Fic used to be called NARUTO: REPLAY but I'm reworking the plot and the title just sounded crappy.
You appear in a spaces looking room with comfortable looking furniture and find yourself immediately forced down into a comfortable chair. Sitting across from you is what appears to be a white anthropomorphic fox with two tails and ice blue markings dressed in baggy black tracker bottoms and dark blue t-shirt with a chinese dragon depicted surrounding the words bad to the core, said fox also appears to be smirking at you. He snaps his fingers and a screen appears in front of you, and the fox disappears you look around before shrugging and reading from the screen.
Zero here, be kind and review, say what's good and bad, criticise and tell me how to make it better, give me ideas for future chapters, but don't flame, do not say things with the intent to hurt and do not say how the story is bad unless you say how to fix and improve the parts you think don't work.
I do not own Naruto and any other character from licensed animé/manga movie extra my own characters belong to me so you can't have them (sticks tongue out)
Yes I have decided to rewrite this fic, frankly put it would have never worked in the long run basic plots still the same and it will probably still have some video game elements to it but this time it won't be based on it.
"Hello" –speaking
'Hello'- thinking
Hello-written words
Hello -sarcasm or empathise
"Hello"- different language talking
'Hello' - different language thinking
Hello- different language writing
"CHIDORI!"
"RASENGAN!"
The two attacks collided with each other causing a crimson orb of energy to surround them.
'Damn it, at this rate, I'll lose!' Thought Naruto as Sasuke smirked at him with his "I am so superior then you" smirk on his face. The sheer power of the two mighty attacks shook the very earth around them and causing the lake beneath them to form massive waves venturing outwards. Waves of power flew off them Kyuubi's demonic taint and the condensed corrosive soul energy being spilt recklessly from Sasuke.
BOOM!
Naruto jerked away pain sparkling through his body
"H'e dobe" Sasuke uttered before taking off to find orochimaru to find the power to kill his brother.
He stared as the retreating form of his grandfather as he walked away, he'd stopped calling out when they'd slashed out his vocal cords almost 5 years ago.
He remembered that day all too well, the day the ANBU came for him, the day he had been thrown in this cramped cell, the day he was found guilty of existence, the day he lost faith in his grandfather.
He smiled as he walked to the corner of his cell and reaching under a pile of rags to retrieve a kunai, it was old and rusted but it would do the job. It had been surprisingly easy to get from when the shinobi used him as target practice, but that was not the point he had to give the old man a present, one that really showed his feelings.
The screech of metal hitting metal was what alerted the ageing Hokage first, the sound of spilt blood hitting the floor was what haled him, the sight of the boy who had chomped his own head off scared him, and the message written in blood made him break down and cry.
I'm finally free old man, finally free of you and your village. May you all burn in hell along with me.
Konohagakure's monster Naruto Uzumaki died and the village rejoiced.
"CHIDORI!"
"RASENGAN!"
The two attacks collided with each other causing an orb blue of energy to surround them.
'Damn it this isn't working!' Thought Naruto as Sasuke smiled at him with his "I am so much more then you" smile on his face. The sheer power of the two mighty attacks shook the very earth around them and causing the lake beneath them to form massive waves venturing outwards. Waves of power flew off them Kyuubi's demonic taint and the condensed corrosive soul energy being spilt recklessly from Sasuke. Naruto's control slipped and the Rasengan dispersed
shwaaaazzzzzzzzzzz!
Naruto jerked away pain tearing through his body, his best friends hand now embedded in his chest.
"H'e dobe" Sasuke said before taking off to find orochimaru-sama to find the power to beat his brother.
Naruto stared at the retreating form of his brother, as he fled silent tears falling as his mind drifted away.
…...
"CHIDORI!"
MULTI-SHADOW CLOME JUT... Naruto yelled only to be torn in to by Sasuke's Chidori.
BOOM!
"Pathetic, dobe!" The last Uchiha spat as he dashed away
And then there was nothing but blackness.
…...
…...
it was dark Naruto noted, seemed they'd decided look him in the cupboard again, letting a small smile grace his lips he silently lifted one of the floorboards up revealing the small supply of food hidden within the small crevice, he had been lucky this time, he would get to eat, the matron of the orphanage was a cruel woman especially on this day, the worst day of the year, his birthday, October 10th.
His face twisted into a snarl at that, it had been a year since it had happened, the day all his hopes and dreams faded, the day they cut his chakra, the day he'd learnt the truth about this village.
The old man had secured him a place in the academy, he would soon be moving out, into his own apartment where he'd be safe.
He had been so happy, but the matron had convinced the old man to let him stay one more night, one more terrifying night, that had been the moment it all went to hell.
As soon as the old man was gone, he had been bound tightly and strapped down to a table, and then another woman appeared, though this one had the symbol of the village proudly hung upon her forehead, she was a medic-Nin and cruel smirk played across her lips, her face twisted with insanity.
She had forced something down his through and then begun cutting his body open with a scalpel, making careful strokes across his body seemingly at random, gleaming down at him with those cold, joyful eyes.
