ok people im kindof on the new side and i still need to do some work on my detail and my writing style.
funny how when you write you can always think of things perfectly in your mind but when it comes to jotting it down it starts getting complicated. i know its short but then again this is the first chapter. i will try to complete the chronicles and try to update as soon as i possibly can... by the way... this will be a humer adventure thing... maybe a little romance
i dont know...
all i ask is that you as a reader review my story and tell me if i need improvement or if its good in content. do not be too harsh on me.
and now for chapter 1-
Prince with a thousand enemies
" All the world will be your enemy, Prince with a thousand enemies, and when they catch you...they will kill you...but first they must catch you. Prince with a swift warning... be cunning and full of tricks... and your people will never be destroyed."
the scene continued to play in his mind... over and over and over... why did he ask them that? he thought. what was he trying to say? to prove?
it kept on playing in his head as he tried to comfert his crazed robot.
that one scence... that one thing that let him know the truth.
"can i ask you one last thing? it wont hurt i promise..." said zim to his screen glitching into static as he talked. His fist hurt from the glass.
"what was zim to you?" he asked, his voice tired and sad. He could hear Gir crying in the background. "master." he heard the little robot cry.
"you are a defect, you always have and always been a defect. thats all you are to us, scince the academy and since your birth." said the crimson tallest, his companion and counterpart staying in silence as he spoke.
"and your a machine." said Zim laughing slightly.
"what?" asked the violet tallest, finally speaking up.
"feelings pass right through you don't they? so cold and unforgiving in every choice you made. pure machine and soldier... i think thats what let us trust you... maybe-"
the crimson one rose his hand. " thats enough defect. stop trying to gain our aproval. you can't-"
"i don't need it." said zim shocking the crimson one. No one ever interrupted him.
Zim then started laughing. he had finally seen through it all. all the world was his enemy... he was alone... and they were machines... no... not like him...
" i don't need it. i need you to be strong. strong enough to do the one thing you have never done in your life...can you be strong enough to be?" zim sobbed at his last question before he ended the tansmission.
"can you just be human?"
zim smiled as he remembered.
then it dawned him... what do defects have that those machines didnt have?
the answer was simple... freedom...
war was declared.
and he will make them pay.