Dimensional Disharmony by Comet1998 RATED M
Authors Note: Hey guys! This is my first story so id appreciate as much feedback as possible. Any advice would be terrific! So I hope you enjoy! (P.S. Comet Embers is mine so if you would like to use him PM me, Thanks!)
Chapter 1: Ghillie in the Mist
Location: Covenant Spire
Tyler was one of the best Spartans in the UNSC and specialized in aerial reconnaissance and stealth in general. Codename, Comet. A little computer chip inserted into the back of his helmet contained a computer AI named Jazzmyn. Comet had set up a small camp about two miles from the spire.
Comet stood next to the tent he had just pitched, looking around and saw it was starting to get dark,
"Alright Jazz, Scan oxygen levels in the proximity." Comet told her.
"Yes Comet." She replied.
A faint green line beamed down his visor.
"Oxygen levels stable, but watch out for radiation pockets." Jazz told him.
"Is our proximity free of radiation? Safe enough to remove my helmet?" asked Comet.
"Yes, no radiation detected." Said Jazz.
Comet turned his helmet 45 degrees to the left releasing the pressure seal between the helmet and his suit. As the pressure hissed he removed the helmet. He clicked a button on the inside of the helmet putting Jazzmyn on speaker so he could still talk to her without wearing his helmet. He sat down leaning up against a boulder and placed his helmet in his lap.
"You're not talkative tonight, usually you wont shut up." She said jokingly.
"I don't know Jazz…I'm just worried about my brothers…I mean they don't have a lot of experience with weaponry, war, or any of this bullshit…" Comet said in a low voice.
"They will be fine, I know you're worried but they're not stupid. Beside they have each other, the bond between you three is nothing like I've ever seen before it's like you feel each others pain or something. They will be fine Comet." Jazz said in a reassuring voice.
"Yeah, I suppose you're right." Comet said sounding a little happier than before.
"Aren't I always?" She said in a cocky voice.
"Haha yeah I guess. Well, I better get some rest. Tomorrow night we infiltrate the Covenant Spire and recover the Forerunner artifact. Night Jazz." He said crawling into the tent.
"Night Comet." She said as she went into sleep mode.
The Next Morning
POV Comet
I awoke to the heat of the morning light on my face shining through the side of the tent,
"Damn…it's like a fuckin sauna in here." He said to himself as he crawled to the flap that led outside.
Comet stood outside the tent and stretched. He got into a push-up position and began doing push ups. After about 50 push-ups he quickly flopped to his back and did about 70 sit-ups. When he was done he stood and locked his helmet on his head and checked his shields and vitals and made sure his suit and helmet were in complete sync. He then pulled out his magnum and checked the clip and calibrated the sight and holstered it. He took two SMGs from his back and checked the clips and then returned them to their holsters.
"Last but not least, my abilities." He said to himself.
He activated his Camo Module and faded into thin air.
"God I love this thing." He said to himself.
He crouched and did some movement tests and he stayed transparent. Only a slight distortion of whatever was behind him was visible. He deactivated his Camo. He heard a beep in his helmet and a little screen popped up in the corner of his visor and Jazzmyn appeared.
"Why hello! Good afternoon princess!" Comet said jokingly with a smirk.
"Fuck off! It's not like you haven't done it before." She said giggling a bit.
"You got me there." Comet admitted.
"We leave for the spire in a few hours." Comet told her.
"Ok sounds like a plan. Is all your equipm-" She was cut off by a large explosion in the distance.
"Uhh…isn't that the Spire Comet?" She asked.
"We need to go now, the artifact is there and it can't be destroyed, the effects of the artifact are still unknown to humans." He said as he started sprinting towards the spire.
Comet was Sprinting through the forest and maneuvering around trees and rocks doing flips and spins like some sort of ninja. When he reached the spire he activated his Camo and entered the spire through the side and went to the gravity lifts that led to the top of the spire. He jumped in and was being lifted to the top of the spire. At the top he was getting ready to land and was shot out of the gravity lift and right where he was about to land stood two Grunts and a Zealot class Elite with an Energy Sword. Comets eyes widened and reached up and grabbed a pipe with one hand and it made a loud clinking noise. The Elite looked straight at him. Comet didn't dare move. The Elite's eyes narrowed as he looked closer. The Grunts were too busy to notice anything and by the sounds of it, they were arguing about something. The Elite grunted loudly and the Grunts went silent and stood still. The Elite began speaking gibberish and the Grunts went to the Elite and the Elite took one of the Grunts' Plasma Pistol and aimed it straight at Comet.
"Well shit." Comet thought to himself.
Comet dropped to the floor making a loud noise. The Elite saw through Comets Camo and lunged at him. Comet jumped to the side and punched the Elite in the jaw and the Elite returned the favor by whipping around and back handing Comet to the side of his helmet. Comet fell to the floor and his shields were going crazy and wouldn't recharge. He stood and ran out onto the platform outside and ran around the platform to the other side of the spire and re-entered the spire and into the control room where the Artifact was being stored. Comet walked up to the Artifact and picked it up.
"Hmm? Looks like a modified Pulse grenade. Hey, there's a button?"
The two Grunts ran up behind him and were wearing some kind of mask with green lenses, they aimed at him. He backed up and placed his finger on the button and showing it to them indicating if they moved he would press it.
Suddenly, he felt sharp burning sensation go through his chest. The Elite had impaled him with the energy sword and picked him up on the sword. This caused Comet to drop the Artifact which broke on contact with the floor. A very bright light filled the room, then what sounded like an EMP went off and engulfed the entire spire and disappeared, leaving a crater in its place.
Authors Note: I hope you enjoyed my first chapter, of my first story. Please leave some feedback! I will be posting the next chapter as soon as I type it. I am typing and posting another chapter tonight. I know there was no MLP in this chapter. That comes in the next chapter. Thanks for reading! Feedback please!
