I have decided to rewrite my story! Even though I only got 2 chapters in -_-; But! I am still staying with this story! I hate when writers give up on a story. Even though I only have 1 reader so far (Shout-out to AliceOXYMORON Thanks for being my first review :D) I'm going to keep trying at this story. So! Criticism is appreciated, but not ass holes who don't have anything remotely intelligent or relevant to say. Thanks and enjoy!


Chapter 1

The end credits of the movie flashed down the screen as dramatic music sounded through the speakers in the room as a rather tall blond ran into the room, tackling one of the unsuspecting occupants to the ground, as the other one continued sleeping, oblivious to the drama happening not a few feet away. The girl, Ariana, decided to ignore the boy, Jace, in favor of playing her video game. Unfortunately for her, this didn't deter Jace at all, as he continued to try to catch her attention in the most obnoxious way possible.

Poke! "Ari?" Poke!..."Ari!" pokepokepoke "Ariiiiiiiiii" Still he persisted, until the girl couldn't stand it. Before he could land another poke, Ariana launched herself at the boy, shoving him into the far wall and holding him by his shoulders. She locked eyes with him, his eyes, a shocked jade color, greatly contrasting with her fierce eyes, which at that moment, were a rather icy blue.

" Now Jace, WHAT exactly, is the problem that was OH SO IMPORTANT?" Ariana thundered out, before noting something else that was amiss. "And I thought you were getting popcorn. Nothing ever stopped you from stuffing your face before..." She continued, looking rather stunned. It was true though; Jace's appetite is legendary. Even at school, no one got between Jace and his food.

"Well, you see..."

Flashback

"Hum~~~~ I wonder if Ari will eat some popcorn..." Jace talked to himself as he wandered through the crazy hallways of the house, attempting to not get lost on his way to the kitchen. As he approached the door, however, he heard noises. " That's... odd, Ari and Dev are upstairs...so what's making that noise?" Jace questioned as he quietly opened the door a crack. From this point, he could see a small group of oddly dressed people talking in Ari's kitchen. At least spying on my sisters came in handy for something he thought with a grin now let's see what;s happening here... As he observed, a very tall..blue man spoke up in an odd, rather gravelly sounding voice.

" Hey, what happened? Where'd everyone go? Who the hell are you guys?" he asked, shooting a few of them a rather intimidating glare.

A shorter, orange haired boy stepped closer and replied in a rather loud, obnoxious voice " What does that matter right now? I DON'T HAVE TIME TO KICK YOUR A-" before the boy could finish his sentence, another oddly dressed man in a hat stepped up and attempted to diffuse the situation. Jace saw this as an opportune moment to leave, running back to alert Ari of the situation.

End of Flashback

" - And that's what happened" Jace finished, before hugging himself. " What do we do Ari? We should just call the police right? Where's your phone?" Jace began searching the room for either of their phones, not having any luck.

" Well, you said you forgot yours, and I think mine... is in the kitchen, charging." Ariana began to pace and chew her lip before coming to a decision. "All right, all we have to do is distract the guys downstairs, make the call, and wait for the cops. I'm sure we could at least live through that right?"

"Can't we just use a house phone Ari?" Jace asked, not looking forward to going after the 'house guests'

"Sorry Jace, but the landlines don't get turned on until tomorrow, so we have to go grab my cell phone." Ariana dragged an unsure Jace to her brother's room and grabbed his old baseball bat, and handed it to Jace, but not before grabbing an old, heavy lamp out of the spare room and motioning for Jace to follow her to the kitchen. Both snuck in through the back entrance of the kitchen and hid behind the counter, which was steps away from the suspicious characters and unfortunately, Ari's phone. Both teens tuned in what was being said.

"... so anyways, until we know what happened, I think we should all just try to get along. Let's see if we can find the people who live her and figure things out from there." There was a murmur of agreement through the small group, as everyone started to split into groups to search the house.

"This is perfect Jace!" Ariana whispered. "Once everyone leaves, I'll grab the phone and we can get the cops up here."

"So I won't have to bash someones head in with a bat?" Jace replied, his voice not quite quiet enough to avoid notice.

"...There is someone here." The small redhead in the group said suddenly, startling the group to silence and freezing the hiding teens in place.


Tada! Done again! I'm a little bit more proud of this one! Hope you enjoyed it, but if not, I don't care! Reading is appreciated, reviews are to, but are purely optional and not going to influence what I do. Onto redoing chapter 2 xD Although it won't be out for awhile... Byeeee