Hey guys this is my first FanFic, so I hope you like it. If it seems that I stole a plot from you, I'm sorry about that. I wasn't trying to. Anyway, here's chapter 1.
Disclaimer: I do not own Max Ride.
CHAPTER 1
-Max POV-
I flapped clumsily, struggling through the air, while trying to keep from fainting due to blood loss and fatigue. I badly wanted to see my flock and make sure they're all okay, but I knew they cou8ldn't see me like this. I was the leader. I needed to be strong, but right now, I was weak, hungry, and in pain.
No, the flock couldn't see me like this. I needed to rest up and heal both my emotional and physical pains before I saw them for the first time in over 2 years.
I made one of those split decisions that always make the flock feel better, but since the flock wasn't there, it made me feel better. I was going to Ella's house to recuperate. I looked to the ground and recognized Ella's house down below me.
I guess I had already subconsciously decided to go here. What do you think, Voice? This might surprise you, but my Voice didn't answer. I shook my head and slowly began to descend towards the ground.
When my feet touched the ground, I almost fell because my legs were so wobbly. I swayed and tottered to the front door knowing I would pass out soon. I knocked on the door and heard shuffling inside, before the door opened and Dr. Martinez stood in the doorway.
Her eyes widened as she looked at me covered in the dried blood and open cuts that were still bleeding. "Max! Did something happen? Are you alright? Are you alone?" she asked quickly.
"Need…..help….." I gasped before my world went black.
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