Author note's:
It has been a while. but after long months of delay (and just a slight bit of procrastination...) I've gotten back and started to re-work my story's. some chapter's may have small changes, some might look completely new.
this will be my first story i have wrote. and because of this it won't be an original concept (meaning will not be a story with character's made and thought of by me, with the acceptation of personality's, gender's and the three F.C's made by me, etc)
I hope to get helpful criticism so I can get better at writing so I'm able to start writing my own original story's so feel free to tell me what you think of this one and what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
special thank's to: The Treecko Man for teaching me how to create and post story's on fan fiction
[DISCLAIMER] I do not own any rights to Pokemon or there character's I just write the story's. all right's go to Nintendo.
[WARNING] this story will contain at least three (semi) fan made character's based off of primal form's, shadow form's, and my own chaos form to help out with the plot. NO they will not be shipped/prioritized/souly focused on. they are just there so i could fill a spot of the villain(s) and give the story some comical effect etc. if you do not like the concept of F.C's (as i call them for short) then only read the first chapter where I made it so it's somewhat like a short story that gave it enough information to satisfy someone who does not feel like dealing with F.C's. [WARNING]
but without further adieu lets get started...
The law of polarity: The law state's that everything has an opposite. Light has to have dark in order to substance each other. we can not have left without right, we can not have up without down, we can not have day without night, and we can not have good without evil. whatever exists must have a polar opposite.
As most story's begin when it starts at the creation of the universe: there was nothing, nothing but a single being that went by the name: Arceus. His pure white body sparkled in space with two big arches of gold on his side's, having four legs each were at a point that he used to travel with. A long main like substance appearing from the back of his head that had emerald green eyes with red pupils and a tail
he created the world of Pokémon molding it into his image, it was a beautiful world with the wide varity of land scape and life such as fields where Pokémon played, or the volcano's where the fire types thrived, the sky's where the birds flew, the oceans where the water type's called home. And many more.
However, Arceus could not handle his creation alone. Even he was not powerful enough to do that. Therefor he created the Pokémon known as "legendry's". Kyoger the guardian of the sea, Groudon the ruler of the land, Rayquaza the god of the sky, Yvetal the reaper of life's and Xerneas the giver of lives' and many other's to help keep the balance. But the first three Pokémon that he created were the three legendary god's: Dialga, the god of time, Palkia, the god of space, and finally Giratina.
Giratina was a large gray serpent like creature with red and black stripe's going down his body and six spike's along his body sides, two on each side of the end of his tail, he had six rib bone like golden plate's along the chest section of his body and behind those on his back were six black tentacle's with a single red spike at the end of every one of them, his head was mostly covered in golden like plates of armor. Two large ones at the side that opened to expose his mouth and one small crown like one on the top of his head.
He and Arceus were like Brother's. they acted like they were and They even called each other "brother". However Giratina was different from the other legendry's. he looked more monstrous, more evil even more then the reaper of lives': Yvetal. yet even when he was a kind hearted creature he was still shunned and feared for his look's. he never had anyone to talk to because Pokémon were too afraid to approach him, even the mighty Groudon was uneasy and nervous in Giratina's present's. even when he did something good his brother Arceus took the spotlight instead he always did. But that was not the worst part, the worst part was that he didn't have a purpose, He was never created with one. All the other legendry's had one, All except him.
He slowly started to hate Arceus. He created him without a purpose and on top of all; he made him look like a monster. He felt useless, and forgotten. He started to keep his distance from other Pokémon. Sinking into the shadows and staying in the background in every meeting that the legendry's had. And always watching with hatred in his eyes every time the Pokémon gathered and celebrated Arceus in all his "glory" (that of what they did often) he watched the Pokémon gather around Arceus and cheering his name.
Giratina could only feel three emotions at that time: sadness, jealousy, and hatred… something inside of him kept saying "go on, do it. You know you want to. Remember all they did to you? They shun you, they hate you, they fear you… give them a reason to. Make them pay… make HIM pay, and take your rightful place on the throne." his eye's started to glow a dark blood red color as he let his anger take over, charging a Massive sized sphere of shadow and launching it at the alpha Pokémon with all the power he could. Arceus sensed the incoming attack and jumped out of the way as fast as lightning and having the shadow ball fly past into the river nearby having it explode causing a geyser of water to shoot upwards. The area grew silent as everyone looked back at the titanic sized phantom dragon with anger still beaming in his eyes and terror in there's. but Arceus just stared in disbelief of what just happened in the past ten seconds.
