This is my first fanfic, so please R&R!

Thorns Of Life

Chapter 1:

"Hey Thornpaw!" a cat mewed

" Hi Hazelpaw." Thornpaw said

"Do you want to go hunting with me?"

"Sure" Hazelpaw answered "I'll go tell Lionstar,"and he bounded

away. Then, Hazelpaw came back, his ears perked up,as well as his tail.

"Lets go!" Hazelpaw screamed

"Ok, ok, I'm coming,but every animal will see your tail." Thornpaw mewed

As she passed by the Warriors, waved thier tails in a greeting. Thornpaw

ran to catch up with Hazelpaw.

As Thornpaw stalked up on a mouse, a shrill screamed broke the scilence.n

Thornpaw raced to where the noise was coming from. When she got there, she

saw Hazelpaw in a river trying to stay aflout.

"Help!" Hazelpaw screeched.

"I'm coming!" Thornpaw answered. She dove in to the river and with all her might, pulled

Hazelpaw out.

"Th-h-h-ank you" Hazelpaw chattered

"Lets get you back to camp"

Thornpaw said, and they went back.

When they got back, they went to Dapplecloud. On there way, many cats asked

where they had been.

"Hazelpaw fell into the river and I rescued him" Thornpaw plainly

said

"Oh, like were going to believe that." Firereed said, rolling his eyes.

"Well I did"

Thornpaw said stubbornly and stalked off to the apprentince's den, leaving Hazelpaw

walking to Dappleclouds den alone.