It was only when the Kyuubi's chakra emerged to heal him had she had smiled and told him what she planned to do, he screamed himself horse while she cut his chakra network apart, letting chakra collect in certain spots while it bled out of others.
It must have been hours after that he felt a new pain surfacing from his gut, this time from the poison she had fed him, the poison spreading throughout his body like a plague twisting his chakra into something foul and then that foul, tainted chakra seeped into his disfigured system, how the Kyuubi rushed to heal it only for it to leave one result, the destruction of his chakra network, the pool at the base of his gut, the strings to his heart and brain being the only thing left, something the medic had been delighted to tell him was on purpose, she told him how his limbs would decay, how soon he'd be nothing more than a husk, even as she continued cutting his tendons to ribbons, he had been forced to lie there not being able to move, till the old man came the next morning.
The Kyuubi had yet again somehow managed to heal him to stop the decay, but his chakra network it was in taters, and his voice...he had none, he couldn't tell them what happened, the medic had still been found out but the matron, no she remained, still remained to make his life hell, and yet he lived why? The fox wouldn't let him die, not yet but instead it whispered thoughts of hate and destruction against the villagers, the old man and the village itself.
O how he wanted to, but he couldn't not now, not ever.
The fox had tried but that foul tainted chakra still lingered inside him, working against the Kyuubi's will, only letting it only whisper tales of horror into his mind, it made promises of revenge once they escaped there shell, how the kitsune would let the boy kill the matron himself, making her feel all the pain he felt again and again for all eternity.
Kyuubi's words soothed him even as the door opened and the matron glared at him, yes one day he'd be free and then they'd both get there revenge.
"CHIDORI!"
"Bijūdama!"
The two attacks collided with each other causing an orb blue of energy to surround them.
'Damn it this isn't working!' Thought Sasuke as Naruto snarled at him a look of pure hatred on his face. The sheer power of the two mighty attacks shook the very earth around them and causing the lake beneath them to form massive waves venturing outwards. Waves of power flew off them Kyuubi's demonic taint and the condensed corrosive soul energy being spilt recklessly from Sasuke.
BOOM!
Sasuke was blown away inputting with the cliff behind him.
Sasuke growled as he looked up a look of pure terror on his face as he saw thousands of Naruto's flying towards him Kyuubi's cloak formed around them all.
"Menacing ball" they growled out in one.
"D...dobe...thank you"
And so was the end of Sasuke Uchiha as flame elemental energy boiled his bones and blood, as demonic energy ate through his chakra and as corrosive storm energy spread his body to atoms.
In a bizarre sense of freedom Sasuke looked over at Naruto his body gone, his spirit floating in the wind.
Naruto stared at the spiritual form of Sasuke Uchiha he'd heard those last words and it sum what confirmed his suspicions about the cure seal he sighed and looked up at the sky Sasuke had been a good friend and sum one who had understood his pain "Sasuke lets meet up in the next life, wait for me would you?" a few seconds passed and he smirked turning away his plans had changed Konoha could wait first he had a snake to skin.
"I'd like that... goodbye Naruto...you were the only true friend that I had...I... I hope we do meet again" he said as he started to fade away
Naruto smirked he'd heard what Sasuke said thanks to the Kyuubi incanting his senses... it made him feel happy "don't worry Sasuke fist orochimaru will die then Konoha will burn, and maybe after that I can join you"
"Naruto look out!" Sasuke cried out in shock.
"AGG" Naruto cried out in both shock and pain as his head rolled from his body
"fool" the figure smirked before yelling out in pain in fear as the Kyuubi was released upon the earth once again and this fool new pain that would all but destroy his soul only for it to happen again and again for all eternity, yes Kyuubi was pissed he'd actually come to like this host.
…...
"CHIDORI!"
"RASENGAN!"
The two attacks collided with each other causing an orb of black sickly energy to surround them.
'Damn it why isn't this working!' Though Naruto as Sasuke smirked at him with his "I am so much more superior then you will ever be" smirk on his face. The sheer power of the two mighty attacks shook the very earth around them and causing the lake beneath them to form massive waves venturing outwards. Waves of power flew off them Kyuubi's demonic taint and the condensed corrosive soul energy being spilt recklessly from Sasuke. Naruto's control slipped and the Rasengan dispersed
BOOM!
Naruto jerked away pain burning through his body as a hand now embedded in his chest where his heart had previously rested.
"Dobe you never could win against an elite Uchiha" Sasuke uttered before taking off to find Orochimaru-teme to find the power to avenge his brother.
…...
"Why?" a Naruto asked even as more of his lifeblood escaped him, dripping down onto the already blood-stained floor.
He'd done everything for the village, he'd starved, and he'd begged, he'd bled and killed for this village but it was never enough and now...now they'd done this.
She said he'd be useful, said he could save lives, that the other villagers would be happy and smile at him... and like a fool he'd believed them, he'd followed her to a warehouse, never once thinking it would be a trap, and now he was chained up, cut open and being dissected.
"Why?" the person in front of him giggled at him before her expression suddenly twisted into a sneer, "why do you think, little monster?, you live, you breath and you won't fucking die!" the Kunoichi shouted in bizarre mixture of delight and anger as she jammed yet another scalpel into his bare flesh.
