A/N: This is a preview to my new story I am writing. Summary is at the bottom. Tell me what it sounds like so far! Thank you !
O o O o O o O
Ever wonder what happens after you die?
A girl about 16 sat in her mother front seat of the car arguing about the radio. She unhooked her seatbelt, fixing her blouse. Rain was beating against there window.
A boy sat in between his cousins in his fathers car. It was an old truck, and can only seat 4. His mother was in the front passenger side. Leaving him in the middle of his cousins, without no seatbelt. He was about 17 years old. His female cousin but dog ears on his head. He went to take them off when he seen a abnormal flash of light.
The girl didn't have time to scream, from the impact. She flew out the window from the crash. Her body flipped off a hill along side the boy's body. Her chocolate brown eyes seemed lifeless as well as his yellow ones.
What if you are knocked of the path?
Another boy noticed the crash. He grinned, "Somebody's here! Finally! I can have friends at last!" he ran to where they fell. He was about 10 years old. The girl was the first to rise, then the boy followed.
"Where am I? What happened?" she asked the 10 year old. "You're in the Feudal Era! You must've been knocked off the path to the light."
"To the light?" the boy asked. "Meaning we're dead? Like ghost?" the girl gasped. The 10 year old nodded.
"Souta's the name. Souta Ruler of the rainbow forest!" the 10 year old introduced his self.
"I'm Kagome." the girl said. They looked to the other boy. "Inuyasha, and why won't these dog ears come off!" he growled.
"What you die in is stuck to you forever." Souta said. Kagome looked down at her green uniform.
"You've got to be kidding me." she growled.
What if, you find others like you.
What if, you find enemies worser than death itself.
A girl named Kikyo warned them. "Beware of the Band of Seven. The work for the evil lord, Naraku. He will take you and drown you to the center of the earth where you can't get out until the world ends."
What if, you are captured by them.
What if, you love one of them.
Kagome looked the leader of the Band of Seven in the eye. She was hanging by her legs. "You'll let him hurt me. You'll let him put me there? Tell me that is not true." she whispered.
Based on the book called Everlost.
Everlasting
Coming January 2011
Summary: After dying at a fatal car accident, Kagome and Inuyasha are knocked off the path to the light. They enter a world called the Feudal Era. Where there are real demons roaming around. Kagome falls captured to the baddest but also has the attention of the leader. Will she rescue all the 1000 lost souls from them or will she betray them all?
R&R
Thank you!