the clearing she and her friend who also had a gun started firing at them. At last all but her and the boy were safe nodding to him she pressed the button on the device on her wrist, not to far off there was a explosion and the doorway of light started shrinking. Grabbing each others hands once again they dived into the light just before it closed, as they drifted she began to faint.
"See you on the other side Azim." she managed to get out.
"You too Ailith." she heard before the light turned to black.
Well what do you think? Be honest.