This story was made up by me and was inspired by Korean, and Japanese horror tales.
R&R Please.
Tears of Blood
Prologue: That Girl in the Swamp
He just couldn't get her voice out of his head when he first saw her. He managed to hear her croak out a "Help me," but he was too scared to do anything because of her scary appearance. Then her head turned sideways and he saw her black eyes, and terrible skin. She grinned at him, showing him her sharp and dirty teeth, blood soaked and decayed.
The boy ran as fast as he could, desperately trying to get away from that thing. It resembled a girl… a girl that was just standing there. Her eyes were completely black. Her skin was wrinkled, and appeared to be scarred, torn, and burned. She seemed to be fifteen, with long hair and highlights of black, grey, and blood red. Her hair wasn't neat, and was hanging over her face and back.
The boy kept thinking to himself that he would escape the large and grotesque swamp alive…he wanted to be back at home under his covers on his bed. He really didn't want to die. He was too innocent to die from a creature like this one.
The girl kept up with his pace and started to go faster by jumping branch to branch on the tall trees. The boy knew this was his end.
-Slice-
He wasn't dead. He woke up on his bed with his parents by his side. They told him everything was going to be okay and that he just passed out holding a thick stick in his hand that seemed to have been cut in half very smoothly.
His parents then started crying.
"I'm Sorry." … That was their last words.
-Slice-
The boy suddenly got knocked out again.
He woke up in his room again; feeling very tired and couldn't remember anything. He looked down and saw a baby covered in blankets in his hands. He uncovered the blankets and saw a deformed baby with torn, burned, and stitched skin, similar to the girl he saw. He suddenly remembered everything that just happened and the baby turned into ash and burned his hands. Right when he turned around he saw that girl again, hunched over with her long hair over her face.
That very second when the girl threw her arm in the air the boy saw her eyes… and what he saw in those eyes was everyone that she killed. He saw both of his parents… decapitated on the floor with their wrists slit and their heart and other organs ripped out. The boy's last move was to cry one tear. He cried a tear of blood. He couldn't believe how violently his parents and all her other victims were killed. He couldn't stand it.
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The crown of his head slowly slid off. The boy fell onto the hard and cold floor with that bloody tear sliding down his face onto the ground.
The girl then started ripping his corpse apart.
That is the end of the prologue
Is this story dark enough!
Reveiws Please!