A sonnet I wrote in English and modified slightly when insparation struck me. Each line should be ten syllables by my count, who knows though, I could be off.-_- I tried writing in iambic pantameter, if anyone understands what that is please tell me if I succeded. Please read and review. You guys make my day when you do, I always welcome constructive criticiszm(sp?). Please don't burn me with flames. Message me if you want to know the story behind this, if you can't figure it out.
Sakura's Sonnet
An ode to the Blossom so fine and fair.
Oh, of love and hate what is this girls fate?
T'was once about a girl with cherry hair.
Her location unknown even to the date.
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Oh! What a sad twist of fate, poor girl, wait!
She lies there alone frozen to the bone.
Oh his wrath! His obsession! Which violence can sate.
She cried and tried, bludgeoned with a stone.
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A plea to end her life so filled with strife.
Who cared for her life? He did not. I know.
Her green eyes shone, as he brought down the knife.
They now know, and for this he cannot show.
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What does this come to? She thinks from above.
To think she could be worthy of this love.
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Owari.