Quickly shaking the feeling off and getting out of this dumbfounded position he was in. He slowly got down out of the sky in front of the shaking crowd of Pokémon who you could hear muttering thing's like "what was that?" "it's Giratina…" "what does he think he's doing?" but they quickly stopped as the pure white Pokémon made eye contact with the pitch black one. "Giratina, what is the meaning of this?" Arceus asked in a firm deep yet proud, soft, and graceful tone that made Giratina sick every time he heard it. "I'm done being your shadow, I'm done taking order's, I'm DONE being forgotten and ignored!" he snapped before launching another assault of attacks on the Pokémon god only for Arceus to put up a shield knowing he would not be able to dodge that many projectile's. "I'm not going to fight you Giratina, stop this at once!" but Giratina was blinded by his anger, he couldn't think straight. not now. "fine. If you won't fight me…maybe they will…" the serpent said in a dark tone as he looked straight at the once cheering but now cowering Pokémon hiding behind whatever they could.
Meanwhile in the forest near the location where the fight was taking place, was a dog like Pokémon prancing around the lake purifying the water after a group of poison types dropped by for a drink she had light blue colored fur with a long beautiful purple main with white diamond shape patches of fur along her legs and body. her stomach, neck, and bottom of her muzzle was all white fur as well she also had a tail that split and kept to the sides of her body that looked somewhat like white ribbons. her name was Suicune, Arceus created her to make sure the wind currents stayed the way they should and keep the water around the world pure and fresh along with keeping her two brothers: Entei and Raikou, out of trouble. She also had close ties to one of the major legendary Pokémon known as Ho-oh and was able to summon her at any time, but usually just for emergency's due to Ho-oh being extremely busy most of the time but on the occasion she was able to chat with Suicune, that of which Suicune enjoyed. To her, Ho-oh was kind of a mother figure, always keeping an eye on her and her brother's to make sure they did not get hurt. That and the fact that ho oh did give her and her brothers a new and better chance at life after one of the first human worshiping towers that was called "brass tower" burned down due to a lightning bolt back in at the human world.
Her head perked up and out of her trance as she heard a loud explosion that sounded like a Snorlax just did a cannonball, but louder and more deadly sounding. She quickly rushed to the scene where she found the two brothers standing on two different sides of the patch of land, there eye's locked at each other and the large group of Pokémon behind Arceus, they looked scared and some had slight injuries from the blast that would have been much more sever if Arceus had not come down to block it. The area they were in was partially scorched and withered due to the blast's, Suicune was shocked at the site and went in to try to break up. "STOP!" yelled the small (at least compared to the two brother's) aura Pokémon but it was too late Giratina went to crush the dog like Pokémon with his tentacle only to have Arceus go and tackle him away from her and into the forest behind them.
Suicune decided that if this went on any longer there would not be a forest left for them to fight in! she had to do something, ANYTHING, to put a stop to this. But she couldn't do it alone. She raised her head and howled to the sky to summon the Guardian of the sky's Ho-Oh to help put a stop to the fight it seemed like hours but in a few seconds the rainbow avian flew from the sky and shot a sacred flare at the enraged shadow Pokémon but that only made him more angry. "Arceus!" The giant bird called out, but before he could respond Giratina had already recovered from the attack and tossed him high into the air and jumping off after his target. Bird Pokémon were already evacuating the sky's as they saw the mighty Arceus fly full speed upward and the titanic sized Giratina fly after him, upper cutting Arceus with a head-butt to the stomach tossing him farther into the sky and charging another attack for the disoriented god, chuckling softly at the state his brother was in he was hoping for more of a fight from the so called "all mighty god" but his thought's and attack were cut off from a sharp pain in his body, he snapped out of his thoughts and looked to see Ho-oh carrying him far away from Arceus with her sky attack. He quickly used his six tentacles to wrap around, constrict, and restrain the bird.
Ho-Oh could barely get a squawk out in pain due to her being strangled and body being squeezed. Her vision started to fade and blur, she was starting to black out from lack of oxygen. Giratina quickly noticed this and squeezed his pray more. As the guardian of the sky grew limp and nearly lifeless Giratina let go to let gravity take care of the rest. Suicune watched in terror as she saw her best friend fell from the sky and the worst part was she couldn't do anything to stop it.
