Epilogue;
I remember seeing car lights flash towards me,moving closer and burned my eyes,and I rubbed them to ease the pain from the bright lights.I heard a car door open and slam shut silently,as the torrents of wind came harder,the rain washing upon my feet into puddles."Get her a blanket,fast!"I heard a man with a low and grouchy voice command at was dark,so all I could make out were two shadows.I heard footsteps come closer to me,and I flinched when I felt a light tap on my shoulder.I looked up hesitantly and saw a shabby man,probably native gaze softened,I think,when he spoke to me in a calming tone,"You need help?"he asked,offering his hand to me.I stared at it for a while,thinking about horrible things that could go wrong if he wasn't a good person.I took it anyway,desperate for care and a led me towards a car,and helped me into the backseat.I could see better now,the lights no longer fading my was someone in the front seat,he had long untidy black hair like the turned in his seat to look at me and smiled shyly,"Hi,"he greeted me,"My name's Jacob,what's yours?"I gave him a stiff smile,"My name's Lovely."
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This is my first story,so don't be too harsh.
I know I need a lot of improvement.
:)