Max's POV
I was in a room.
And it was white.
I didn't know why but the smell of the room and the fact that it was white made me scared ... VERY scared and uncomfortable.
Then I noticed this hot guy dressed in black and asked him "were am I ?"
And instead of a deep male voice I heard a girl voice and noticed her on my other side she was rambling:
"MAX You're finally up it's been ONE week since you've been in a comma
we were SO scared I mean look at me I barely eaten since I heard you were in
a comma I think I lost like five pounds which is a lot for us I mean since we need
3,000 calories oh and then there's angel who has been like biting her nails the WHOLE time
I mean they are WAY past stubs I'm surprised she hasn't bitten her finger off yet which she could probably do since shes like super girl or something".
Then she FINALLY took a breath and I was even more confused like who were these people? Who was this Max person? And my first one (which still hadn't been answered might i say)
were am I? So then I asked again to the guy in black, AGAIN
"Were am I? And I don't know who this Max person is but I assure you it's not me ".
"Hospital, you're in a hospital "said the guy in black, I noticed he had a very manly voice.
"Oh" was all I could say I mean how had I gotten here anyway ....... not by magic I'm sure.
But then I noticed someone new in the room; she had blonde hair and blue eyes and something about her, I don't know
what it was maybe because she was younger than the other 2 people. Also I had a feeling her name was: Angel. Then as I thought that she said
"well can I please borrow these 2 for a second " she grimaced when she said and had a look of total sadness like when a family member of yours dies; I also noticed that when she pointed at the boy and girl that , that the girl in purple was right her finger nails were WAY past stubs .
"sure you can sweetheart, hey is your name angel by any chance?" i knew i shouldnt have asked but i had to
"yes it is" she replied with a fake smile.... i wonder why....
after they had left i got a HUGE headache and i mean HUGE so i went back to sleep
So what do you think ? worthy of a review?