Arceus, finally getting his breath back from being head-butted in the stomach saw the falling Ho-oh, he rushed to catch her only to have Giratina Tackle him out of the way shouting "you will NOT turn you're back on me again!" . "NO!" Arceus yelled as he saw the avian plummeting to the dirt that paved the earth below them, but his words were not going to be able to stop it. before he could blink a flash of green flew across the sky and caught Ho-oh only moments before she hit the ground. Carefully setting down the knocked out avian the emerald green serpent looked at Suicune with four words coming out of his mount "Take care of her." Suicune nodded as she watched the serpent fly into the sky in a corkscrew style toward Arceus and Giratina. "so, What did I miss?" the snake like dragon asked with a cocky tone and a smirk on his face. "Rayquaza, thank goodness you're here. How did you know about this?" asked Arceus. "simple." The sky high Pokémon replied. "I noticed a disturbance with the wind pattern's so I came to investigate." Giratina quickly cut off their little chat session by getting into another attack position. "no matter. I'll just take you both out!" he said before disappearing into thin air, the two other Pokémon looked all around them trying to spot where Giratina disappeared to. Suddenly the dark serpent re appeared behind Rayquaza, striking him in the back. Rayquaza let out a cry in pain feeling the pressure and force of the impact drive him down out of the sky and into the ground of the earth Giratina quickly got back up after ramming his foe into the dirt and shot a shadow ball at him to keep him in the ground and out of his way.
Arceus couldn't handle this anymore. He wanted to solve this without needing to go to despite measure's. but he had no choice. Arceus had to get rid of Giratna before he could cause any more damage to the land or the Pokémon living in it. Charging his judgment attack he could not help but have a tear run down his face. He had to banish his own brother that he loved so dearly, his attack was fully charged and ready to strike but not before two words quietly came from his mouth: "I'm sorry… "releasing his attack at Giratina, the shadow Pokémon's eyes widened as he braced for impact but he could not withstand an attack of that much power. Giratina lied in a crater limp and appeared lifeless with his eyes hollowed out with black to the point where his pupils were not visible.
The crowd of Pokémon including Suicune rushed towards him as some stayed behind, afraid that he may wake up Ho-Oh and Rayquaza woke up and walked weakly to the crater where the giant monstrous snake lied there without moving. Arceus quickly flew down praying his brother would be ok. "is he alright?" snapped Arceus. "hold on, let me take a look." Suicune replied as she took a step towards the beast. "wait!" Ho-oh said weakly "you don't know if he is faking it or not he could just be waiting for you to check him so he can hold you as hostage!" "relax." Replied the sky blue dog "no one could withstand a direct hit from Arceus' Judgment." She continued as she jumped down to Giratina's body, putting her ear to Giratina's chest listening for a beat. "I can hear a beat, he's still alive. Unconscious but alive." Arceus sighed in relief knowing he did not put too much power into his attack. "so…what do we do now? Rayquaza asked curious "yeah what do we do with him?" Suicune added looking at the fallen dragon before them. Arceus said nothing for what seemed like a year even if it was only a few seconds. "Giratina has not only disturbed the peace but also harmed his fellow brethren. And I have no doubt in my mind once he wakes up he will try to do it again…" Arceus said in a sad tone. "I'm afraid… I'm afraid I must banish him to prevent any further harm from coming to this world…" the other legendry's were shocked at what Arceus just said, sure Giratina went a little nuts but did he deserve to be banished? however the other Pokémon were happy about this and just kept saying things such as "serve's him right" "yeah! Go Arceus!" "you saved us!".
"wait are you serious?" Rayquaza asked still stunned at what the god just said. "I'm afraid so... after what he did to you, Ho-oh and Suicune… I can't let that happen again…I wish with all my heart I was only joking..." the alpha pokemon said saddly "alright…I mean you're the boss here…" Suicune replied sounding sorry for the unconscious Phantom dragon Arceus stepped forth to his fallen yet still breathing brother. Putting his foot down he opened a portal underneath Giratina sending him falling in the depths of a world no Pokémon would ever dream of. As his Giratina's body disappeared into the abyss, Arceus could only mutter under his breath "please…forgive me my brother… " the Pokémon gathered around Arceus and cheered his name but…Arceus just walked out of the crowd of Pokémon who quickly grew silent once more as they saw their creator walk sadly away from the scene. Suicune went to go try to talk to the God only to have Ho-oh put a wing in front of her and shake her head telling Suicune that Arceus needed some time alone. Arceus was ashamed of what he had just done, and would grieve about it for the rest of his immortal life…
And that was how Giratina earned the title as the feared, monstrous, Renegade Pokémon. A forgotten legend that was told about in scary story's around a camp fire or in story books for children but he was not just a legend… he was real. And waiting for his time to rise again.