Naruto just stared at her eyes vacant and hollow, he'd heard similar things before, it always hurt, hurt because he dint understand, was it a crime for him to live? To breath? To exist at all?
She truly was a beautiful woman, maybe that was why he'd been so ready to except her words?, long flowing dark hair and blue eyes that had seemed to smile at him, she wore a Chunin vest over a long red dress that hugged her slender frame, maybe that was another, ninja had always been kinder to him, they'd saved him from the villagers countless times, he'd thought they'd protect him, they would save him instead of hurting him as everyone else had.
"but that's a good thing" the Kunoichi giggled again in that insane tone of hers "think about all the lives we could save, the illnesses we could cure, with all the poisons and deceases iv slipped to you over the years I certainly hope so" she cackled into the young blonds face, her expression quickly turning to one of confusion. "you dint no?" she cackled happily "suki-chan was so helpful, drugging you're food for me, it was possibility thrilling to hear how you wolfed it down like a starving animal, after all that's what you are"
Her expression once again changed this time into a pout "but you dint die, you dint even get ill I was so disappointed" she voice now low and sorrowful as she cut into his throat, tarring his vocal cords to pieces. "but then!" she shouted, her voice once again incredibly happy "then I realised how good that was, how much of an opportunity you were, how using you, I could become the best medic-Nin of all time!", "but you had to ruin it dint you?" she said pouting once more "getting Hokage-sama to in-role you in the ninja academy, it would have ruined everything"
she laughed "then this little boy came into the hospital, he was such a poor boy, not being able to use chakra at all, and I thought, why did this little boy have to suffer so much when demons like you still lived?" the insane Kunoichi give a hysterical cackle her voice no longer hollow but filled with genuine excitement "then it came to me, what if I screwed up your chakra network so bad it would never heal? I could even fix that little boys network with what I'd learnt, I'd be a hero!" she stopped once again glaring at his hollow eyes "but suki-chan count convince him to let you stay one more night, no he sent her to be interrogated instead, you ruined all my plans, now suki-chans gone, dead because of you"
"she dint tell anyone about me though, and while it's taken a year I can finally have revenge for all of the lives you've killed and ruined and I can still become the next Tsunade, all I need is your body, you don't even have to be alive" she yelled out in excitement, her eyes gaining a calculating edge, her hand suddenly launching forward, intent on plunging her kunai into his brain.
He watched it slowly came flying towards him, it was true what they say, when you're about to die everything slows down and your life flashes before your eyes, it was sad and terrifying, to be domed to your fate, to be able to do nothing to prevent it, watching your own horrifying memoires till your last moment.
He watched as the kunai came closer and closure, as with each second past he came closer and closure to death...and then the world turned white.
A figure walked upon a white void, as screams of pain echoed around him.
"This world….how horrible….to suffer such a fate, to be domed to repeat over and over again….never escaping the pain of you existence…. I can feel it; no it's not just that…your marker…..torn and torn again, how have you survived so long?"
The figures form is something that would seem quit strange to a normal mortal, it was after all a white humanoid fox with two tailed and ice blue markings, wearing baggy black tracker bottoms and dark blue t-shirt with a Chinese dragon depicted surrounding the words bad to the core.
The fox suddenly clutches his head a hollow screech echoing out of his mouth….. "I….I see, such a horrid fate, that man had no idea…..he tried to prolong your existence and he did but also doomed you to an eternity of pain….. But now even that is crumbling, this world doomed to fade…. it isn't your fault and yet the pain is yours to bear alone for their mistake. Your old creator, your original Two chosen, did they not know what they had done, did they not understand it?"
"there are too many variables to understand…..no way of knowing the truth….if I may ask what are your chosen's forms?..."
"….."
"That many? So many more then I had imaged, it is no wonder the pain you suffer is so suffer, split so many time's, your chosen in conflict, consumed by malice, the pain must be unbearable.
I could not save you, not as things are, my power is two weak and your chosen in disarray, but what ties you together, could it be undone?
"….."
"I see,….that could make things easier, I do not know if is possible, I am still too young to understand but maybe…..what if I issued a challenge of hereditas….could that work?"
"…" a strange happiness echoed throughout the void
"It would then….I requests a challenge of inheritance, to decide who should walk upon this world's thrown, the aim of the challenge being to guide this world from destruction and towards a different path. I now present to you my terms of entering as well as the rules this game will follow, such as my right as first challenger.
I request the use of your chosen, when will is freely given, and only when the terms and truth be told, you, this world shall act as judge, to allow entry to only those you see fit, a price must be paid that is deemed sufficient, and intent must be given upon the joining, to stop the weak and corrupted, the time be set and non but the judge to manipulate it…..my own price….I see thank you…my price to be doomed should I fall to take your place as judge and your pain as you sleep, in till a victor is chosen and you once again awaken"
"Is this satisfactory?...yes….then have a favour to ask" he fox said forming a fragment of crystal energy "take this and give it to your chosen before he separates the other into parts, it should hopefully increase the stability of this world and give us more time…. "
"Yes that is true, but this is a world of ninja, any advantage is a good one and without it…it would take too long…to long for both of us"
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