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Percy POV
*Dream*
"Percy I'm sorry, it's just... you work 24/7 and you don't even bother to take time to talk to me! When was the last time we went on a date?" Annabeth said as tears sprang out of her eyes.
"I'll fix this I promise! Just don't g-
RINGGGGGGGGGGGG, RINGGGGGG
Agh! That dream again! It's been appearing every month. I turned my head and looked at the clock, "Aww shoot! I'm late!"
I took a 2 minute shower while brushing my teeth (i do that alot) and ran out of my house.
"Where are my keys?Keys?" as I emptied my pockets.
"Aww,shoot! there in the car!" I panicked for a while and thought "Ohh, screw it! just take a cab."
I ran to the nearest rode and whistled long and clear. All the cabs stopped. I jumped into a cab.
I suddenly remembered that today was suppose to be the day I met the architect for my project and I needed to get there now!
"Get me to Water Corporations fast, and I'll pay extra!"
Without a second thought, the cab driver drove on.
"We're here" said the driver.
"Ok thanks how much?" I asked.
"Umm" He looked at the scale," 21 dollars and 50 cents."
I handed him a 20 and a 5 dollar bill," Keep the change!" and I ran out of the cab.
Annabeth POV
RINGGGGGGGGGGG, RINGG
I jumped out of bed and ran to the bathroom to take a shower while brushing my teeth and I remembered that I got this habit from Percy. A wave of sadness washed over me.
"Nope not today Annabeth! Don't think about him! You have a good boyfriend and a great job. Don't think about him!" I said trying to convince myself.
I got out of the bathroom and walked into the kitchen where I saw Mitchell, my boyfriend cooking breakfast. You see after Percy and I broke up, I met Mitchell and we went on a few dates which went out pretty well. We've been dating for about 5 months and he thought we should move in together and I agreed.
I gave him a quick peck on the cheek, "Good morning Mitchell!"
"Good morning Annie!" He said
"I told you not to call me that!"
"Whatever you say Annie!" He said while smiling.
I rolled my eyes , quickly ate my breakfast and ran out the door.
Just as I was about to start the car, my cell phone rang.
" Hello Boss" I said
" Hi, so I need you to go to Water Corporations, the company, because they are going to cooperate with us and their, CEO is needing a good architect for a job so, I assigned you."
" Okay but-"
" Enough chit-chat! You need to get there now!" He screamed
"Okay" I said as I hung up.
I drove to Water Corporations as fast as I could and walked into the elevator. I pressed the 5th story button and waited...and waited.
DING
Finally! I ran out and walked in room 124. As I opened the door, I saw a room full of professionally dressed people all seated in chairs but, one person took my breath away.
Percy Jackson.